a very good beginning and introduction of VRMMORPG concept, writing style is good very easy to comprehend, can't wait for Lucent's journey. super excited.
a very promising start, it hooked me from the very first chapter, concept is very good, I like the flow of conversation between characters, 10/10
intresting!! concept is very good and with those small details you can feel that the world is alive, got me hooked on the chapter one, can't wait to read more.
it's amazing 10/10 recommend, i loved the introduction of your plot it started as fun and games and now suddenly he became master, whats more intresting is writing style it's impressive, keep it up.
Hey everyone, Author here! I hope you're enjoying Ren's adventure so far. Feel free to share your feedback - it'll help me improve and make the story even better!
this is so interesting, please do continue to update, everything is just perfect, i like the magic and sci fi genre combination also, can't wait to see how will this unfold.
read the first chapter, i like the premise of the story.
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original Crown Of Ruin
Banished from his kingdom after being falsely accused of murder, Marvin Lacoste, the youngest prince of the Lacoste family, finds himself exiled to a ruined territory, Once a carefree noble with no interest in politics or power, Marvin is thrust into a harsh reality where betrayal, manipulation, and misfortune seem to follow him at every turn. As he sits in the crumbling remains of his so-called mansion, haunted by the weight of his banishment and the disdain of his father, a mysterious system awakens within him. This unexpected power offers Marvin a chance to rebuild his life, uncover the truth behind his downfall, and reclaim his place in a world that cast him aside. Armed with grit, defiance, and the spark of a system he barely understands, Marvin vows to rise from the ruins and prove his worth—not as a prince, but as the master of his own destiny.7 Chs 8 お気に入り
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A Geek’s Guide to Another World
Ren was just your typical indoors-loving geek, surviving the blazing heat by avoiding the outside world at all costs. A lifelong fan of fantasy books and every cliché anime trope in existence, he thought he’d seen it all—until one impulsive chase after a thieving delivery guy sends his life spiraling into the unknown. After a sudden encounter with a speeding bicycle and an even faster blackout, Ren wakes up in the presence of a goddess who seems a little too eager to send him off to a brand-new world. With all his genre-savvy knowledge in tow, Ren’s about to find out that sometimes the journey to an extraordinary life starts in the most unexpected way.38 Chs 7 お気に入り
first of all this is amazing, I like the plot and how it is moving so smoothly, those small details really keep the story alive and yes writing style is top notch you can easily connect with characters, how they are feeling at that moment fear, anxious, it's beautifully captured by the author, i loved it please update more xD it's 10/10 all together.
Spectral Showdown
Fantasy · Kirigaya_Satou