/ Fantasy / BOOK OF HIRUKO
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In a world where magic and mystery reign, human greed and selfishness have perverted the arcane, transcending human limits; a dark future looms. The gods, offended by this affront to the natural order, have decided to unleash their wrath through the Ancestor, an omnipotent being destined to overturn the reign of the living.
The Ancestor sent the Draugr to punish human existence. These fearsome phytomorphic creatures sow death in their wake. As chaos ensued and humanity teetered on the brink of annihilation, an alliance was formed to confront the threat. The 11 states joined forces to eradicate the Draugr and restore peace. These champions possessed a mastery of arcane magic and were prepared to do whatever it took. That is, until one day, they learned of a discovery...
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I like the story, just that we have to continue these long chapters and give us a good lore like Attack on Titan and Full Metal et j’aime bien Arima
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This book is incredible, I discovered it while browsing the app and it's promising. 👌🏽
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
Definitely an intriguing story, the plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. Will keep reading.
I like this book, especially the personal development of each character and the way the author links events together.
The book is very good. The Grammer, the plot and the settings seem to create a spark. Good work author
very interesting book with easy to understand description, the character Arima is something else though, nice one author keep up the good work
Nice book. The author seems to write it like a play when the characters talk. A nice fantasy of magic. The characters are relatable. Good one. Keep it up author.
I like the concept and world building of your story. You explain it in detail. I also like how the setting of your story, I remember the anime Ajin. But I have some inputs, namely you can tidy up your writing paragraphs, and also maybe you can use the symbol (") for dialogues, not using (-) because it is very rarely used in novels.
Well, as a matter of fact, I loved this book, My mind is too open to understand who's who (characters talking) and I loved different writing types, now i need the spoilers for the ending whisper it 😏 just kidding.
I love that your chapters are always long but I think it lacks vivid scenes it has amazing world building and characters but maybe some scenes could be more vivid. I like the pacing too. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
a very promising start, it hooked me from the very first chapter, concept is very good, I like the flow of conversation between characters, 10/10
This book is really interesting, it has an interesting plot line and theme, the characters development is relatable and captivating. I really recommend this book
j’ai aimé le personnage d’Arima Tenbatsu et surtout son duo avec le colonel ,l’histoire est intéressante et a de l’intrigue de plus en plus on continue à lire le livre , je vous le consei4
A good story overall with an interesting plot. I’m definitely adding it to my collection . Keep it up
if you are looking for a story that will capture your interest in the very first chapter here's your go to reach.
I like the way the dialogs are specified and how they conveyed it was amazing good its just the change in language confuses me but everything else was nice the world background need a lil more detailing over all it was a nice concept
The book has long chapters, as I like them and it takes into account the small details, the author has everything to be one of the best
Casper is my favorite character 😃 hahahaha