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it is easy to read and good writing and elaboration of original works, I read it in 2 days, dude, keep writing! for a person who knows nothing about anything else from the series, besides.

I've been writing since chapter 38 came out. The main character himself is a little flat, I hope for the future development of personality and his physical qualities, I would like a little more non-standard skills in devouring or their more interesting application, the tongue of a frog that pierces does not always need to be used as a spear in attack, it can tear ligaments, or wound the connecting places of the limbs, it is interesting to see how it will be react on the surface and I would like to see more different changes in his body, according to the type of chitin armor that should be as soon as he eats the ant. I wonder what skills to choose from from killing Goliath on the 17th floor, according to the narrative itself everything is fine, we are waiting for new chapters

Firstly, English is not my native language, so forgive me for my grammar, I really like this title, firstly, the flight of the author's imagination and a place where he can roam as an author in a review of different games and how they will affect the masses, I hope that the author will not abandon this story and continue the same frequent updates as for building the world, it's quite well thought out, I think there will be too much more disclosure, I would like to see more chapters, but I can't do anything about it, I hope this title remains the freshest and most interesting to read on this site

I think it is necessary to diversify the scenes more specifically of his increased luck, because there are a lot of novels where the characters get this or that power and they are no longer so interesting to watch, but here is an unusual concept and you need to reveal it more strongly, by the nature of the character it is not clear what actions he adheres to and I would like not an explanation of his character but his manifestations in actions, but this can be corrected by a large number of chapters, in general a good novel, I want the basic concept to be used more often and more strongly