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In a stitched-together world of episodic American TV dramas, we are invited to step into the protagonist's shoes and rescue characters who were unceremoniously written off. The aim is to rationally amend the absurd plot twists concocted by capricious screenwriters. This includes, but is not limited to, shows such as The Rookie, Castle, and Hunter. Future additions may encompass Person of Interest, Knight Rider, Bones, and even various police-themed movies. Excluding the protagonist's "System", there are no supernatural elements. All cases and narratives serve the novel's storyline, with some creative modifications. Readers are advised not to take these changes too seriously.
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ive read enough to say this is probably the best adaptation of a chinese fanfic i have ever seen. While it does still have the smell of MTL it has none of the repugnant nature or bad dialog and translation. Not only that the story is fun and cool and the world seem realistic characters have personality and overall i just want to read more. Thier are somethings that the author misses about us police byt none of it is really that bad. Like that most cops buy and carry thier own tourniquet no adays. So no need to use a belt. Really want u to keep this up and please keep the quality this good i will read every chapter.
I hope this won’t stop like the others novels author plc finishe this amazing book 🙏🙏🙏🙏❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🤭
I don't understand why there are such low reviews. The story is very interesting, the author is obviously familiar with many American TV series, and the main character's character is normal. The influence of the system is not that big, the system does not make the main character super strong.
I am absolutely in love with this book and I hope it will be updated soon.the storyline is great but I think bailey and john are soulmates I love Ali larter and her character but john and bailey are endgame I mean they did get married.
It's really good. I just personally have a dislike for Harems so I don't plan on continuing this. If this didn't have harem, I would've rated 5 stars.
Its a good read and i like detective novels as well... One good thing is for MC to change Zoe Anderson's fate of death, so there is that...
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it is easy to read and good writing and elaboration of original works, I read it in 2 days, dude, keep writing! for a person who knows nothing about anything else from the series, besides.
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Pretty good for what i think is a translation. No nationalism. Cool mc good crossover storylines that dont seem forced. While thier are some that i found boring they are very few and ended quik. All in all i would say this is one of the best and least annoying chinese novels as the characters actually feel somewhat american.
es una buena novela, tiene ese toque de novela china que álava mucho el nacionalismo chino, pero no es tan exagerado para ser insoportable
This is straight google translation of this novel: 美剧世界：从洛城巡警开始 I really like it for now, so I give all five stars except translation I just can't place more than one star for copy-paste quality. It's interesting story, MC is not too OP unlike many other stories. He os OP, but up to 250+ chapters not crazy powerful. For now at least there is a Harem but, it's not too big for now. There is only three girls and one in maybe category. Two outta three girls actually officially married to each other and they keep it secret that he is with them. Oficially he have only one girlfriend. Author don't present MC as know it all and perfectly remember all TV-Shows, so far most characters that got screen time are from tv-shows. On side NOTE: But because this is mechanical translation and Author does not present characters from outside perspective of who they are and from which Tv- Show. MC did not recognize from where his girlfriend from, but reading this story and introduced characters she must be from some show. Does anyone know from where she is?