Vandumbo

Vandumbo

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A knight from the kingdom of France who had left Webnovel in search of better stories. And came back. Cuz' I'm dumb.

2020-12-30 入りました Global
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Vandumbo
Vandumbo
2 years ago
Replied to Cursed_sin

It's a joke about the time he has, as he has the time stop of The World

The man, seeing Lee going to end his career, joined his hands together and went on his knees. "Please young man, it's my third time failing the test. You are too young already. Let me pass this time. You have all of the time in the world."

In MHA with Star Platinum

In MHA with Star Platinum

Anime & Comics · blazuki

Vandumbo
Vandumbo
2 years ago
Replied to 0_Jordinio_0

Jordi', I ask because I would like to see it and I see you well doing it (sorry if I sound like the thousands of ungrateful readers already present on wbnvl), but will you make a fic' on Overlord?

'Guess I gotta look into finding the Stone of Gelel.' he mused.

Naruto: Systematic Shinobi

Naruto: Systematic Shinobi

Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0

Vandumbo
Vandumbo
2 years ago
Replied to Vandumbo

Good new, Chaotic good is back

To just let him work in silence, and just simply leave him be.

Overlord: The Origin

Overlord: The Origin

Anime & Comics · Evrabonzz

Vandumbo
Vandumbo
2 years ago
Replied to Vince_Gregorie

TYPE MOON, or Fate if you prefer, more precisely Fate Grand Order, if you want to find the wiki page of the character, just type Beast III L, and you've got it

Vandumbo
Vandumbo
Vandumbo
2 years ago
Commented

Okay, I'm almost sur this is Chinese

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Vandumbo
Vandumbo
2 years ago
Replied to Vandumbo

(that's why people re-write) I wanted to say

Vandumbo
Vandumbo
2 years ago
Commented

"I sent some humans to the plane and all of them died, hahaha." this sentence... I guess the goal is to show what kind of moral the MC has, but... it's a bit (a lot) clumsy. . . The "hahaha" at the end is making it worse, from another POV, MC would just look like 'evil scientist A' doing evil experiments because he is evil. If I had to give you a tip, I would recommand you to read "Annihilation Maker" the DxD fic, just look at how Leo is introduced (you don't need to read until the point were his backstory is explained, it's kind of long), he is evil aligned (and goddawn worthy of it), he consider himself a magus (from Fate, and in this serie the majority of them are the worst of human scum, who would subject even their descendance to the most cruel experimentations to achieve ultimate goal of reaching the root), and yet a loveable character.

Ok, we got sidetracked, this woman is scary in a cute way, and she doesn't mind experimenting on humans. I don't have any problems with that since I have done it, I sent some humans to the plane and all of them died, hahaha.

Electro Archon in DxD

Electro Archon in DxD

Anime & Comics · MuCoffee

Vandumbo
Vandumbo
2 years ago
Commented

You put a picture of Vitch as the cover, so I dare hope to see her.

First of all this story will be harem but it will have a max of 4 women, and I have already chosen them and for people who wanted sona, rias, akeno, serafall, sry they will not be part of the harem.

Electro Archon in DxD

Electro Archon in DxD

Anime & Comics · MuCoffee

Vandumbo
Vandumbo
2 years ago
Commented

Have you seen the new Beast from FGO/Arcade? The new Nero?

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