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Waking up in the body of a standard Genin, a village invasion on the horizon and a count down until to a full out apocalypse only a few years away, what's a lad to do? There was only one thing he could do, cheat. Thankfully, this game system that instigated all of this in the first place, was quite helpful in that regard. Gamer Insert.
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Here we go boys, here we fucking go! I finally sold out and started a System story. Let's see if I can actually make it be something worth reading instead of a pile of crap. And if not, come lambast me for it!
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
this book is good, not that bad, but knowing this will be dropped a few days later on saddens me, i mean that's what the author does to his other books but i wish he'll finish this book, that would be quite an achievement for him since i have seen that his books doesn't have any completed in one of them, you guys should check out his other books, but i doubt you'll like it since they're dropped, or maybe he just got mindblocked idk, still i wish for this book to be completed, that's all thanks
First of all, this is my personal viewpoint of this fanfic and is not a downright hate review. The story started of good and was quite fun to read at first, however the quality has dropped significantly ever since the Chunin exam arc (that has been stretched for way to long). One strength of this was that there were new ideas that had been utilised (A different Kekai Genkai instead of the usual Sharingan and 'sage body') instead of the oversaturated cliches that are common in Naruto fanfics. The Mc who despite his flaws was tolerable to read now acts like an aloof idiot at every moment. Whereas the conversations feel awkward to read and sometimes are just downright weird. In conclusion this started of good but fell in quality. I'll be back in 6 months and give my final review then.
This book was originally a one piece fanfiction but its now made the transition into a Naruto one so the current reviews for the most part are not accurate. This fanficition if completed (currently on chapter 18) will easily be one of the top 5 best naruto fanfictions on Webnovel, I have extremely high hopes and I hope the author fulfils it :))
The fanfic offers a refreshing start with its descriptive writing, which is both easy to read and infused with a unique personality. The narrative quickly distinguishes itself from most others in the genre, drawing readers in with its vivid imagery and engaging prose. The inclusion of a "System" is handled with a delicate touch, providing a numerical gauge of the main character's strength without overwhelming the story. This lightweight approach keeps the focus on the character's journey rather than getting bogged down in mechanics. The initial arc is nothing short of captivating. It showcases the main character's tenacity and strategic thinking as he navigates the challenges of being a low-ranked Genin. This period of intense effort and risk-taking lays a solid foundation for his growth, making his subsequent rise in power both believable and rewarding. The second arc serves as a powerful motivator, setting the stage for even greater achievements in the third arc. However, the story's momentum falters dramatically during the Chunin Exams. This arc, which dominates nearly half of the narrative, undermines the main character's likability, dilutes the side characters' development, and disrupts the pacing. Initially, the main character's personality is a highlight of the story. His modest arrogance and relentless work ethic make him relatable and compelling. The mantra of "grind" becomes a defining trait, adding depth to both the character and the plot. Yet, as he gains more power, his arrogance spirals out of control, and his condescension towards others becomes grating. The anticipated humbling moment, where his flaws are addressed and his character matures, never arrives. Instead, he remains insufferably arrogant despite his relatively modest achievements on a grand scale. The side-cast is introduced with commendable depth and originality, deviating from typical fanfic portrayals without straying out of character. This well-rounded characterization, coupled with sharp dialogue, enriches the interactions between the main character and others. These interactions feel genuine, giving the impression that the side characters have lives and motivations of their own. Sadly, the Chunin Exams reduce these vibrant characters to mere spectators, stripping away their earlier complexity and relegating them to passive roles. The battles are another early strength of the story. They are fluid, well-structured, and showcase creative uses of jutsu, particularly the main character's signature techniques. However, the Chunin Exams mark a turning point where the main character's fights become predictably one-sided and devoid of tension. His overpowered nature, coupled with narrative constraints that prevent him from acting out fully, leads to a series of monotonous and uninspiring conflicts. A significant downside, present from the beginning but worsening over time, is the main character's interactions with female characters. His pervasive flirting and vulgar descriptions of their bodies quickly become tiresome. This behavior escalates into outright sexual harassment, eroding the personalities of the women in the story. Additionally, his antagonism towards every male character further detracts from his supposed hard-working mentality, making him appear more like a lust-driven predator than a dedicated ninja. This flaw, like his arrogance, is never resolved. Overall, the fanfic starts strong with a well-thought-out plot and engaging characters, but it takes an abysmal dive during the Chunin Exams arc. This pivotal section of the story introduces a host of flaws that gradually erode its initial charm, leaving an empty husk of what once held great promise. The best approach to reading this is to enjoy it up to the beginning of the Chunin Exam Arc and then imagine it concludes there. It's a disappointing turn of events, as the author initially displayed a rare talent for fanfic writing, only to let it be marred by poor execution in later chapters.
The best system strory in this site, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop
Thank you author for the excellent novel! 1- World scenery (5 stars) 2- Strength of the protagonist (5 stars), he gradually grows as he continues his journey, this part is very important in naruto fanfic. Why? I can't read something like a 12 year old protagonist with the strength of a Kage.... Shiruzen has 50 years to reach his peak... so imagining protagonists reaching that even with kage bushin loses interest. 3- Author's Writing (5 stars) 4- Protagonist mentality (5 stars) not arrogant, knows where to train and ask for help. Smart, but knows he still has a lot to grow. 5 - Updates of the novel (5 stars) today there were at least 2 chapters. Even 1 a day is very good! Have a good day! Author- san
One of, if not the best one piece fan fiction on the site even though were only four chapter in it has already striked my fancy. I sure do hate the 140 Word requirement
Someone tell me if it's worth reading on, because I see in the chapters that "the chunin exams" is already in part 62 of that arc and I don't think even in the anime it took that long.
very good, very good writing, very good story, very good /fast/stable updates. PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP
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Another masterpiece by the masterpiece master grandmaster of masterly masterpieces. Also known as the blueball edging novel drop masta. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
a VERY good Naruto fanfic with an intelligent Mc 🧠 who REALLY uses all his knowledge of the original work to gain advantages so far I've only read 8 chapters but it's very promising so I invite you to check it out and to the read👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Bruv...update yeah...don't be moving discombobulated and all that yeah...update!!!!!!!!!?!!!👌👌👌👌👌👌🤕🤕🤠👌👌👌🤠🤠👌🤠🤕😶😶😶😶😶😶😶
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Fk this Author, another masterpiece then dropping it. did you Drop the pokemon Fanfic?? 🙄🙄🙄🙄[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I hate this, the author is going to make another masterpiece, and then abandon it at 30 chapters to make another masterpiece Anyway, 5/5, best thing i ever read, like always