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The life of a young man who found himself in a new world with a Stand. Making his decision, he decides to enjoy his adventure in this new world of super heroes and villains.
(Warning, some Ecchi is contained here)
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I seriously don't know why it has such a high rating writing quality is better than mediocre. I seriously don't like the personality of MC don't get me wrong but it seems like he is trying to forcefully act cool. and some things mentioned in the story don't match how the things should be in MHA
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Story has great potential ..... I just hope author doesn't drop this... & it would be great to give mc some motivation not just make him a guy with power to just live alone
Kinda scummy Mc who when he cheats on his girlfriend he just continued and said "in only human" 0 remorse and conveniently had his gf decide to share him for basically a bs reason, other stuff is pretty food tho
writing quality- for me ok story development- like every other mha fanfic with some si opinion character development- didn't see any for now update stability- good world background- mha I don't like mc ( I drop cuz of his character,actions and opinion cya)
The story is good, anything with a JoJo reference is always good in my book. Let alone an actual stand. Only problem is the grammar though. I have to dumb down my reading capabilities in order to even enjoy this. I literally have a headache after reading. *sigh* I hope one day, when the author gets good at writing in english, he/she will rework this fic. Or maybe get an editor/proofreader.
Friend I have a question, although your answer will not make me stop reading the novel I would love to know it (I hope it is positive cough cough) the protagonist will have something with his mother? I mean, look at her so alone agh a shame sniff sniff
The writing quality of this fanfic is pretty bad like you would probably get better grammar if you wrote it in your native language and then used google translate. There is an application called Grammarly that can help you with that. Also, the interactions between characters seem so awkward and forced. One of the most notable examples of this is the police scene which is terrible. Everything else is pretty meh. 3.8/5
the story is ok, but some felt forced. Portal guy for example, why did the mc killed him and threw him back to the portal. Most of the villains are cockroaches that just refused to die. Character design is good, I think this is a new idea. But character dev, (cmiiw) it's non-existent.And I don't like the way his mom hide things from him. Some description of characters were wrong. The jokes...ugh. i know this is a MHA fic with a bit of JoJo references. You can use jokes repeatedly but to much and it's cringe. Im pretty sure there's a Yare Yare Daze/Yare Yare/Good Grief in every chapter. The grammar oh Lord. I finished the fic and there are still mistakes at the end. Come on author, proof read, use grammarly or something, anything for the love of God. All the best for author. I hope he'll improve on his new fan-fic and good luck to him
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Y’know honestly I kinda forgot that there were only 5 chpaters so I was really sad when I finished it. Anyways Its pretty good so far I have no major complaints, and the only complaints I have are negible, and can be ignored. I love it
Julia needs to enter the harem! She is the best girl not because she is his mother but her character is the best and the Mc clearely loves her more than he should like how he is hunting Dabi while screaming 'My Julia' and when he scapes the mc is constantly thinking about killing him just because of a empty provocation that probably Davi didn't really think like that
Story is fine, start was good as well but, MC personality is a deal-breaker. Like he is super arrogant. Tries to forcefully act cool, act as if he is guilty for liking another woman when he already has girlfriend. Basically ;- MC Bad Story Good Harem Bad
Of all the fan fiction about MHA that I read on this site, this one can be considered the best. It has its drawbacks, but this is offset by the humor of the book, the quality, the number of chapters and the speed of updating. I will not describe the power of the main character, the plot of fan fiction, and so on. But if you are interested in MHA, you can safely add this fan fiction to the library. The author, did a good job on his fanfic, so this is not another copy of the anime. In fan fiction, there are author's characters, a storyline, and so on. R+18 and Harem, the author did not just throw them in our face, but adds them gradually, so that it does not look stupid, as in other fanfics, where everything is explained: Well, I specified the tag harem, what else do you want. For this respect, another thing for which you can praise the author is the number and quality of chapters. There are quite a lot of them, the author writes them more or less interesting, I have no desire to stop reading when I read 30 chapters without stopping. The number of symbols on the chapters is also OK. To the author familiar, what is the conscience and pride of being an author. It does not descend to the levels of some authors who sell their mothers for donate (GhostyZ). And that says a lot, gentlemen. For the above listed, I turn a blind eye to the shortcomings of fan fiction and give it 5 stars. Good luck to everyone, bye to everyone.
-Boring ability -MC act like a mix of edgelord, emo kid, tsundere, and Busybody (Devastating Combination). -Hmmmm, the writing is average, few typo here and there. normal. -His behaviour can be Impulsive with whatever reason that is convinent to involve him in some incident or event (Pretty average forced development type of behaviour).
𝕊𝕠𝕟𝕠 ℂ𝕙𝕚 ℕ𝕠 𝕊𝕒𝕕𝕒𝕞𝕖 (ᴊᴏᴊᴏ! ᴊᴏᴊᴏ! ᴊᴏᴊᴏ!) ꜱᴏʀᴀ! ᴋᴏʙᴏʀᴇᴏᴄʜɪᴛᴀ ꜰᴜᴛᴀᴛꜱᴜ ɴᴏ ʜᴏꜱʜɪ ɢᴀ ʜɪᴋᴀʀɪ ᴛᴏ ʏᴀᴍɪ ɴᴏ ᴍɪɴᴀᴍᴏ ꜱᴜɪᴋᴏᴍᴀʀᴇᴛᴇʏᴜᴋᴜ ʜɪᴋɪᴀᴜ ʏᴏᴍᴏ ɴɪ ᴋᴀꜱᴀɴᴀʀᴜ ʜᴀᴍᴏɴ ʜᴏᴋᴏʀɪ ɴᴏ ᴍɪᴄʜɪ ᴡᴏ ʏᴜᴋᴜ ᴍᴏɴᴏ ɴɪ ᴛᴀɪʏᴏᴜ ɴᴏ ᴍɪᴄʜɪʙɪᴋɪ ᴡᴏ ʏᴀʙᴏᴜ ɴᴏ ʜᴀᴛᴇ ᴡᴏ ᴍᴇᴢᴀꜱᴜ ᴍᴏɴᴏ ɴɪ ɪᴋᴇɴɪᴇ ᴡᴏ (ᴊᴏᴊᴏ! ᴊᴏᴊᴏ! ᴊᴏᴊᴏ! ᴊᴏᴊᴏ! ᴊᴏᴊᴏ!) ꜰᴜʀᴜᴇʀᴜ ʜᴏᴅᴏ ᴋᴏᴋᴏʀᴏ ᴍᴏᴇᴛꜱᴜᴋɪʀᴜ ʜᴏᴅᴏ ᴀᴛꜱᴜᴋᴜ ꜱᴏɴᴏ ᴛᴇ ᴋᴀʀᴀ ʜᴀɴᴀᴛᴇ ᴋᴏᴅᴏᴜ ᴋᴀʀᴀᴅᴀ ᴍɪɴᴀɢɪʀᴜ ʏᴜᴜᴋɪ ᴅᴇ ᴍᴀʏᴏᴜ ɴᴀᴋɪ ᴋᴀᴋᴜɢᴏ ɴɪ 'ᴋᴀꜱꜱᴀɪ' ᴡᴏ! ꜱᴏɴᴏ ᴄʜɪ ɴᴏ ꜱᴀᴅᴀᴍᴇ ᴊᴏᴊᴏ ꜱᴀɪ! ᴡᴀ ɴᴀɢᴇʀᴀʀᴇᴛᴀ ꜱᴜꜱᴜᴍᴜ ꜱʜɪᴋᴀ ɴᴀɪ ᴋɪᴍʏᴏᴜ ɴᴀ ʀᴀꜱᴇɴ ɴᴏ ɴᴀᴋᴀ ᴋᴏʀᴏɢᴀʀɪᴛꜱᴜᴢᴜᴋᴇʀᴜ ᴇɪᴇɴ ᴡᴏ ꜱᴀᴍᴀʏᴏᴜ ʙᴏᴜᴋᴇɴꜱʜᴀ ᴋʏᴏᴜꜰᴜ ᴡᴏ ᴍɪᴛᴏᴍᴇ ᴛᴀᴛꜱᴜ ᴍᴏɴᴏ ɴɪ ᴏᴜɢᴏɴ ɴᴏ ᴛᴀᴍᴀꜱʜɪɪ ᴡᴏ ꜱᴏꜱʜɪᴛᴇ ᴅᴇᴀᴛᴛᴀ ꜰᴜᴛᴀʀɪ ɴᴏ ᴛᴀᴍᴇ ɴɪ ᴛᴀᴛᴀᴋᴀɪ ᴡᴏ (ᴊᴏᴊᴏ! ᴊᴏᴊᴏ! ᴊᴏᴊᴏ! ᴊᴏᴊᴏ! ᴊᴏᴊᴏ!) ᴍᴀᴋᴜ ɢᴀ ᴀɪᴛᴀ ʏᴏᴜ ɴᴀ ᴏᴡᴀʀɪɴᴀᴋɪ ᴍᴏɴᴏɢᴀᴛᴀʀɪ ɪɴᴏᴄʜɪ ɢᴀ ʙᴜᴛꜱᴜᴋᴀʀᴜ ʜɪʙᴀɴᴀ ꜱᴇɪꜱʜᴜɴ ɴᴏ ʜɪʙɪ ᴡᴏ ᴛᴇʀᴀꜱᴇ ʏᴏ ᴋɪᴍɪ ᴛᴏ ɪᴜ ᴍɪʀᴀɪ ɴɪ 'ᴋᴏᴜᴜɴ' ᴡᴏ! ꜱᴏɴᴏ ᴄʜɪ ɴᴏ ꜱᴀᴅᴀᴍᴇ ᴊᴏᴊᴏ ɴɪᴅᴏᴛᴏ ʜᴏᴅᴏᴋᴇɴᴀɪ ᴋᴀʀᴀᴍɪᴀᴛᴛᴀ ꜱᴀᴅᴀᴍᴇ ꜱᴜʙᴇᴛᴇ ᴡᴀ ᴋᴏᴋᴏ ᴋᴀʀᴀ ʜᴀᴊɪᴍᴀᴛᴛᴇɪᴛᴀ ɴᴏ ꜱᴀ ꜰᴜʀᴜᴇʀᴜ ʜᴏᴅᴏ ᴋᴏᴋᴏʀᴏ ᴍᴏᴇᴛꜱᴜᴋɪʀᴜ ʜᴏᴅᴏ ᴀᴛꜱᴜᴋᴜ ꜱᴏɴᴏ ᴛᴇ ᴋᴀʀᴀ ʜᴀɴᴀᴛᴇ ᴋᴏᴅᴏᴜ ᴋᴀʀᴀᴅᴀ ᴍɪɴᴀɢɪʀᴜ ʏᴜᴜᴋɪ ᴅᴇ ᴍᴀʏᴏᴜ ɴᴀᴋɪ ᴋᴀᴋᴜɢᴏ ɴɪ 'ᴋᴀꜱꜱᴀɪ' ᴡᴏ! ᴍᴀᴋᴜ ɢᴀ ᴀɪᴛᴀ ʏᴏᴜ ɴᴀ ᴏᴡᴀʀɪɴᴀᴋɪ ᴍᴏɴᴏɢᴀᴛᴀʀɪ ɪɴᴏᴄʜɪ ɢᴀ ʙᴜᴛꜱᴜᴋᴀʀᴜ ʜɪʙᴀɴᴀ ꜱᴇɪꜱʜᴜɴ ɴᴏ ʜɪʙɪ ᴡᴏ ᴛᴇʀᴀꜱᴇ ʏᴏ ᴋɪᴍɪ ᴛᴏ ɪᴜ ᴍɪʀᴀɪ ɴɪ 'ᴋᴏᴜᴜɴ' ᴡᴏ! ꜱᴏɴᴏ ᴄʜɪ ɴᴏ ꜱᴀᴅᴀᴍᴇ ᴊᴏᴊᴏ (ᴊᴏᴊᴏ! ᴊᴏᴊᴏ! ᴊᴏᴊᴏ! ᴊᴏᴊᴏ! ᴊᴏᴊᴏ!)
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