概要
Axel, a struggling novelist, stumbles upon an otherworldly online writing tool promising an unprecedented level of realism for storytelling.
Interested, he hurriedly signs up without reading into the terms and conditions.
Ready to breathe life into his almost-finished novel, Axel excitedly imports his work into the platform shortly before drifting off to sleep.
To his surprise, Axel awakens as an unnamed character within the very world he once wrote.
Shortly after his arrival, he was given a system that officially entwined his destiny with that of the novel he created.
Projection of chapters: 900 - 1000 chapters
Releases for chapters are scheduled at midnight - early morning AEDT time.
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Hello Readers! This is my final shameless review of my novel. For those wondering if this is inspired by TNE (The Novel's Extra), it is. Yes, I know that the characters of Rel and Kim Hajin are quite similar, but each has a unique personality in their respective ways. I hope that when you read this novel, you don't view it as a TNE extra spin-off but as the standalone work it was intended to be. My writing can be very descriptive and chunky at times, especially in the early stages since I was so trashy at writing but I can promise you as readers that my writing improves over time. So, if things don't sound right initially, it's just my way of putting things poorly. I also tend to go back and fix chapters in my free time, given my rather busy schedule :D Anyways, I do plan on finishing this novel. I have numerous plots and settings to explore. I think I'm only 1% of the way through as I write this, and this webnovel will take more than a few years to complete. So, please enjoy this reading journey, and feel free to express your frustrations with me, it's all part of the love I receive from you readers. also, another thing I wanted to address was after getting contracted, I just wanted to thank all of you who made this all possible I genuinely appreciate every comment and review that helped achieve this goal of mine and I'll return all of it through writing this story! It shows that the effort I put in is paying off. Also, I'm aware that people have complained about Rel being insanely weak early in the novel, and you're probably right. It was bad writing on my part, and for that, I deeply apologize! But bear with me, he will eventually live up to the expectations of a true MC!!! Happy reading! Zowji~
love the tournament arc so far. if someone doesn’t lock this author into a basement and force them to write 5 chapters a day then i will.
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It's not a bad novel, but it's clear that it's very similar to the rest. It's a hater gets transmigrated to the hatee's novel where he has to survive in an academy. Now there's already a problem with this novel, it's too similar compared in a the span of this platform. Even the character dynamics I'd argue is very similar to a lot of novels. There's this one kid who came from out of a blue, but is already the strongest out of them all. One girl who's a princess. Another kid who's a novel but is a rival. And then there's the mc, who wants to be an extra, in order maintain the balance of the novel. I'm not arguing that this is a terrible trope or dynamic but I think there could be more to it. However, I do really like the homogenous mixture of writing quality, and story development that propels this novel forward, making it be an enjoyable read.
oh my gosh honestly I am so surprised, this is so well written in the first POV. Which I know can be hard to write. I got so excited about the first chapters. eeeeee ;)
I dropped it as of ch 8, for mc he is ehhh, he became super polite to the system, he kinda lacking right now and that could be for story development. but for the writing quality it goes back and forth between point of views its confusing. you have to read a bit of the paragraphs to understand who is talking. because author you use I from mc point of view then you use it to describe the secondary point of view and you change mid chapter. anyway the premise was coll set up, execution could be better imo, but yes creation is hard so if you maybe fix the back and forth pov maybe I could of read a little more.
Overall it's really good, though it seems to be heavily inspired by Novel's Extra. Hope It could deviate from that and truly become a masterpiece it deserves to be. It's been a long time since I've been so heavily hooked up to something. Writing style is exemplary but the side characters need a little work. Overall it's got great potential if handled carefully.
I've read l and doesn't flow nicely. It has the author's narrators voice mixed with clear chat gpt usage to the extent that it hurts the writing. I honestly find MTL a much better reading experience. I'm sorry but this is my honest thoughts.
This is a master piece in the works! It has everything that I would want in a novel!! Wonderfull story developmentand World Building! Top teir Writing Quality!! And Satisfactory Updates!! It is one of the beat gems through and through!! Great Job Author!! Though I've been noticing some inconsistent updates here ans there. Author, please remember that it is fine to stop updating for awhile and come backw ith higher quality chapters!! I only request for longr chapters as well. All in All Great Novel Author!! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
This book is very interesting and original! I have not read a plot like this one, which is based on a system design, so I would like to keep reading! I like the humor element and character development! It is an easy read so I would recommend you to check it out!
the start is really good as we see the slight glimpse of the MC previous life before he fells into the Novel world. Although there aren't many chapters, I still wrote a review cheering Author for his work and hope he give his all considering this novel has a lot of potential.
its another one of those novels where the original mc is just better. Author should have just written the book the transmigrstion is focused on. our current main character is just boring. everyone else always gets the credit and the whole standard of hiding power. not to mention its the original MC that gets the cool power ups. All in all its just another run of the mill copy paste author transmigration novels with nothing that sets it apart.
Really good novel.This is the first one i have reviewed due to how good it is. js wish either longer chps or more chps over all very good good job author. 😃 (excited for valencia vs. rel)
I've only read a few chapters but I can tell this novel will be of high caliber. The writing is descriptive. Though there are mistakes that made me slightly unable to comprehend the paragraphs without another look, it is fixable. The main character isn't really that interesting. But since it's a plot-driven novel, it's easy to brush it off. I will continue to read later on. For now, good night.
I have to say, this author has a way with words. I loved the transition between scenes. It made me want to read more. I am excited for more. Keep up the good work.
this is definitely a masterpiece in the work and eh,it's still a 5 in every category either way