Attention: I originally wrote this review in Spanish so you may find some inconsistencies and spelling mistakes. To be honest, it's a pretty good work, although it's true that the development of the protagonist can be a bit "emo" at the beginning, it's understandable because of the context/story of the MC, even so his personality develops and improves until he manages to open up to Irina for the first time. The development of the protagonist's power seems perfect to me, neither too slow nor too fast. I like how the author develops the emotions of the MC and the secondary characters, giving them a very pleasant and unforced touch. The power system is not the typical one so that's a plus. The secondary characters, despite not being perfect in development, have their history, traumas, tastes and personalities and we get to know more about them as the chapters go by. It is possible that some people find the beginning a bit tedious, but I totally recommend reading the work, it is much better than most of the works you can currently find on Webnovel. ps: Author, I beg you not to abandon the novel even if some liars and inexperienced people criticize the novel (I recommend you pin my message, it is a very good and realistic opinion).
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Well, I am writing this review having 30 caps published, to begin with the progress could be that it is slow but sure which means that it is laying the foundations, the protagonist despite being 15 years old demonstrates a determined mentality, the power system is not very innovative but it also doesn't make the MC instantly OP. I can't say almost anything about secondary characters because they're all dead Even so, knowing who the author is, I know that he will develop a good work and maybe with luck it will succeed just like his previous work.
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original Author's Abyss
Information: I have re-uploaded the novel in order to participate in the WSA webnovel contest. Sinopsis: Alex, a young 20-year-old writer, has lived a life marked by tragedy. The tragic loss of his parents left him an orphan, plunging him into an endless abyss of pain and loneliness. In the orphanage, he suffered physical and emotional abuse from his peers, forging an emotional shell to survive. In an unforgiving world, writing became his refuge. In his stories, he created an evolved fantasy universe, tinged with magic, supernatural powers and unfathomable mysteries. One night, as he battled insomnia and reviewed his work, a devastating critique questioned his ability as a writer. Each discouraging word stabbed like a dagger, and a chilling whisper seemed to speak his name. In a fleeting blink, his consciousness reeled and he found himself in an unfamiliar place, trapped in a foreign body. In this new world, where magic is tangible and supernatural powers are real, Alex faces surprise and confusion as he realises he has transmigrated into his own novel. Now, he lives among the very words he once created, but this time as part of a story beyond his control. As he navigates this alien world, Alex discovers that the challenges and conflicts he faces reflect his own inner demons. Will he be able to save this world from a tragic fate, or will he sink further into his emotional abyss?9 Chs 14 お気に入り
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