/ Anime & Comics / Naruto: You Call This A Medical Ninja?
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**Synopsis:**
In the midst of the Ninja World War, a legend circulates: encounter the Yellow Flash, and you’re free to run; meet Konoha Shisui, and you can fight; but if a medical ninja asks if you’re sick, don’t hesitate—run and don’t look back! Enter Reiki, an ordinary medical ninja whose straightforwardness can spell trouble for anyone who crosses his path. If he says you're sick, you’re definitely in trouble...
This story has been translated by me. If you have any other stories you'd like translated, feel free to leave a comment!
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**Original Work:** [Link](https://www.fanmtl.com/novel/ke370872.html)
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If you can, please change the MC's name to a Japanese name so it's not confusing. [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
Hello Everyone, I changed the MC’s name to Reiki I might’ve missed some spots please also I had to go over chapter 12-14 please let me know if there is anything wrong there
Interesting story. However, the reason for such a low score is directly because of the story lack of progress. We see Danzo constantly trying to kill the MC and the MC doing f*ckall. At this point of the story I decided to drop it since it's obvious that the same point will recur being: Danzo attack, MC defend himself, Hokage meet Danzo, "It's your last warning, Danzo.", and everything restart from there. The translation work if good and the cheat nice but in the end it's nothing more than that.
It's not a bad story for a translation. But sadly, with the rate that kid gets everything , he would be way too much op . The biggest problem is the way mc reveals stuff so easily, and nobody questions him . Like the Thunder God jutsu or the incursio armour. Like people just accept it and move on . It gets pretty boring then .
Chinese fanfic, the quality is so low they are borderline courting death. The story has no tension with how OP the character are. Personally to the translator you might as well take the story and rewrite it. Take the bare bones of the original story and makes your own with a strong MC rather than an OP one. OP MC needs a well written story and I doubt the original book could done it.
The author doesn't even know what he's writing. It all makes no sense. If the author starts making a character panel, at least take 5 minutes to fix it and not just copy it.
like both story and translation is good but it (the translation) feels so choppie and missing pieces of story that its giving me a headache
Sinceramente es buena pero no me gusto y el hecho de que el MC fuera quien le dio la técnica dios del trueno volador cuando el ya claramente es un jounin me demuestra que el creador del fanfic sabe poco y nada de la historia , también está el hecho que a Minato no le parezca extraño que el MC tuviera a mano la técnica prohibida jajajaja
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Timeline's all over the place, Nawaki is older than Kakashi and died at the 2nd shinobi war. Even if let's say that nawaki didn't die, he should be way older than the mc, Nawaki should be around Minato's age or older.
The story is acceptable but it has so many holes that I believe most only continue to read because they want to see how his chest develops. His every excuse for getting something is the same. Incursio? Left to me by my parents Murasame? Left to me by my parents Flying Thunder God? Even if it is a forbidden technique, it was left to me by my parents. The only question that I have is: Who the fuck are his parents that people buy that crap? We're they secretly the Gods of Shinobi that were unknown to the public?
So, full of plot holes, weird logic, backtracking, weird Chinese logics, no effort to translate properly. Basically, the writer took a chinese fanfic, put it through a translator, did some grammar corrections and posted it. Then had the gall to ask for donations on patreon.
Nice so far I know this translate novel But need editing especially for name in Konoha village I don't care about name not important character in Chinese name.
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