Knight_Noctis

Knight_Noctis

male LV 4
2022-10-31 入りました Global
バッジ 4

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Knight_Noctis
1 hours ago
Commented

I'm glad that mc doesn't know much about the world and the plot. He can slowly experience and discover the world on his own terms . Most of the time , for this type of story, mc who knows everything will run around to save this and that . That becomes the whole storyline, and the story progression revolves around it.

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Knight_Noctis
4 hours ago
Commented

This is a little bit fast. Even though he has gotten inheritance of sasaki kojiro , this is way too fast. But I understand that with the template of sasaki kojiro, regardless of whether it is from fate or ROR , it still way op for the demon slayer world. However, I would suggest trying to remove the Chinese names and certain terms such as ' cultivators' . These things are really annoying

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Knight_Noctis
15 hours ago
Commented

Congrats on the 1M views. Thanks for the chapter

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Knight_Noctis
1 days ago
Commented

thanks for the chapter.

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Knight_Noctis
1 days ago
Posted

I've read till 74 chapters , right about now. Sadly, this story in terms of writing hasn't changed a lot. I had a lot of high expectations. But the story is written in terms of "cause and effect." The mc is basically doing this and this and as such, this is happening . It's just basically narration at this point . This isn't just written well

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Knight_Noctis
2 days ago
Commented

I feel like proper translation would be to remove all sorts of china influences in the story as it breaks the immersion of this parallel world experience

Because of the existence of Pokémon in this world, the learning content of school is not only Chinese, mathematics, science, foreign languages, but also Pokémon, which is also a main subject.

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Knight_Noctis
2 days ago
Commented

Sabrina*

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Knight_Noctis
3 days ago
Commented

Incredible arc man , Thanks for the chapter

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Knight_Noctis
6 days ago
Commented

so when's the next update ?