In my opinion, this version of your writing would have been fine. You coild just have added some reminiscing chapters that talked about what he experienced and things like flashbacks sikilar to how you added the memo of howard and maria stark in that video.
A few people in the crowd were in tears, looking at Tsuna with renewed respect as they muttered, "As expected of the chosen one, you are truly burdened with a glorious purpose..."
I Cook My Way Through The Multiverse!
Anime & Comics · mythoast
Why do I feel like you are looking forward to the spanking ??
[T/N: Oopsie~ I misjudged the strength of teams in this exhibition match. Hopefully Zeno-sama doesn't spank mee~]
Reborn in Dragon Ball as Son Goten: Start Bonus Ultra Instinct-Sign
Anime & Comics · Clay_Champion
Thanks for the chapter! Also please the next chapters say your earliest convenience
Happy New Year!
AND ONCE AGAIN I WISHED YOU REALLY HAPPY NEAR YEAR, I HOPE 2024 WILL BE AMAZING YEAR FOR YOU ALL 🎉 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎊🎊🎊🎊🎉🎉🎉
DxD: Shadow Monarch
Anime & Comics · 6_SHINIGAMI_9
It's one of the best HS DxD fanfics I've ever read. Keep up the good work!
It's one of the best HS DxD fanfics I've ever read. Keep up the good work!
Sorry for your loss, I hope his soul rests in peace.!
Thanks for the chapter!
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original Birth Of Legend
I DO NOT OWN THE COVER OF THE NOVEL!!! P.S. This novel is just for fun. And I won't be fully dedicated to it. ------------- Astra, a common office worker, and an otaku died one night and made contact with the gods. the gods offered to transmigrate him to another world and fulfill any 6 of his requests. After his wishes were fulfilled, the effects of some of his skills took effect on even the god. Now he is on his way to be transmigrated and live his life in another world filled with an encounter with beautiful women and the goddess herself18 Chs 61 お気に入り
Same opinion here! Would add another level of immersion in thhis novel
The Alpha in the MCU (old)
Movies · Kakarot1809