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A young man from the earth after a slightly tragic and short life gets the option of reincarnating into the naruto world with any timeline of his choosing and wishes.
Watch as he lives in the world during the era after the Ten-Tails sealing
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I've read a lot of fanfictions on a lot of anime and what they all have in common is that you'd hardly find one that goes ways back. For example, most Naruto fanfiction I've read only features either Minato's generation, Kalashi's generation Itachi's, or Naruto's you'd rarely see anyone about Jiraiya, Tsunade, and Orochimaru's generation not to talk of Madara and Hashirama.
I've always been fascinated by the ancient times of almost all anime that has an ancient past. DXD, DC, Marvel, One Piece, Bleach, Tensura, and many more.
With this in mind, I decided to write a story from way back in the era of Indra and Ashura.
There will be skills from different animes and mangas, just to let you know.
The volume two would have lots of characteristics from Cultivation worlds ways of writing.
So please, read at your own discretion. Every ability or theory I come up with is what it is. Deal with it like that or don't bother reading at all.
Constructive Criticism is very much encouraged however.
This is my first novel guys and I don't own the basic principles in the novel. I either borrow or come up with a different one altogether.
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The story has an interesting premise nd the background is good but didn't like all the heavy focus on cultivation elements. The mc doing some seriously sketchy logic defying things ignoring biology as a whole just turned me off and it just felt at some point a mishmash of powers and theories loosely held by sketchy logic but overall a good novel just not for me good luck author.
It’s an interesting premise held down by the authors painful lack of originality, any time there comes a design in anything it is simply copied in every single aspect without any of the originality, breathing techniques but the mc doesn’t make any unique final techniques, domain expansion but without anything in the domain, it’s a cultivation style domain but with expansion tacked on as a way to remind the reader the author could not think of a unique domain for their mc, he creates a dojutsu which was interesting but in the story it is someone accentuated that the mc takes pride in not being an otsutsuki and that humans can rival them, what does the dojutsu look like? Indra otsutsuki’s EMS. The story is salvageable, but I would be extremely surprised if it ever is, who wishes to exist in a universe where people can impart their will character and personality in some form on the world and think “I want that but an exact copy of someone else”
I don't mind references to Chinese cultivation novels (I usually read them), but from volume 2 it stopped being "naruto" and became a Chinese cultivation novel, only replacing internal energy with chakra and even for me it's too much Xianxia or Xuanhuan, I came to read "naruto", not a cultivation novel. (I just want to know how things will develop in the world of naruto) google translate.
Very enjoyable to read, it is not amazing but it is a solid read. I look forward to seeing how the MC develops his skillset and hopefully how he helps shape the world as time goes by. Author will also likely continue to improve as they write. worth following.
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"I'm saying this for those that will write a 1-Star review for me. I'll delete the review. Period." Say less. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------
Warning: please read the fanfic yourself if you want to know whether you would like it or not. I don’t actually hate the story, because I’ve never read it. What irked me to the point of leaving a one star review anyway was because of something sh*tty the author said in the synopsis. ‘This is for those who will write a one star review for me. I will delete this review. Period.’ Which makes me believe they would even delete one star reviews with constructive criticism and good reasons on why they view it as one star. So I’m just returning sh*ttiness with sh*ttiness, really not the mature thing to do but I’m doing it anyway.
For those who are expecting Naruto, read only the first volume, after that it's just another cultivation novel. 2 Stars because of Update stability, nothing else
The story had potential, but it has been wasted. the best way to explain this is if you like Chinese power fantasy novels (God bless your soul) you would like this. Writing quality: a lot of mistakes but readable. Story development: starts well but later it drags on instead of skipping to a different age where something interesting happens. Character designs: character designs are decent because it's from Naruto but when start going off it becomes a Chinese novel. Update stability: it updates frequently which is good if you like the story. World background: if the world of Naruto before the ninja stuff happens but the author has the bad luck of liking Chinese novels even the bad parts. so in the end, if you like Chinese fanfic novels you would enjoy this story, but in the end,d characters and the story is not original but they did well if it was to copy Chinese novels.
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It started out really good but suddenly mc started making a harem and a very cringe one at that. Added 2 ocs and kaguya to harem and changed kaguyas personality all together. The novel went insanely downhill at that point.It just became insanely cringe. And then start giving random abilities to his wives lol. It's just brain dead writing at this point. Horrible novel. I don't recommend reading this.
It good until you reach chp. 50 or so and it just becomes a hand out for the MC the times the MC should be dead is very annoying and it seems his power is not what is written but convenience and its just boring.
This is one of the best Naruto fan fic I've ever read. Keep it up, I want to see how far this book will go
An overall disappointment. Poor sentence structure, random syntax, and a generally unpleasant and unskilled author who I refuse to believe is over 16 years old. A true bottom-of-the-barrel read, avoid unless you've mastered the art of completely turning off your brain.
The fact that this author doesn't take criticism makes me want to leave a negative review. I read the entire volume 1 and its pretty boring.
you some how took a great idea good back story and great character and managed to make it very boring to read i got to ch 130 and something like 80 chapters are just skill or technique descriptions and the mc monologing about ideas for more skill/techniques
If you are reading this on the future and this novel is already finished, just skip volume 2, its a cultivation novel the author was not brave enough to release it as a solo original cultivation story, don't know if the story died at some point of volume 2 or if he released a rewrite on the future, but no one is commenting on the chapters anymore, people are not engaging with the content, not even complaining, i hope the story is not dying, looks like it, the volume 1 was great, that is why this review is not worse that 3.8, in respect of the time that this story was still good.
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Idk why but this has become so..... disappointing and boring and many people probably think this too. Maybe because the mc's mentality is rigid and he changes everything yet basically changes nothing. His 'wives' somehow having more OP powers than him even though they shouldn't have anything special and even more so with Ria. How did she even get such power like Vector manipulation makes me want to bang my head.....