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作者: Sir_Traverse

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Water is part of our body, they say it is life, but in the hands of our protagonist it becomes the most dangerous poison, the deadliest weapon and the most unpredictable thing.

Blood control, water temperature control, steam to fight and ice to throw! Have you stopped feeling your fingers? Oops, now they're purple, too bad. Want to emulate a certain super soldier? I'll make you popsicles or give you popsicles!

Water is quite unpredictable and ever-changing, and although much of it was explored in the original series, Shisui has an idea of the interesting things you can do with this element.

But before all that fun, why the hell was a Waterbender born in the Fire Nation?

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Cover made using AI.

Is obvius that this Fanfic is an AU.

English is my second language and I'm using Grammarly for thoses mistakes I didn't see, so, if you notice one, comment, please!

I will be posting this story on RoyalRoad.com

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Sir_Traverse

Classic review from me, the author of this fanfic! I hope you enjoy the story as much as I enjoyed writing it. Your comments, suggestions, ideas, corrections, reviews, and critiques make me feel good! You don't know how much fun it is for me to read your comments and in some cases to answer them. So if you like this story, please leave your review and comment!

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ThatEpicTragedy

I don't generally write many reviews, but this is by far one of the best avatar fan fictions so far, the way his reincarnation is handled, the changes in characters attitudes and how they interact, while they differ from the show, we're shown why through the way the MC interacts with others, the changes he's made, etc. The way the author explains why the firelord (both of them) believe in the words of a child, the conversation with the past avatars (which as of chapter 15, I hope affects aangs knowledge of him) The changes in zuko and azula, the latter of which I always felt bad for in the show, makes sense given the different environment, and the change in temperament of ozai. overall, other than some spelling or grammar mistakes here and there, this is a wonderful story of a guy that, while harboring some of the grudges and feelings of his past life, is trying his best to move on and just make the world he's in a better place without the worry of "plot knowledge", which he has, but doesn't care about.

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Defective_Angel

this story is really amazing. long chapter, interesting story line, very good character interactions, and more importantly MC has his brain still healthy... he knew very what he is doing, not outright rejecting fire nation like some other FF. the only flaw is lacking chapter, so i would like to asking the AUTHOR about More chapter please....

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dantecoltz

you know mc is something special when he is the only one with a japanese name in the world. Also the sequence of events in relation to his identity makes it impossible for mc to navigate fire nation society without being killed before maturity. especially within near proximity with royalty.

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Anubis01

Without much discussion, 5 stars for this new novel. Do not read anyone’s opinions or any other nonsense. Go and read the novel with a heart of steel.

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TheSlumberingDeath

Meh. WQ 5/5 SoU 2/5 SD 3/5 CD 4/5 WB 3/5 Overall 3.4/5

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Dani_Ddraig34

The story gets better every time I read the chapters, I can't even wait for more chapters. ...............................................................................

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Wyvernian_Gaming

It's a very good read so far, I hope the story continues as it has and doesn't get dropped.

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Glitz1
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A unique take on the Avatar world. I love how it focuses on the world building and the advancements the fire nation is making. Also how the royal family is not so dysfunctional anymore. And from the bottom of my heart I thank thee for not using chatgpt to edit the story. I loath those stories with it even though the concept of the whole story is excellent. Thank you for using grammarly.

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KingPumpkin3

I already love this I never see Avatar fox’s actually try and use science in the way this fic is I hope this story will not get drop

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Jaelyn_Mariri

Definitely a good atla SI😊Not the best I've read since there are a few HP×ATLA crossovers that are phenomenal but this ff is no slouch either😊Quite a few grammatical errors that make it a bit annoying to read but otherwise it is pretty good.

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Matias_Ramirez

Me parece un excelente trabajo 👌... Espero que el autor siga así!! ............................ .............................. ............................

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John_5906

The story unfolded beautifully, weaving a rich tapestry of emotions and experiences that captivated my imagination. Each character was thoughtfully constructed, with intricate backstories and distinct personalities that brought them to life. The plot was intricately layered, filled with unexpected twists and turns that kept me on the edge of my seat. Overall, the narrative left a lasting impression.

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Apeiron_Avaritia

The story is getting better with each chapter ....................................................................................................................

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CrimsonRoseDevil

A unique character premise done correctly. No harem. No power hungry spotlight hog. Only a good person and his friends. If you read this fic prepare to gush over some beautiful story telling. 10 out of 10. Truly exquisite.

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Rey_Maldad

Very good story if updated more often would be 5 stars ..................................................... ............................................. ................................... ........................... ................ ........ .... .. .

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La_rata

Buenarda tu historia 😊🤤☺️🤤🤤😃😂😙🤩🙃🙂😶🤤😆🤤😄😃😀🥲🥲😐😐😶‍🌫️😶‍🌫️😗😄😄🤐🤤😂🙃🤪🤤🫥😑🫥😬🤐😔🫥😬😶😬😊🤤🤤😝🤤☺️😬😊yhdkekdkdudhw6q7e6ehgig7e5 Will jd un dudyehdiduw uhhhh w8eue una eueh

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JD_10
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Finally, a decent avatar post. The mc is kinda op but its still good as he stays grounded and wants to live a little as a kid, while still making a difference. Overall, highly recommend.

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C_balt
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Something interesting about this fic in particular, is how it's given the ability to portray both diversity and the political landscape of the fire nation beyond what we've seen in shows and some books

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  • 世界の背景

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