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This is peak. I don’t usually read cultivation novel inspired fanfiction but I love this character design development hell even the background is peak honest Mad respect to you
Ummm?! I had never read this novel because the reviews kept saying the Author messed It up and even arguing with him and calling him out. I thought the Author just used clockbait by making it look good at first glance then hoping people buy privilege chapters so that is why people are angry. But, like now i check it is literally free with consistent uploads. I would understand if you have patreon but why are they acting as if scammed. Criticize the novel but why call out the author?!! ain't like he lied or scammed you lol. I thought the Author was unprofessional for insulting others but now I am wondering why ain't he just cursing the entitled duckers.
Author tries transform the naruto world to cultivate world and xianxia and goes horribly wrong
it's really nice and I love it. you know I've been looking for a novel like dis ad i saw dis ad do u know wat makes it a gud timing s dat it already has 500 chaps.
just because author is piece of sh So please, read at your own discretion. Every ability or theory I come up with is what it is. Deal with it like that or don't bother reading at all. Constructive Criticism is very much encouraged however. but every constructive critism you treat it like nothing lol
I was searching for help on how to get my ex lover back whom we got divorced 5 months ago and i came across so many testimonies in so many blogs on how this wonderful man called Doctor Kala help them to get their ex back and restore broken marriages. I quickly contact him on the email that was provided in one of the comment and i explain my problem to him and he did a nice job by helping me to get my divorced husband back within 48hours.. I never believe that such things like this can be possible but now i am a living testimony to it because Dr Kala actually help me to get my husband back to me, If you are having any relationship problem why not contact Dr Kala for help via email: kalalovespell@gmail.com or you can call and WhatsApp him on +2347051705853. Dr Kala is the only real spell caster that can help you to solve your relationship issues and marriage problems.
Es una obra interesante, es la única que me he encontrado que empieza desde la era de Indra y ashura, tiene poca originalidad tomando habilidades de otras obras adaptándolas a su mundo también desarrolla métodos de cultivación pero que son útiles a la hora de desarrollar mejor la versatilidad del chakra, a pesar de todo eso es una lectura sólida con buena gramática y traducción, lo recomiendo si lo tuyo es una lectura agradable
No se bien por donde empezar, leí hasta el capitulo 473. Estoy de acuerdo en que a mi también me encantan los fanfictions que empiezan desde una era antigua. Empezó bien y no me molestó al principio el tema del cultivo para que el MC obtuviera su inmortalidad, me gustó el hecho de que no recurriera al cliché de usar ADN Otsutsuki o los bijuus como en todos los fanfictions. Si tuviera que criticar algo de ese volumen es el hecho de que le dedicaste demasiados capítulos a Izanagi e Izanami y después prácticamente los excluiste de la historia. Me gustó lo rápido que se fortaleció el MC y la relación que tenía con Hagoromo y su familia, también me gustó el cierre que le diste a ese volumen. Del Volumen 2 tengo las mismas criticas que todo el mundo, me lo salté en su mayoría pero por lo que pude ver lo único que incluiste del universo de Naruto es a los Otsutsuki y ni siquiera eran el tema central hasta donde vi, se desvió por completo de la trama y perdí el interés, habré leído 20/30 capítulos de ese volumen y después lo salté directo al ultimo donde se autodestruye. En lugar de este volumen yo lo habría enviado directo al mundo de Tensura u otro anime donde pudiera fortalecerse sin problemas y sin toda esa mierda del cultivo. Del Volumen 3 me gustó que incluyeras el mundo de Tensura y su relación con Veldanava. Después volvió al mundo shinobi y mi interes por la historia volvió. No hay mucho que decir de este volumen, para ser una época "vacía"(sin eventos canónicos) lo manejaste muy bien y el MC se integró bien al mundo con eso de su aldea y el banco en roran. También en la época de Hashirama lo vi muy bien construido. Las cosas que no me gustaron a partir de ahí fue el Semi Nerf que le hiciste al MC al enviar su cuerpo principal a otro mundo, además el hecho de que sus esposas parecían casi haberse olvidado de él, no le prestaban atención o incluso le hablaban como si fuera una molestia. La parte del romance y el harem pudo haberse manejado mucho mejor, cual es el punto de incluir la categoría harem en una historia con esta cronología si no vas a agregar a ninguna chica de los tiempos mas modernos ni tampoco a ningún personaje del canon a parte de Kaguya, honestamente desde que su primera esposa le dijo que hiciera un harem esperaba que incluyera por lo menos a Tsunade por ejemplo o alguna waifu de otro anime. El desarrollo de la historia después de "reencarnar" estuvo muy bien hecho y me gustó como incluiste al MC en la trama y su relación con los personajes principales. Me hubiera gustado que el MC le dijera su verdadera identidad a alguien desde que reencarnó(alguien que lo haya conocido en su vida anterior) pero lo mantuvo en secreto. La personalidad del MC me gusta mucho, es divertido y narcisista pero no inmaduro y tampoco es de los que quieren mostrar su poder todo el tiempo aunque siempre diga que es un genio, permite que los demás personajes se desarrollen en lugar de querer presumir siempre. Desde mi opinión si cambiaras el Volumen 2 y agregaras una o dos waifus del canon sería una historia casi perfecta.
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Absolute garbage hopefully you stay away from a keyboard or anything related to writing anything ever again. Good day to you
i am currently on chapter 120 and well yeah this has became one of the best novels i have read so far Good Job Author ...
bro i have a question, are yu gonna reveal the hes the six star sage latter and everything hes done, plz tell me. ..........................
I love it...................................................................................................................................................
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Well, Keep up author. Its very amazing and interesting plot far. i like that cultivation part . Need some new losers or potentially powerful female characters.
Perhaps the author deleted my review, which he does a lot. So, I'll give you a summary, this is the worst Naruto story anyone could create, the worst? It's the author's idiocy regarding Cultivation, he doesn't know anything and tries to do something with his meager knowledge.
Idk why but this has become so..... disappointing and boring and many people probably think this too. Maybe because the mc's mentality is rigid and he changes everything yet basically changes nothing. His 'wives' somehow having more OP powers than him even though they shouldn't have anything special and even more so with Ria. How did she even get such power like Vector manipulation makes me want to bang my head.....
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I'm getting more and more bored as I read. I am some 240+ chapter but power system is not clear . At the end of each volume the dynamic of whole novel changes. Now a new power system came into view
Mostly subjective review. Writing Quality: Average(3/5) - Story Development: Indescribably Dull Snoozefest(1/5) - Character Design: Some of the worst OC's I have ever seen in a fanfic period, probably due to my general dislike of cultivation stories outside of a handful of exceptions(1/5) - Update Stability: Best part of this fic(5/5) - World Background Above Average, but executed in a way that makes it incredibly boring(3/5) - Harem Development: Disappointing(1/5) - Action: Lame(1/5) - Character Interaction/POV: Slightly above average, though the MC is an utter waste of space(3.5/5) - Ending: ???, Haven't reached it so can't comment on if it has a good ending or not(?/5). Overall Opinion, great concept but a horrid execution of it, that said so long as the author enjoyed writing it, that's what matters most, because at the end of the day it's just a fanfic written for fun, so I won't be as critical as I would if it were an original story.
Man forget all the hate comment I Freaking love this story found it fro an audiobook and it freaking slapped. Thank you for the story you brought us Author ~san
The writing is to much cultivation novel type ( the bad ones ) , the MC who is a god struggle against nobodies and make rookie mistakes
One of the best fanfictions I ever read in this life of mine and looking forward to what the author has to offer. Sorry, but nothing more comes to mind to write if it did I'd be the greatest author in this world to offer right, what with the mocking face I'm not joking you believe it.😉😉
this novel is a very good one at a point I am already getting addicted to it, I hope for more updates concerning this novel😊😁
This is peak. I don’t usually read cultivation novel inspired fanfiction but I love this character design development hell even the background is peak honest Mad respect to you
Ummm?! I had never read this novel because the reviews kept saying the Author messed It up and even arguing with him and calling him out. I thought the Author just used clockbait by making it look good at first glance then hoping people buy privilege chapters so that is why people are angry. But, like now i check it is literally free with consistent uploads. I would understand if you have patreon but why are they acting as if scammed. Criticize the novel but why call out the author?!! ain't like he lied or scammed you lol. I thought the Author was unprofessional for insulting others but now I am wondering why ain't he just cursing the entitled duckers.
Author tries transform the naruto world to cultivate world and xianxia and goes horribly wrong
it's really nice and I love it. you know I've been looking for a novel like dis ad i saw dis ad do u know wat makes it a gud timing s dat it already has 500 chaps.
just because author is piece of sh So please, read at your own discretion. Every ability or theory I come up with is what it is. Deal with it like that or don't bother reading at all. Constructive Criticism is very much encouraged however. but every constructive critism you treat it like nothing lol
I was searching for help on how to get my ex lover back whom we got divorced 5 months ago and i came across so many testimonies in so many blogs on how this wonderful man called Doctor Kala help them to get their ex back and restore broken marriages. I quickly contact him on the email that was provided in one of the comment and i explain my problem to him and he did a nice job by helping me to get my divorced husband back within 48hours.. I never believe that such things like this can be possible but now i am a living testimony to it because Dr Kala actually help me to get my husband back to me, If you are having any relationship problem why not contact Dr Kala for help via email: kalalovespell@gmail.com or you can call and WhatsApp him on +2347051705853. Dr Kala is the only real spell caster that can help you to solve your relationship issues and marriage problems.
Es una obra interesante, es la única que me he encontrado que empieza desde la era de Indra y ashura, tiene poca originalidad tomando habilidades de otras obras adaptándolas a su mundo también desarrolla métodos de cultivación pero que son útiles a la hora de desarrollar mejor la versatilidad del chakra, a pesar de todo eso es una lectura sólida con buena gramática y traducción, lo recomiendo si lo tuyo es una lectura agradable
No se bien por donde empezar, leí hasta el capitulo 473. Estoy de acuerdo en que a mi también me encantan los fanfictions que empiezan desde una era antigua. Empezó bien y no me molestó al principio el tema del cultivo para que el MC obtuviera su inmortalidad, me gustó el hecho de que no recurriera al cliché de usar ADN Otsutsuki o los bijuus como en todos los fanfictions. Si tuviera que criticar algo de ese volumen es el hecho de que le dedicaste demasiados capítulos a Izanagi e Izanami y después prácticamente los excluiste de la historia. Me gustó lo rápido que se fortaleció el MC y la relación que tenía con Hagoromo y su familia, también me gustó el cierre que le diste a ese volumen. Del Volumen 2 tengo las mismas criticas que todo el mundo, me lo salté en su mayoría pero por lo que pude ver lo único que incluiste del universo de Naruto es a los Otsutsuki y ni siquiera eran el tema central hasta donde vi, se desvió por completo de la trama y perdí el interés, habré leído 20/30 capítulos de ese volumen y después lo salté directo al ultimo donde se autodestruye. En lugar de este volumen yo lo habría enviado directo al mundo de Tensura u otro anime donde pudiera fortalecerse sin problemas y sin toda esa mierda del cultivo. Del Volumen 3 me gustó que incluyeras el mundo de Tensura y su relación con Veldanava. Después volvió al mundo shinobi y mi interes por la historia volvió. No hay mucho que decir de este volumen, para ser una época "vacía"(sin eventos canónicos) lo manejaste muy bien y el MC se integró bien al mundo con eso de su aldea y el banco en roran. También en la época de Hashirama lo vi muy bien construido. Las cosas que no me gustaron a partir de ahí fue el Semi Nerf que le hiciste al MC al enviar su cuerpo principal a otro mundo, además el hecho de que sus esposas parecían casi haberse olvidado de él, no le prestaban atención o incluso le hablaban como si fuera una molestia. La parte del romance y el harem pudo haberse manejado mucho mejor, cual es el punto de incluir la categoría harem en una historia con esta cronología si no vas a agregar a ninguna chica de los tiempos mas modernos ni tampoco a ningún personaje del canon a parte de Kaguya, honestamente desde que su primera esposa le dijo que hiciera un harem esperaba que incluyera por lo menos a Tsunade por ejemplo o alguna waifu de otro anime. El desarrollo de la historia después de "reencarnar" estuvo muy bien hecho y me gustó como incluiste al MC en la trama y su relación con los personajes principales. Me hubiera gustado que el MC le dijera su verdadera identidad a alguien desde que reencarnó(alguien que lo haya conocido en su vida anterior) pero lo mantuvo en secreto. La personalidad del MC me gusta mucho, es divertido y narcisista pero no inmaduro y tampoco es de los que quieren mostrar su poder todo el tiempo aunque siempre diga que es un genio, permite que los demás personajes se desarrollen en lugar de querer presumir siempre. Desde mi opinión si cambiaras el Volumen 2 y agregaras una o dos waifus del canon sería una historia casi perfecta.
ネタバレを明かす Absolute garbage hopefully you stay away from a keyboard or anything related to writing anything ever again. Good day to you
i am currently on chapter 120 and well yeah this has became one of the best novels i have read so far Good Job Author ...
bro i have a question, are yu gonna reveal the hes the six star sage latter and everything hes done, plz tell me. ..........................
I love it...................................................................................................................................................
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Well, Keep up author. Its very amazing and interesting plot far. i like that cultivation part . Need some new losers or potentially powerful female characters.
Perhaps the author deleted my review, which he does a lot. So, I'll give you a summary, this is the worst Naruto story anyone could create, the worst? It's the author's idiocy regarding Cultivation, he doesn't know anything and tries to do something with his meager knowledge.
Idk why but this has become so..... disappointing and boring and many people probably think this too. Maybe because the mc's mentality is rigid and he changes everything yet basically changes nothing. His 'wives' somehow having more OP powers than him even though they shouldn't have anything special and even more so with Ria. How did she even get such power like Vector manipulation makes me want to bang my head.....
🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😁🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🤗🤗🤗🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😁😁😁😁😁😁🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
I'm getting more and more bored as I read. I am some 240+ chapter but power system is not clear . At the end of each volume the dynamic of whole novel changes. Now a new power system came into view
Mostly subjective review. Writing Quality: Average(3/5) - Story Development: Indescribably Dull Snoozefest(1/5) - Character Design: Some of the worst OC's I have ever seen in a fanfic period, probably due to my general dislike of cultivation stories outside of a handful of exceptions(1/5) - Update Stability: Best part of this fic(5/5) - World Background Above Average, but executed in a way that makes it incredibly boring(3/5) - Harem Development: Disappointing(1/5) - Action: Lame(1/5) - Character Interaction/POV: Slightly above average, though the MC is an utter waste of space(3.5/5) - Ending: ???, Haven't reached it so can't comment on if it has a good ending or not(?/5). Overall Opinion, great concept but a horrid execution of it, that said so long as the author enjoyed writing it, that's what matters most, because at the end of the day it's just a fanfic written for fun, so I won't be as critical as I would if it were an original story.
Man forget all the hate comment I Freaking love this story found it fro an audiobook and it freaking slapped. Thank you for the story you brought us Author ~san
The writing is to much cultivation novel type ( the bad ones ) , the MC who is a god struggle against nobodies and make rookie mistakes
One of the best fanfictions I ever read in this life of mine and looking forward to what the author has to offer. Sorry, but nothing more comes to mind to write if it did I'd be the greatest author in this world to offer right, what with the mocking face I'm not joking you believe it.😉😉
this novel is a very good one at a point I am already getting addicted to it, I hope for more updates concerning this novel😊😁