LOTR: the awakening of the warrior

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JkRolina

There are not usually fanfic of Lotr oc and so far has not disappointed, some grammatical errors are noticed, but usually corrected quickly and the story has advanced separately from the series, although it remains to be seen how they will give the time jumps.

LV 5

AlphaHost

Good story so far however you should fix your title's grammar, normally i would just ignore it due to the issues that early, I'ts a bad first impression when the title Itself has bad grammar

LV 1

Daoistpbh3yk

I feel that it is a story with very good potential, keep it up, although my biggest doubt is if it will follow the story of the series, which is terrible, but from what little I have seen, it may not.

LV 4

Oji_san_ecchi

mantap penulis, dari segi dialog ceritanya sama alur ceritanya enak untuk dinikmati, sehingga saya merasa diri saya sendiri ikut berpetualang menjadi Mc sendiri... intinya karyamu sempurna penulis, saya harap ini tidak akan didropped, terimakasih

LV 1

Darkiling

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LV 1

WintyLP

nice

LV 14

Ragequit1

A good story so far some grammar and gender problems but nothing to upsetting hope author won't drop it. Rare are the good ff si of lotr

LV 2

lightshade

I really like how the story is going, I would like to see how the character grows, I am not a fan of the saga, but I feel it can have a good development, I hope you don't damage it, I will wait for more chapters.

LV 4

GoldenKing

please continue ........... don't dropped...

LV 14

Ninewive

Good story please continue. and for those who like LOTR FF read this novel for some scantily clad Ork. enjoy. 😜😜😜