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There aren't many Boruto fanfic. So, I thought why not. Mc reincarnated as Boruto with some wishes. I hope you like my work.
MC looks like Minato. But they named him Boruto so don't get confused. The story is a little slow-paced.
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Attention spoil !! . . . . This commentary is written for people who stop right after reading the first chapter and the list of cheaters and yelling that this is unacceptable and that one of the abilities would be enough. I am writing this review to explain why from my point of view, although the number of cheats is numerous, their power consumption is still acceptable. So let's come back to the number of cheaters: (1) -> the potential X5 (2) -> purified blood line (Uzumaki) (3) -> Haki armament (4) -> Quirk: creation I would like to remind you that we are sticking to an MC which in the original version only has the kama and its own chakra and the Jogan in the official version. where Naruto has a monstrous chakra coupled with the help of Kurama / Hagoromo / Reincarnation of Ashura I think the author wanted to give through cheaters (1) and (2) the means to strengthen the MC and allow him to face the danger he will have to face without giving him the strength of naruto from chapter 1. the potential of the X5 is acceptable and allows him to quickly learn a lot of jutsu. I think given how fast the MC progresses, he will have a Jonin or Kage level when he has to face the first attack and be able to perform actions from the first fight and not just show presence as was the case in the anime. concerning the purified Uzumaki line. it offers 4 abilities (healing / large amount of chakra / Third Eye of Kagura / sealing chain). the MC figured out how to increase his chakra amount on his own in his youth, so I don't think this skill offers a particular cheat. regarding the capabilities of sensor ninja, I will response that to be able to effectively strike the Otsutsuki with ninjutsu, learning senjutsu is necessary and the senjutsu offers the ninja sensor ability. The chains and blood heal are minor aids, it remains acceptable. concerning the Busoshoku no Haki this one offers 3 abilities, physical reinforcement, weapon reinforcement and emission (RYUO) For the physical strengthening part and reinforcement of weapons, the MC was able to obtain the same result by injecting doton chakra into his body or into his weapon to be reinforced. concerning the RYUO, the technique resembles the combat technique of combat of the hyuga clan (Jûken) as well as the taijutus of the toads. Much like the Juken which works by injecting chakra into the opponent's body, the RYUO technique concentrates its power in the emission of haki into the opponent's body. Whell, the "Quirk: Creation" is not a combat oriented quirk but rather a support type quirk, its power lies in its versatility, non-combat use is much more suited to harness the full potential of this ability. this is why i think that although the number of cheats remains numerous, in the world of naruto these cheats are acceptable.
I tried my best, but cant take it anymore. As I started reading this story, Nice just a Bloodline purification as a cheat. More is not needed. But: He started getting more and more cheats…. I alredy wanted to stop reading at this point. But, I dont have anything to read at this moment. It was very hard to read this story until chapter 9. Every chapter the Author tests your patience, he throws some bull💩 at you. Grammer is not that good, but its readable. This is my warning to you guys, most of the reviews are 5⭐️, but its not. Its far, far, far away from that. Sorry Author, that I give a bad Review, but this is what I think about your story. And pls change the Tags of your Story, you have to add overpowered. He is not god like strong at the start, but his cheats are overpowered….
the talks are a bit awkward and the parents are believing bad lies. along with how he just find vibranium along with a kusanagi sword. and how he just tells sarada about the A.I he created....
This is my opinion so don’t get butthurt reading my review okay? The character interactions feel choppy and forced. When reading, they are so akward and stuff that it doesn feel natural. Another thing, does the mc have memories of his past life. Or at least knows he was reincarnated or in a work of fiction? Yes? Okay so why is he so dumb. People are defending him saying he’s a kid, but nah it don’t work like that. He just blabs all his secrets to everyone. At this point he should just tell everyone about the Otsutsuki and future events
I'd say I was ok with everything till the latest chapter. Even just the mere mention widespread innovation in any fanfic world ruins it for me. I'd usually give it a one for this sole reason, but I actually found myself enjoying it up until that point.
What I was expecting: Minato SI in Boruto What I got: Some OC who looks a bit like Minato that got his Uzumaki bloodline purified, talent multiplied by five, and was given scientific knowledge from his old world, a Haki from OP, and Momo's Creation quirk from MHA.
The fan fiction is great and has a huge potential in it. For the next chapters you should add different kinds of training in it and his breakthroughs and achievements.
A good fanfic with great potential, my fear is that as the protagonist is getting too strong while he's very young, it might tire the author in the future to create plots where the protagonist is not extremely strong, or need to create forced situations to match. the strength of the MC.
the reason why there are so few Borutard fics is simple... it sucks. it's one of those desperate money grabs disguised as a sequel. actual fans of naruto look at Boringto like it was "the land before time 43; Cera and the proctologist.
I have suffered brain damage on the first chapter, like all of the things are typical buffs you see in orher places but without a twist that makes it fun. Also, I’ve only had this fic gor 10 minutes and i already dislike ot. do not read unless you want to become angry with the writing style. Believe the bad reviews as they are correct as well, and, please. Do not read. this novel has the vibes of a typical braindead MC with overpowered boosts that are generic as concrete in a city.
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I’ll begin by saying, the story is… ok. I felt that from the beginning, many things were just inserted in, without any rhyme or reason. As the Mc is put into the shinobi world, he doesn’t explain how he got there, just a quick 1,2,3, and he’s off to traveling the road of overpowered. The pacing feels far too quick for what the story is trying to portray. In ~20-40,000 words, the MC goes from a dead person to an acadamy student. This’d be fine if his growth matched that of the absolute prodigys/legends of the past, but because of the x5 talent multiplier, it makes his progress unsustainable for the story. By the time he’s 18, he’ll be stronger than fricken six-paths Madara. I enjoy strong, OP characters, but being god by 17 and the God by 18 is not great to read. Perhaps if this growth was better articulated over more words to truly get across the sheer strength he has, it’d feel more genuine to me, but as of now, the MC’s just a chibi god that has too much power without an equivalent struggle shown. Please understand that this is a criticism of this work and not an unfounded flaming, as I read the work to chapter 22 before writing this. Thank you for writing this work regardless, and may you improve with time and experience.
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i am just commeting to give you five star for this work.......................................................................................
Its a very good story just need to be updated more. I will bring up the stars if he actually updates it because this has great potential……….
why is the update taking so long, it's been more than 1 month not updating. for a very good story, I ask the author to update the chapter often for the future
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To be honest, this novel is actually quite good. Its my second best naruto fanfic but on many chapters I noticed that there are many wrong grammars and wrongs spellings well it doesn't really bothers me since I still understand the sentences written. It also bothers me that It seems that he is already too OP in his age and I wonder what will happen in the plot because we are not even reaching 100 chapters yet and the fact that he revealed his A.I. to Sarada kinda upsets me as I was expecting him to keep it a secret to everyone since it is still dangerous to reveal it to anyone.
The novel is going well. I like the previous cover page better.... ........... ........ ....... ... ... ..... ...................... .....
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I read up to the current chapter: 19. And I can say that I loved this work, for these reasons: - I like the fact that the MC is more childish at this age because it makes him more human, different from others who are cold and calculating. - I also loved the fact that he is not a protagonist who acts as a teacher and nanny for his friends. - I loved how the interactions, it's so good! Well, the story is very very promising, I'll keep reading! The only part that made me sad was that he shows his AI to everyone, something I don't agree with, I think it should be kept hidden, and with that comes the hole in the story where nobody talks too much about this amazing creation. ATTENTION: I strongly recommend you give it a try, I saw some negative comments and I was disappointed with them, some believe that cheats are bad, but complain when the protagonists are weak, all hypocrites! In the shinobi world the cheats he got are good, but the author just has to hold it to not cross the limits as he did with the creation of the AI, after that I think it's a great work
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