概要
“I’m just a normal person who also has personal storage power.”
When the next-gen VR game, Second World, finally arrived, the MC took a bottle of water out of his personal storage and took a sip before he was stunned.
“T-this is inside the game, right?”
From that day onward, he could bring in-game items out into the real world and vice versa. His life was completely changed.
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soo hard to read.. it's all over the place.. concepts aren't really clear.. MC suddenly gets a sniper rifle and it's not clear how he got it.. some people are saying in comments that he went abroad n used his personal space to get it.. but there's no mention of it at all.. One guy is killed in the game n when he's out he's driving his car all of a sudden.. and he immediately re-enters the game still driving.. how did he end up driving the car when he was in the game? or does the car detect he's in a game n drives itself? nothing mentioned.. there's no time stop or something n user has to wear a vr helmet to play n all.. there's other stuff like mc walks into a gym to test this strength.. coach seeing his form is wrong corrects it.. seeing MC is strong he immediately asks if he wants to become a coach.. even though all he got is strength.. MC rejects it.. n that's it.. nothing else.. only reason I can imagine why the author wrote those 3-4 paras is to make fun of other novels where MC does join a gym which is kinda stupid.. Real world is even more ambiguous.. MC enters the game at night n is out by morning.. what does he do during the daytime? go to work? go to college? nothing.. he eats meat from the game.. exercises.. re enters the game.. all I can get from this is that MC takes an entire day to eat n go for a run.. MC goes to his village all of a sudden to defeat his friend/neighbour as he became stronger.. then that friend guards his house when MC is playing the game.. nothing else.. Basically everything is all over the place.. written very poorly.. n half done.. upon that translation is really bad making it even harder to read.. overall it's simply unpleasant to read.. a complete waste of time
unreadable, translator cany even bother to double check and just copy and pastes. waste of time
I really wanted to like this book, love the premise but it's all over the place and borderline unreadable. A lot of it is disjointed, doesn't make sense and has issue with grammar.
solid 4 star , entertaining and amusing the world building is interesting but not the best out there maybe it is just my opinion if you like the power system them this novel is for you
I don't like the concept of being slave introduce in this novel .. even if you want someone to be your slave need to release it mid story or because of extreme situations...
The story is decent. There is some poor writing choices in the beginning that will confuse readers for a little bit but will start to make sense later. Reading ahead through MTL I'd say the story is one worth taking the time to read. The author seems to be a little prone to not filling in all the details but does give enough to figure things out. This just means one will have to think some when reading. Over all not bad.
All right review time! This story is amazing, 10/10 for translation. The mc is very smart and is being fleshed out well. 10/10 characters development. The world background hints at a much bigger story and im super excited for. 10/10 world building. overall its a very fun story of a mc slowly building his strength and network. 10/10 would recommend!!! I hope tgis gets picked! Please webnovel pick this one!
Nice story to read while waiting for chapters. World background not mentioned at all. Your standard trope characters. In the first ~8 chapters it feels like the translator skipped some text.
Good story. Not going to write a more detailed review because I hunger for the raws!
Title: 我竟然能带出游戏物品 Author: 萌她爸 Status: 343 Chapters and ongoing The author's name translates as 'her cute father', I'm guessing the person setting up this page just made a small mistake when in a hurry to get them all ready. It seems to be fairly popular.