LordJ

LordJ

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2019-09-22 入りました Global
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LordJ
LordJ
2 days ago
Replied to LordJ

Bare in mind it's scalable so 0.1-0.2 is easier to progress than 0.7-0.8 etc.

LordJ
LordJ
2 days ago
Replied to fire_in_ice

Nah, this using the Kardashev Scale which is based on how much energy a civilisation is able to harness. This factually is about right. Type 1 Civs can harness all the energy on a planet and manipulate said planet in terms with Terraforming and climate manipulation. Type 2 is able to harness all the energy from a star like the Sun. Type 3 is able to harness the energy of an entire galaxy and so on.

LordJ
LordJ
26 days ago
Commented

You have another reader, however I suggest you use a grammar checker to fix your chapters. Some of the wording and tenses are disorientating. Doing so will greatly enhance the book and viewer retention.

この本は削除されました。
LordJ
LordJ
1 months ago
Replied to BarryBoneRaiser

Not a vacuum so technically makes sense i suppose.

This story, which was hailed as the Tower Test by the scientific community in the future, proved by the fact that objects with different weights falling from the same height, would not land at the same time. This overturned the misconceptions of many previous scientists, so the foundation was laid for the law of free fall which was recognized later.

Build A Technological Civilization

Build A Technological Civilization

Sci-fi · Sokdavid

LordJ
LordJ
1 months ago
Posted

Ignore the slightly laid on thick but not too bad by Webnovel standards pro-china stuff and it's a good novel. I'm very much enjoying it. Does anyone know the Raw?

LordJ
LordJ
1 months ago
Commented

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Suddenly, she seemed to remember something, and a cheerful smile appeared on her face as she excitedly said, "Young master, you finally woke up. It's great news. I'm sure Lord Garfield would be happy to know this."

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Fantasy · Blizzard54k

LordJ
LordJ
1 months ago
Replied to LordJ

Apart from that hopefully little thing, a really great job with the book. Thoroughly enjoying it and looking forward to the next 1000+ chapters XD

LordJ
LordJ
1 months ago
Commented

Could you add a prefix/preface chapter to the book with a list of the current human rank names/order and the beast rank names/order to make things easier if possible please? Obviously just put a (Spoiler) note in the title but if you make it a preface chapter it shouldn't affect the starting chapter for readers.

LordJ
LordJ
1 months ago
Commented

The Chinese superiority all the time is a bit much, I'd be happier if the world got united into this alliance you first mentioned. Then China can be heavily involved in the council where every country gets an initial representative where each country becomes more like an earth district but also share resources for the common goal etc. I get China wants to get ahead to come out on top when forming the alliance, I completely get that plus the motive makes sense and I agree that is the best method but some of the stuff is laid on a little thick. I hope things are more for humanity as a whole down the line rather than just China given we all have the same origin and many many similarities regardless of modern conceited differences on all sides.

LordJ
LordJ
1 months ago
Commented

Hey Author, why don't you try contacting Webnovel directly, since you can't remove the chapters they may be able to for you. Or you could create a copy of the new work, overwrite all chapters here with a pointer to the new book then it may not get flagged as similar.