/ Book&Literature / I am in legacies
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a brilliant engineer dies in our world but the HIM in alternative world gets his memories and some perks. what will the new improved him do in this world?!.
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this is my first time writing, so be lenient and let me know what you think.
i also do not own anything besides my MC and some characters i will introduce later, and also some new plots in future. this is gonna be like a long novel. hope you're ready
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the main characters design and character is good, but when it comes to his powers and the way he improves them as story goes on I have my issues since the idea of runes and warlocks might be good but the execution of it leaves a lot to be desired cut down on the ai use on his power explanations because it feels bad when read and try to balance the characters power with the verse since it seems a bit incompatible with the other powers so a power up to all supernatural creatures might be a good idea since I did think legacies had so much potential in that aspect, but they ruined it. the show had the potential to be the most epic supernatural series, and the writers and producers just blew all that away for nothing! always gets mad when I think about it.
this is a very interesting story I hope it continues it has many avenues to explore
The story is light and easy to understand. Indeed, the pace of the narrative is a bit slower, but perhaps that's one of the novel's strengths. In terms of writing quality, it's well-organized and varied. The only drawback might be the scarcity of dialogue in some parts, and perhaps each chapter feels a bit quiet or lacking in excitement, but that could be due to the limited number of chapters. Overall, it's good.
after reading the first 16 chapters I am now going to make an objective review: it is very poorly constructed, we go from a guy who knows nothing to do except say that he is 23 years old and that he is tired of it where he is a guy who is happy to be where he is suddenly we don't really know why he becomes happy. we go from a guy who has almost no powers to a guy who does, then to a guy who has powers and knows how to use them and we never get any explanation of how that happens. without forgetting that the hero is over 27 when he arrives at school, and that he will start going out with 17 year old girls, well done.
very good book with good potential needs improvement in the power leveling aspect, not because it's bad or anything because it can be so much better