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Ugh, I never expected that my life would end like this. My life was in vain, I didn't get anything important. Damn...
Wait a moment! It was not over!
With this new opportunity I will become the strongest warrior in Dragon Ball, you will see it! Here my legend begins, I'm Gohan!
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Nice!, I like it, good story, and it will probably follow the canon, but I still hope you change things a little. '18 is my waifu!!!' [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
well gonna drop the fanfic now. writing quality and stabaility of updates is quite alright. problem is author forces to keep powerlvl of gohan down to so he can follow the cannon and gohan doesnt get too op. Issue is MC is suppose to be quite smart...even more when readers picked that out and facts later show that reader where totally right, author is just totally toxic and tells readers there comments are stupid...So the forced canon kinda makes the world background and story development bad. All in all I enoyed the start of the fanfic but the quality droped quite fast and It got poison.
The writing quality is equivalent of the average chinese novel. so ehh... Story Development is eh... Character Design is also eh... nothing special but nothing out of the ordinary or OCC. Until the Yamcha incident. Keep reading to know why. oh I also got insulted as Yamcha fanboy for giving valid criticism lol World Background is also eh. The novel doesn't really explore the world building then again its a fanfiction. Most ff don't even bother w this part. So let's talk about the Yamcha incident. Let me explain like those 4chan story because it much more fun. >be me a ff enjoyer >reading a DBZ ff >hoping it be a good a ff where it fix many mistake that Toriyama made such as neglecting the OG series such as Krillin, Yamcha, and Tien. >yamcha become much much stronger >yamcha IQ is lowered to room temperature for some reason >become a comic relief telling the enemy about the Dragonball because? >still die to sibamen suicidal attack >me criticize author for writing Yamcha so Out Of Character >got called as Yamcha fanboy in return LOL ff author aren't the most mature being but this is just childish. Don't bother reading. Look elsewhere maybe fanfiction.net.
Go Gohan Go Go to Piccolo Go Gohan Dodge I said DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODGE!!!
its allaround pretty meh. The grammar is terrible, writing is ok but also a bit boring, consisteny/logic are also kind of bad. I can only recommend this to people who are realy desperate for dragon ball fanfics.
the grammar honestly sucks, and the author has made no attempt to fix it. the story design is meh, as they simply just follow the plot. the author has made the characters stupider then the original show and that says a lot. the plot also feels forced. over all, needs lots of improvements.
Its really good since I haven’t seen a lot of love for Gohan in other fanfics. My only and biggest issue is that he has a really big mouth. Why does he keep saying stuff that he shouldn’t know when he doesn’t need to ? It just take any immersion in had out of the story.
So, i read all the chapters up to 152, and wow, how can you completely ruin a story so fast? Just a few chapters before this, and android 18 just became his girlfriend, which was what everyone wanted, that was good. But then Cheelai, who was not talked about by anyone or anywhere in the story, suddenly has a kid with gohan? Like, I do not understand the point of doing this unnecessary romance drama, its a dragon ball story.
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Honestly, you'd have to turn your brain off to read. The character doesn't think things through and simply does, causing him to not only look stupid to the audience but suspicious to the other characters. Quality was below what I could handle, and the characters were built weaker than the original, not in strength but in character itself. If you're willing to read a wish fulfillment with poor grammar, I'd recommend skipping the comments as it only makes it harder to read. In order of fixing this, I'd personally get Grammarly to fix the grammatical problems, research the characters and original story before writing them, and maybe apply "What would I do?" Throughout the story to retain complex thinking. In the end, 3.8 Stars. Writing Quality: 3/5 Stability of Updates: 5/5 Story Development: 3/5 Character Design: 3/5 (Generous considering the first few chapters) World Background: 5/5 (Literally DBZ)
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the premise and execution is interesting but what I don't like is his childish mind set (especially the slip ups, like how?) and the mediocre English . I recommend using that grammarly app.
At first it was good. But later it all went down hill. The author deliberately keeps making the mc average so that he struggles each time, someone with the knowledge of everything shouldn't be like that. And they also keep saying that they don't want to change much if the original plot, but if we would've wanted to read that we might as well read the original story instead of this.
I like it, because the other dragon ball fanfics are about a protagonist who has never fought in his life, but when he reincarnates he becomes a god in 30 chapters, In this fanfics that doesn't happen, the MC evolves with each chapter. Keep up the good work author
Pretty good so far, it seems like it would follow the canon. I just hope the author would add tag’s to the novel since that can give an idea of what type of story it would be.
Quite a promising story. Everything indicates that the known story will change a lot with this new Gohan, I hope you continue it soon. Good job! :)
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I like the story as far as it is currently going, I just hope that the Author does not leave Piccolo so distanced from the power of the Saiyans until the Sagas of Dragon Ball Z are finished. Also why not give Krillin as a Wife to Zangya
At first i was interested in the idea. Making gohan stronger with advanced knowledge is cool and all but... not at the expense of making goku weaker. Goku needed certain events to make him stronger like his first ssj transformation in namek. But the author changed the story so much that gohan took gokus place. What i dont agree about that is, this will limit him severely because now he needs to take his fathers place as strongest to protect everyone. This closes doors for him in terms of his education or possible careers as he will be busy protecting earth and goku will be too busy playing catch up. I would have been okay if author made gohan strong but not by stealing gokus thunder and making him weaker
Dropped this story before the cell arc All the new androids showing up just to stop him from destroying cell so the cell arc happens is INCREDIBLY forced. Good story but around the freiza fight you can tell that the author doesnt quite know what he wants to do as he keeps throwing in things from other movies. Overall the its a pretty good fic but when a plot is forced so hard that it becomes hard to read it just fails to be my cup of tea.
Please support this little author. I assure you that this story will be to your liking, I hope you all enjoy the new Son Gohan. Leave your rewiews and power stones, thanks!
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