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Nice!, I like it, good story, and it will probably follow the canon, but I still hope you change things a little. '18 is my waifu!!!' [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Great start, unfortunately author rushes cannon events rather than relaxing and allowing character developmenf outside of trainimg amd battle. Dont mind the plot steering away from cannon at all, but forcing every cannon conflict back to back to back wasnt something I found enjoyable. On a positive note the grammar is good and the action and character personalities are good. Final rating is Descent over all.
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At first it was good. But later it all went down hill. The author deliberately keeps making the mc average so that he struggles each time, someone with the knowledge of everything shouldn't be like that. And they also keep saying that they don't want to change much if the original plot, but if we would've wanted to read that we might as well read the original story instead of this.
Solo doy esta calificación porque el interés amoroso es 18 por nada mas, el mc creado por el autor sinceramente me molesta todo el tiempo hablando de cosas que no debería saber pero actuando como si fuera normal si fuera hijo de vegeta seguro se lleva un ataque de ki y unos cuantos golpes para saber quien es en realidad así que si no te gusta esto como a mi mejor ni leas esta cosa
At first i was interested in the idea. Making gohan stronger with advanced knowledge is cool and all but... not at the expense of making goku weaker. Goku needed certain events to make him stronger like his first ssj transformation in namek. But the author changed the story so much that gohan took gokus place. What i dont agree about that is, this will limit him severely because now he needs to take his fathers place as strongest to protect everyone. This closes doors for him in terms of his education or possible careers as he will be busy protecting earth and goku will be too busy playing catch up. I would have been okay if author made gohan strong but not by stealing gokus thunder and making him weaker
Gohan is too strong and the romance in the story sucks.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
So, i read all the chapters up to 152, and wow, how can you completely ruin a story so fast? Just a few chapters before this, and android 18 just became his girlfriend, which was what everyone wanted, that was good. But then Cheelai, who was not talked about by anyone or anywhere in the story, suddenly has a kid with gohan? Like, I do not understand the point of doing this unnecessary romance drama, its a dragon ball story.
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I'm waiting for a new chapter! Love this! At first i was hesitant cause you don't see many good self insert Gohan fanfictions. But once i started reading it, it was really good! I sadly cannot afford your patreon so I'll be waiting whenever you decide to update here
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Dropped this story before the cell arc All the new androids showing up just to stop him from destroying cell so the cell arc happens is INCREDIBLY forced. Good story but around the freiza fight you can tell that the author doesnt quite know what he wants to do as he keeps throwing in things from other movies. Overall the its a pretty good fic but when a plot is forced so hard that it becomes hard to read it just fails to be my cup of tea.
The best Gohan fanfic I have read so far. Other than the few breaks between updates your stability is very good and I would like to see more of Gohan's adventure in this fanfic and how canon events take turn. This review is after ch - 127, and I am dying to know what other abilities does Gohan have gained after training from Meerus, though I would like if it was not a harem but simply taking one character as love interest, 18 and Gohan match up is pretty good atleast more than Videl. Though at last it depends on you, the author itself . Thanks for making this fanfic.
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Te puedo dar varias razones por las cuales un fanfic con Gohan de Dragon Ball como protagonista, decidiendo entrenar desde bebé, sería una excelente idea: Explorar un "¿Y si...?" emocionante: La idea de un Gohan que decide entrenar desde bebé nos permite explorar un escenario alternativo y fascinante. En la historia original de Dragon Ball, Gohan no comenzó su entrenamiento hasta que era un poco mayor, lo que significa que este fanfic abre un mundo de posibilidades emocionantes y giros inesperados en la trama. Desarrollo del personaje: Observar a Gohan desarrollándose desde una edad tan temprana permitirá a los lectores ver su crecimiento y progresión de una manera completamente nueva. Podríamos presenciar cómo se adapta a las duras demandas del entrenamiento, cómo forja su personalidad y cómo enfrenta los desafíos únicos que vienen con ser un luchador desde la cuna. Relaciones con otros personajes: Al entrenar desde temprana edad, Gohan podría interactuar con otros personajes de Dragon Ball de una manera diferente a la que vimos en la historia original. Esto podría generar nuevas dinámicas y relaciones interesantes, surgirdo el desarrollo de los personajes y las interacciones en la trama. Potencial para nuevos enemigos y tramas: Un Gohan transportado desde bebé podría enfrentar amenazas únicas y poderosas que no fueron exploradas en la serie original. Los villanos podrían tener que adaptarse a este nuevo y fuerte Gohan, lo que podría llevar a emocionantes enfrentamientos y desafíos para nuestro protagonista. Exploración del universo de Dragon Ball: Este fanfic nos permitiría explorar más a fondo el vasto y emocionante universo de Dragon Ball. Podríamos ver nuevos planetas, culturas y personajes que enriquecerían el mundo ya conocido de la serie. Inspiración para los lectores: La historia de un Gohan que decide entrenar desde una edad tan temprana podría ser inspiradora para los lectores. Mostraría el poder de la determinación, el trabajo duro y el esfuerzo para superar obstáculos y alcanzar metas. Combates épicos: Un Gohan transportado desde un bebé estaría en un nivel de poder mucho más alto que en la serie original. Esto permitiría la creación de combates épicos y emocionantes, donde Gohan demostraría sus habilidades y se enfrentaría a oponentes formidables. En resumen, un fanfic con Gohan entrenando desde bebé tiene un enorme potencial para ofrecer una nueva y emocionante perspectiva en el universo de Dragon Ball. Podría brindar una experiencia de lectura única, llena de acción, desarrollo de personajes y giros sorprendentes que los fanáticos de la serie amarían explorar.
Normally I don't read anything without harem but I like the idea that N18 is the love interest, I'll give it a chance and hopefully there will be a harem... Incidentally recommend Dragon Ball fanfics preferably with harem :3
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This is a very fun DBZ fanfic to read in my opinion. Because as the dragon ball writer himself said that the strongest character in his manga is gohan. So I don't mind Gohan himself being able to solo kill his opponent without Goku's help, because this Gohan is a reincarnated soul. So enthusiasm for the author so that updates remain consistent. Thank You!
I really enjoyed the work, I look forward to more chapters. Analysis: I really liked how the work begins, There are some simple mistakes by the protagonist that made me a little uncomfortable, Example: He simply acted as if he already knew the future in front of everyone or when he was little and simply spoke of the best attack of goku without anyone mentioning him before. (I thought as reincarnated he would be a little more cautious) My language is not English, I'm using translator.
I'm really enjoying the story, but I think it could benefit from a bit more realism and gore. This would give each attack a greater impact both in terms of the lore and the overall story. Adding some spice to the story would make it even more dramatic. It's not necessary to go as far as Mortal Kombat levels of gore, but incorporating broken bones, cuts, missing limbs, and organ damage would take the fights to the next level. If you're looking to go the extra mile, I would suggest using martial arts techniques boosted with Ki to showcase different skills.
Je trouve les personnages un peu stupide et le développement de l'histoire assez bas de gamme mais appart ça cette histoire reste agréable à lire et bonne.
it's a really good story i don't really have anything else to say it's just good
Maybe the best fan fic i've read about Dragonball (and i'm also doing one so i know what i'm talking about) so to the people who want to know, read this it's fantastic
It just keeps, going better and better. I thoight that it would be lije any fanfic ,but your work is amazing, it created hype, You also provided regular update. Just dont drope this series.and contiue to make more buddy
Please support this little author. I assure you that this story will be to your liking, I hope you all enjoy the new Son Gohan. Leave your rewiews and power stones, thanks!
ネタバレを明かす Nice!, I like it, good story, and it will probably follow the canon, but I still hope you change things a little. '18 is my waifu!!!' [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Great start, unfortunately author rushes cannon events rather than relaxing and allowing character developmenf outside of trainimg amd battle. Dont mind the plot steering away from cannon at all, but forcing every cannon conflict back to back to back wasnt something I found enjoyable. On a positive note the grammar is good and the action and character personalities are good. Final rating is Descent over all.
ネタバレを明かす At first it was good. But later it all went down hill. The author deliberately keeps making the mc average so that he struggles each time, someone with the knowledge of everything shouldn't be like that. And they also keep saying that they don't want to change much if the original plot, but if we would've wanted to read that we might as well read the original story instead of this.
Solo doy esta calificación porque el interés amoroso es 18 por nada mas, el mc creado por el autor sinceramente me molesta todo el tiempo hablando de cosas que no debería saber pero actuando como si fuera normal si fuera hijo de vegeta seguro se lleva un ataque de ki y unos cuantos golpes para saber quien es en realidad así que si no te gusta esto como a mi mejor ni leas esta cosa
At first i was interested in the idea. Making gohan stronger with advanced knowledge is cool and all but... not at the expense of making goku weaker. Goku needed certain events to make him stronger like his first ssj transformation in namek. But the author changed the story so much that gohan took gokus place. What i dont agree about that is, this will limit him severely because now he needs to take his fathers place as strongest to protect everyone. This closes doors for him in terms of his education or possible careers as he will be busy protecting earth and goku will be too busy playing catch up. I would have been okay if author made gohan strong but not by stealing gokus thunder and making him weaker
Gohan is too strong and the romance in the story sucks.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
So, i read all the chapters up to 152, and wow, how can you completely ruin a story so fast? Just a few chapters before this, and android 18 just became his girlfriend, which was what everyone wanted, that was good. But then Cheelai, who was not talked about by anyone or anywhere in the story, suddenly has a kid with gohan? Like, I do not understand the point of doing this unnecessary romance drama, its a dragon ball story.
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I'm waiting for a new chapter! Love this! At first i was hesitant cause you don't see many good self insert Gohan fanfictions. But once i started reading it, it was really good! I sadly cannot afford your patreon so I'll be waiting whenever you decide to update here
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Dropped this story before the cell arc All the new androids showing up just to stop him from destroying cell so the cell arc happens is INCREDIBLY forced. Good story but around the freiza fight you can tell that the author doesnt quite know what he wants to do as he keeps throwing in things from other movies. Overall the its a pretty good fic but when a plot is forced so hard that it becomes hard to read it just fails to be my cup of tea.
The best Gohan fanfic I have read so far. Other than the few breaks between updates your stability is very good and I would like to see more of Gohan's adventure in this fanfic and how canon events take turn. This review is after ch - 127, and I am dying to know what other abilities does Gohan have gained after training from Meerus, though I would like if it was not a harem but simply taking one character as love interest, 18 and Gohan match up is pretty good atleast more than Videl. Though at last it depends on you, the author itself . Thanks for making this fanfic.
ネタバレを明かす Te puedo dar varias razones por las cuales un fanfic con Gohan de Dragon Ball como protagonista, decidiendo entrenar desde bebé, sería una excelente idea: Explorar un "¿Y si...?" emocionante: La idea de un Gohan que decide entrenar desde bebé nos permite explorar un escenario alternativo y fascinante. En la historia original de Dragon Ball, Gohan no comenzó su entrenamiento hasta que era un poco mayor, lo que significa que este fanfic abre un mundo de posibilidades emocionantes y giros inesperados en la trama. Desarrollo del personaje: Observar a Gohan desarrollándose desde una edad tan temprana permitirá a los lectores ver su crecimiento y progresión de una manera completamente nueva. Podríamos presenciar cómo se adapta a las duras demandas del entrenamiento, cómo forja su personalidad y cómo enfrenta los desafíos únicos que vienen con ser un luchador desde la cuna. Relaciones con otros personajes: Al entrenar desde temprana edad, Gohan podría interactuar con otros personajes de Dragon Ball de una manera diferente a la que vimos en la historia original. Esto podría generar nuevas dinámicas y relaciones interesantes, surgirdo el desarrollo de los personajes y las interacciones en la trama. Potencial para nuevos enemigos y tramas: Un Gohan transportado desde bebé podría enfrentar amenazas únicas y poderosas que no fueron exploradas en la serie original. Los villanos podrían tener que adaptarse a este nuevo y fuerte Gohan, lo que podría llevar a emocionantes enfrentamientos y desafíos para nuestro protagonista. Exploración del universo de Dragon Ball: Este fanfic nos permitiría explorar más a fondo el vasto y emocionante universo de Dragon Ball. Podríamos ver nuevos planetas, culturas y personajes que enriquecerían el mundo ya conocido de la serie. Inspiración para los lectores: La historia de un Gohan que decide entrenar desde una edad tan temprana podría ser inspiradora para los lectores. Mostraría el poder de la determinación, el trabajo duro y el esfuerzo para superar obstáculos y alcanzar metas. Combates épicos: Un Gohan transportado desde un bebé estaría en un nivel de poder mucho más alto que en la serie original. Esto permitiría la creación de combates épicos y emocionantes, donde Gohan demostraría sus habilidades y se enfrentaría a oponentes formidables. En resumen, un fanfic con Gohan entrenando desde bebé tiene un enorme potencial para ofrecer una nueva y emocionante perspectiva en el universo de Dragon Ball. Podría brindar una experiencia de lectura única, llena de acción, desarrollo de personajes y giros sorprendentes que los fanáticos de la serie amarían explorar.
Normally I don't read anything without harem but I like the idea that N18 is the love interest, I'll give it a chance and hopefully there will be a harem... Incidentally recommend Dragon Ball fanfics preferably with harem :3
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This is a very fun DBZ fanfic to read in my opinion. Because as the dragon ball writer himself said that the strongest character in his manga is gohan. So I don't mind Gohan himself being able to solo kill his opponent without Goku's help, because this Gohan is a reincarnated soul. So enthusiasm for the author so that updates remain consistent. Thank You!
I really enjoyed the work, I look forward to more chapters. Analysis: I really liked how the work begins, There are some simple mistakes by the protagonist that made me a little uncomfortable, Example: He simply acted as if he already knew the future in front of everyone or when he was little and simply spoke of the best attack of goku without anyone mentioning him before. (I thought as reincarnated he would be a little more cautious) My language is not English, I'm using translator.
I'm really enjoying the story, but I think it could benefit from a bit more realism and gore. This would give each attack a greater impact both in terms of the lore and the overall story. Adding some spice to the story would make it even more dramatic. It's not necessary to go as far as Mortal Kombat levels of gore, but incorporating broken bones, cuts, missing limbs, and organ damage would take the fights to the next level. If you're looking to go the extra mile, I would suggest using martial arts techniques boosted with Ki to showcase different skills.
Je trouve les personnages un peu stupide et le développement de l'histoire assez bas de gamme mais appart ça cette histoire reste agréable à lire et bonne.
it's a really good story i don't really have anything else to say it's just good
Maybe the best fan fic i've read about Dragonball (and i'm also doing one so i know what i'm talking about) so to the people who want to know, read this it's fantastic
It just keeps, going better and better. I thoight that it would be lije any fanfic ,but your work is amazing, it created hype, You also provided regular update. Just dont drope this series.and contiue to make more buddy
Please support this little author. I assure you that this story will be to your liking, I hope you all enjoy the new Son Gohan. Leave your rewiews and power stones, thanks!
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