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Guys I just write what I want to write. Starts off in Harry Potter there’s a Harem there is multiverse travel. Marvel world was involved at some point. If you don’t know me from my other stories than I’ll inform you here and now. I am chaos incarnate.
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Poorly written (bad)wish fulfilment fanfic without any sense of realism or logic. It's more of a parody than anything. E.g mc becomes a lord of merlin, Gryffindor Slytherin blah blah blah...... very silly. Basically he should name himself a god of magic at this point. Plus all this happening while his 8 years old! And somehow talks with everyone like some mature ***** and nobody reacts to that. Moreover, typical silly friendly goblins for some reason and the way wizards talk is also unrealistic. E.g 'Oh my god' etc. Apparently some wizard managed to get shocked to unconsciousness from being surprised at mc titles. LOL. Overall it's a silly parody.
I read the first few chapters and simply couldn't stand it after that. WTF! It's the most ****tiest MC i have ever seen with a system. He's magically a heir to everything but never apply that power. (not interested in business an political power) He's a beta MC, everything happens in his favor without him wanting anything strongly. This MC has no motivation, goal or anything to make his character interesting. Let's not mention that the system barely make any apparence as anything other that the author's excuse to anything that happens in the story. MC needs stuff for rituals from extinct animals ?-->"don't bother, the system did it in the background " .need to explain how he gets a modern oven in the fifties? : "Shhh. Shut up, the system did it....🤐😤 In short, you should rework your story 'cause it's shitty .
Story was fine until for some reason the mc takes over Harry’s body and his fiancé bellatrix idk what happened since I dropped it... was dumb and a waste to read
After reading for a while i can’t bring myself to continue, i feel like I’m losing brain cells reading this. The main character is just stupid and the story has no kind of challenge.
This is not a story, it seems more like a dream of a 10-year-old kid who was bullied and now does everything on a whim. If this isn't rubbish, I don't know what is. You can create 1000 chapters per hour, it will still be bad. Let's talk about some problems. MC offers things to a psychopath as if he loves her, just because of a marriage contract. I expected him to use the opposition contract with Voldemort to cancel the wedding, not that. Goblins seek profit. To offer them ancient and unique potions without even knowing what they are form, is absolutely stupid. It could very well be a cure for lycanthropy that would be worth a lot of money and he would never know, because he doesn't care. The goblins took care of their money and goods, even though they were greedy. His excuse was that the MC was the friend of the nation, so he can drop his pants and give the goblins an aphrodisiac and they would never **** their ass. The story has no final purpose. Take over the world, discover all magic, collect all the magical animals or travel the world? He can basically buy everything from the system anyway, so why aspire to find something to do if with a little money the system would give him? A story without purpose is the same as what you heard about a man's fart a centuries ago, completely meaningless.
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This is one of the trashiest which fulfillment fanfics I have ever read, none of the characters have an actual personality with the exception of the mc who is actually Autor fulfilling his idiotic fantasies
Well I’ll be honest his Harry Potter world is ok. But other worlds were good. The problem I have with this novel is his nerfing. One world he make MC strong as hell next he nerf him to literally a human to start again . You can say he loves to do it for story. I just say he lacks creativity. Well it’s just my opinion.
It's a diary of how the author wished it happened rather than a story. There are even chapters where no one speaks and the progression is too fast and totally trash. He only says "We did this and that, now we are a happy family" instead of making it really happen. Wish Fulfillment diary ... The worst fanfic I read until now
Held in and read to chapter 40. It was hard since there is no realism at all. MC is Beta, rushed and poorly written. He made trash wishes. Novel could of been better. Harem usually ruins it
After reading for a while i can’t bring myself to continue, i feel like I’m losing brain cells reading this. The main character is just stupid and the story has no kind of challenge.
Another masterpiece again from our dear Ryan ! Thanks for the good work sensei I 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
This is what you get when the story is rushed, trying to get from point A to B. The MC (Harry) is just rushing from ''plot'' to ''plot'' no real thought is place on the decision-making, its just done. So no real consequences either. Its not a terrible story but its not interesting in anyway whatsoever. And if you want a logical and intelligent take on a HP Fanfic look elsewhere. No world-building, no real characters and no reason for the MC to be around either.
Sadly there is only so many times you can give an author a review otherwise these stories would have all my stars! I cannot stress enough how good and hilariously spectacular these stories are and how you must read them!
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Probably one of the most peculiar novels here on webnovels that ive read. I mean the first thing that ive noticed in this novel is the chapters for week that the author release which left me dumbfounded. If im not wrong, this novel started about a week ago and the chapter consistency isnt released in a day but a matter of hours,so by the time i finished reading 3 to 5 chapters, another one would be released. Now, in regards to the writing quality its not good, its not terrible either. There are some parts that confused me, specially when the harry potter shenanigans occured. I have to re-read that part again just to be clear as to what i am reading. One thing that i noticed the most is the behaviour of the author, as much as it confused me at first. I mean, i left a comment in regards to my confusion to one chapter and he deleted it. I only found out about it when i was looking at my account and i saw that it wasn't there. I checked for that comment when i was reading around chapter 76 because thats when i caught a glimpse to the author's personality, which was something that strikes me the most about this novel . If you aren't a fan, or you couldn't tolerate authors with strong personalities then this novel isn't for you. You'll find out about it as you read the future chapters. Other than that the story is rather entertaining, characters are relatively fine in webnovel standards and the world setting is is there, to say the least. As i said before, this novel is quite peculiar, but quite a good read for the most part.
Kinda boring to read that’s all 😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮
everytime EVERY SINGLE TIME HE BECOMES A FUCKING BABY WITHOUT HIS ORIGINAL POWERS ITS JUST BORING WHY THE HELL ARE YOU GIVING HIM POWERS IF HE IS JUST GOING TO LOSE IT IN THE NEXT WORLDS LITTLE SHIT
—"My autocorrect snaps it to Fluer so I just don’t change it." This quote from the writer sums up this complete mess of a story better than anything. There's absolutely nothing wrong with making a bad training story (and this is really, really bad), trying to get better at certain things; just don't share it with other people. What an absolute waste of time.