/ Book&Literature / Harry Potter: Red Weasley The Strange Red Wizard
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I clarify that this is written in English with the translator, because I wrote the original story in Spanish. If it has more errors than I already had, I apologize, I do it at the request of some readers, I hope you enjoy it.
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After dying and getting the opportunity to reincarnate in the world of Harry Potter with some abilities, our protagonist is reborn as Ron's twin brother, being the most discordant Weasley within his entire family. With his particular way of being, he will live in this strange world
Warning: Harem, incest, +18
I only own the characters I have created, all others belong to their respective owners.
This is my first Fan-fic, I'm sorry if it's not a masterpiece and has several mistakes.
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Warning:
The MC's personality changed drastically from one moment to another due to some reasons, so at one point you're going to see him go from one extreme to another in personality. It doesn't make much sense, but at first I did this to try things without knowing if it would have a future, and only after a while did it take shape.
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this book is great, but there're a lot of grammatical errors. you would need to be a practioner of the dao of translation, obtained by reading lots and lots of tashy translated chinese manhuas and novels.
Really hard to read Brain cells just cant keep up Grammer is really bad couldn't read pass chap 5 Mc's character is meh wants to change his name to Red💁🏻♂️
I only read up to the part where MC sits in Hermione's cabin on the train but thats as far as I needed. The MC has the emotional range of a brick if he isn't talking to what I'm going to assume are future harem members(Luna, Ginny, Hermione so far) After checking the Harem Quiz and saw a unicorn was a viable and voted for option I decided against further reading. You might be thinking "Red Weasley" is a kind of nickname or epitaph but it isn't. The MC threw a huge fit over his name "Nicholas Leopold Weasley" and wanted something edgy and unique and after a long process had his name legally and magically changed to Red. His three wishes were unique and interesting and I rather enjoyed the aura/essence and the mini skills as a pseudo-gamer ability without levels and stats but the blood magic apparently changed MC enough that he has hair the color of wet blood, and red eyes. Naturally such a character should have the name Red. If I could give less than 1 star for character design I absolutely would. Some good parts of the story, so you and others don't feel like there was nothing good, were the merchant. I liked the idea of it and how it was handled with getting stock to where the sold products were sent. Luna being Luna and being able to pry some emotions out of the brick was fitting and their interactions with her parents was nice. Author I get you had your own reasons for wanting his name to be Red but I feel like it could have been handled better in the story than just spazzing out over it like he did.
The first ten were good...i enjoyed it alot...then when the Hogwarts arc start it went down the spirals...everything that was established in first 10 chapters was discarded and MC personality did a 180° turn...in first 10 chapters he was a quiet and expressionless kid and then at Hogwarts he became a outgoing, manipulative,playboy and someone who want to watch the world burn....like he got to chose which house he wanted and he chose Slytherin because he just want to spite people... it's a huge turn down for me(it's my personal opinion).
Just a warning. Eventually the adult mc blackmail's 11 year old Pansy and sexually assaults and r###s her regularly. Weird direction to go. It started well, interesting mc, quickly goes down hill.
Following your story I would understand and accept the death of some important characters such as Ron and Harry, since you decided to have a very bad start with Hermione. Now, you are not aware that each interaction with the main characters generates a change for the story in general. I know that the personality is not definitive and evolves to adapt, and I cannot accept in my mind the evolution so fierce in the last 10 chapters of your novel. Not to mention that he considers adding Harem into the story which is not personally suitable for Harry Potter.
Although hard to read because of the grammar, the story itself is very interesting, personally I like the MC. But author is there a Spanish version of the story cause I’d like to read it without that many, if not then that is totally fine. Anyways, I really like your story. Keep it up author 👍🏼.
Read this if you want to be annoyed and hate the MC in 1st chapter. My remaining few brain cells can't handle the stupidity of the MC, heck he is more stupid than Ron.
great story all that needs done is an English speaker go through and fix the Grammer errors like the pronouns because mtl's from Spanish to English don't work all that well
I couldn’t keep reading cause of this dude crying over his name, like he was actively destroying his relationship with his family….because he wanted to be edgy and be named after the color of blood? Like seriously? Also Nick isn’t even a bad name!
Extremely hateful mc. The story lines keep making me feel nothing but annoyance and hatred after reading this ff. I couldnt read anymore beyond chapter 29
The first ten were good. But it's immediately going downhill, It is different story after chapter 10. I've gone ahead and i do not recommend you to red the novel.
Plot Armor... Bad Novel... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend insanity"... "reverend Insanity"... "reverend insanity"... Att: Maxter-Romanee-Konti
The initial concept was interesting, but the character seems to unlock auras which while interesting at first become increasingly more annoying. He initial started emotionless but that lasted about 10 chapters to childish jokes. one of the few good things about this so far is the update stability
Few grammatical that are not insurmontable, you can read the story extremely well. The real problem I have with the story is the MC. The first chapters are good up until he goes to Hogwarts. Due to his auras being always active people are convinced he's a monster (mind you only the B-tier characters, all the major characters are immune) and even though the MC is constantly lonely and feel ostracized he doesn't do anything about him even when teenagers he's never met call him (a 11 year old) a monster. He also is very critical of Ron for his boorish behaviour and him thinking the MC is some kind of monster but then the MC spends several chapters torturing Hermione, his best friend, making her think she's loosing her mind just to have fun. You can't be sad about people not giving you a chance and immediately assuming you're a psycopath because of something out of your control and then behave like a psycopath. I've got nothing against evil MCs, I kinda enjoy them but Red is not portrayed as an evil MC but a hero. He acts all high and mighty and is friend constantly defend him because 'stupid people judge him to quickly' but he's a real creep. You can't take the moral high ground against people for their behaviour and then be even worse. Ron is the real GOAT of this story for seeing his brother for what he truly is. Yes he's brash, doesn't always think things through and goes of the handle real quick but he's a kid.
overall story felt very flat with with the extras they just didnt hook mr into reading it and eventually made it so that all character interactions outside of Luna felt dull and uninspired why have an HP story if you aren't going to flesh out any of the side characters?
Seemed like it had some potential. Enjoyed it as best I could until the MC went a full 180 from his character.
The start was nice and interesting. The childhood, his relationship with his family, then the house he was sorted into, I liked them all. Though... I did not really understand his insistence to changing his name... he sounded like a bratty kid for soemone who reincarnated, but other than that his personality was interesting to read. But the thing that ruined it for me was the large harem especially specially since it is in a Harry Potter World..... it would have been better if the author limited to 2-5 fl and allowed each fl to have proper development and screentime.