Allhavens

Allhavens

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2018-01-26 入りました Brazil
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Allhavens
Allhavens
1 days ago
Replied to MarinXGrayfia

whats the raw name, pls? <<ward>>

Allhavens
Allhavens
2 days ago
Replied to Allhavens

He could just show up at the last minute and apologize for not arriving sooner. No details. No need to put himself in a vulnerable position for someone who showed up out of nowhere and he barely knows. Get to know his parents, his life and his history before getting involved. Doesn't he know the Greek myths? As if that weren't enough, we're going to forge a magic sword for a girl I don't know, don't trust and have only met twice? How dramatic is that? Did all the caution he's been given in the past years teach him nothing? Is this protagonist too stupid or is he just a simpleton when he sees a girl, he forgets caution and acts like a dog? It's very stressful to watch this kind of protagonist.

"Thank you," I said, my voice quiet but sincere. "Thank you for forgiving me."

a simple blacksmith in greece

a simple blacksmith in greece

Book&Literature · yellowlin

Allhavens
Allhavens
2 days ago
Replied to yellowlin

The situation is indeed important. But the drama behind it was too strong for my taste. Oh my gosh! I noticed that you are not human and I wanted to see you reveal your secrets by fighting the monster. I apologize immensely for protecting myself against you and not saving you before you got hurt. I am at your disposal and will use my powers to heal you, even though I have been avoiding using them so far. Oh my gosh, a god has appeared, what do I do!!! I can't imagine a god would appear so quickly? Maybe I built a magical weapon for a little girl who appeared out of nowhere and without having my trust caused this?

"Thank you," I said, my voice quiet but sincere. "Thank you for forgiving me."

a simple blacksmith in greece

a simple blacksmith in greece

Book&Literature · yellowlin

Allhavens
Allhavens
2 days ago
Posted

This story has so many plot problems that it makes me sick to keep reading. It's basically a very superficial wish fulfillment for someone who hasn't actually read the original story. Just to give you an idea, the soul awakens at 6 years old and the MC awakens at 10 years old. His sword soul has 8 100,000-year rings and 1 1 million-year ring, but in the evil martial soul he shows, he starts putting on 10,000-year soul rings. It's a waste of capacity. He could start with 100,000-year soul rings or even more if he wanted. If he had enough million-year martial souls, he could fill everything. Having these characteristics, he decided to enter the soul hall to nerf himself. Besides, he doesn't seem very intelligent and is only there to mark his presence in the story without doing anything to change. It's simply not worth the time spent.

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Allhavens
2 days ago
Replied to DaoistTP0fHy

thats true.

Xu Sheng extended his hand and shook hers politely before quickly letting go, replying with a smile, "Hello, my name is Xu Sheng, I'm ten years old..."

I really am a Titled Douluo

I really am a Titled Douluo

Book&Literature · Bright Pupil

Allhavens
Allhavens
2 days ago
Commented

a lot of drama of something insignificant

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"Thank you," I said, my voice quiet but sincere. "Thank you for forgiving me."

a simple blacksmith in greece

a simple blacksmith in greece

Book&Literature · yellowlin

Allhavens
Allhavens
5 days ago
Commented

hit girl at kickass?

"My name is Mindy, Mindy McCready," she replied with a hint of sadness. "My dad is gone; there's no one to contact."

Marvel - The Blood God

Marvel - The Blood God

Movies · One_sword

Allhavens
Allhavens
5 days ago
Commented

hit girl?

"My name is Mindy, Mindy McCready," she replied with a hint of sadness. "My dad is gone; there's no one to contact."

Marvel - The Blood God

Marvel - The Blood God

Movies · One_sword

Allhavens
Allhavens
20 days ago
Commented

nerf

At Sasuke's current stage, the effect of Wood Release was probably just enough to absorb faint energy from nature, almost negligible.

Naruto: Reincarnated as Sasuke Uchiha with Perfect Talents.

Naruto: Reincarnated as Sasuke Uchiha with Perfect Talents.

Book&Literature · Leanzin

Allhavens
Allhavens
20 days ago
Commented

idiot. he could develop the superior instinct from dragon ball. one piece's swordsmanship or even haki is better.

This is a technique from the anime Demon Slayer. Though the Thunder Breathing techniques are few in number, they are perfect for Sasuke.

Naruto: Reincarnated as Sasuke Uchiha with Perfect Talents.

Naruto: Reincarnated as Sasuke Uchiha with Perfect Talents.

Book&Literature · Leanzin

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