/ Fantasy / Goblin ME: creation system
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You have probabbly heard of this story before. A teenager dies. He goes to heaven and meets god. The God says, "it was mistake, you weren't meant to die. I'll give you a chance to be reincarnated."
Or maybe there is no god. The teenager just wakes up suddenly in a new world alone, but don't worry He has a system to help him.
Or maybe there is no system, but he instead reincarnated as a small creature. Maybe a dog, maybe an ant. He would struggle for years just surviving this new world of his.
Seems like a lot of fun right?
"Yes it is."
"Why can't the same happen to me? Take my soul or make me your slave. I just want a different life. I want to have system, i want to not be human, i want to transported to another world. Have many beauties by my side and live my life in luxury."
A young man said these words as he gazed at the cealing. Tears streamed his eyes and they touched the wounds on his face.
How would he have known that his wishes would come true. And maybe a whole lot more.
...
"Wait wait wait... you said I am a what?"
[Goblin.]
"And I gain points how?"
[Any and all sexual activities, host.]
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A história tá indo para um bom caminho mas por favor quando o protagonista tem inteligente e frio e calculista seria legal eu prefiro que ele saia logo do caverna dos Goblins e fique em outra Caverna canção da Floresta mas eu posso tá errado e você fazer uma boa história ele continua na caverna com Goblins fêmeas aí falando dela por favor não faz o protagonista ser um gado que pensa mais na cabeça de baixo
Great writing quality and world design is good but lacking more info about world. especially with the various POV referencing things like we should know it. now the bad... the MC is absolutely the worst MC I have read in years. I actually hope he will die and be replaced with a new one. he has no redeeming qualities, moody, weak, timid he is simply a sheeple who follows the herd. for all his desire for something new he is a coward to face it. basically he has the makings of a mob character. so why the he'll is he a MC.