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A história tá indo para um bom caminho mas por favor quando o protagonista tem inteligente e frio e calculista seria legal eu prefiro que ele saia logo do caverna dos Goblins e fique em outra Caverna canção da Floresta mas eu posso tá errado e você fazer uma boa história ele continua na caverna com Goblins fêmeas aí falando dela por favor não faz o protagonista ser um gado que pensa mais na cabeça de baixo
Great writing quality and world design is good but lacking more info about world. especially with the various POV referencing things like we should know it. now the bad... the MC is absolutely the worst MC I have read in years. I actually hope he will die and be replaced with a new one. he has no redeeming qualities, moody, weak, timid he is simply a sheeple who follows the herd. for all his desire for something new he is a coward to face it. basically he has the makings of a mob character. so why the he'll is he a MC.
A história tá indo para um bom caminho mas por favor quando o protagonista tem inteligente e frio e calculista seria legal eu prefiro que ele saia logo do caverna dos Goblins e fique em outra Caverna canção da Floresta mas eu posso tá errado e você fazer uma boa história ele continua na caverna com Goblins fêmeas aí falando dela por favor não faz o protagonista ser um gado que pensa mais na cabeça de baixo
Great writing quality and world design is good but lacking more info about world. especially with the various POV referencing things like we should know it. now the bad... the MC is absolutely the worst MC I have read in years. I actually hope he will die and be replaced with a new one. he has no redeeming qualities, moody, weak, timid he is simply a sheeple who follows the herd. for all his desire for something new he is a coward to face it. basically he has the makings of a mob character. so why the he'll is he a MC.