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Twilight Hunter

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作者: WhiteAuthor

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John A. Ross, A Young Man from our world gets reborn into the world of Twilight.

With A new Name, John, now turned Arthur Moriarty tries his best to survive in a desperate economical and living situation.

Hunting has become his main method of survival whilst he attends Forks High school.

Everything was going alright, at least until he met her for the first time.

That meeting, changed his life forever.

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No Harem.

Human MC.

Alice.

Dark.

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French_Deadpool

frankly it's not a dark story, but boring and a bit stupid, once he understands that he is reincarnated in twilight, he doesn't say to himself that he must have a girlfriend (because it's a world of love stories) nor that he must have a power of some kind, no, just that he can sniff a little better than the others and that's it. frankly the mc is flat as a flounder, and the story is soporific ........

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OdinNeverSmile

well, I'm surprised to say this, this is a good Twilight I read here. (I don't read that many but the point stands and this is chapter 11 rn) MC is quite nice and I like his character. I hope this fanfic gets more chapters especially how it's going. I just hope there will be no bullshit Destiny Bond with the MC or he has like immune to it Bcs that's one of the cheapest and shitty tropes to get romance in my eyes and others too, especially letting a relationship organically play ou ist much better. I hope he stays Human and improves himself in another way maybe or is something unique. Maybe because it's a Vampire-related Universe. Maybe he gets something with blood. Like idk infuse the blood of animals or other creatures into himself to get some of thier traits or instincts, or maybe understand them better and get better at hunting them? or maybe something with ice or presence too because his character seems to lean toward those attributes/affinity. Nothing too strong but something stronger than normal humans but he still needs to put work and skill to fight supernatural creatures. Anyway, enough fanboying about abilities and possibilities. Simply I like this, I Want more of this, And I see potential.

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Jaay_B1rd

I'm surprised to say this, this is a good Twilight read here. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Rafael_Cabral_7563

Estou gostando da leitura, o plano de fundo do MC é muito interessante. Muito mistério envolvendo o próprio personagem, o que deixa aquele gosto de quero saber mais. Espero mais desenvolvimento e atualizações.

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masi_S
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sounds fun looking forward to more [img=recommend]

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Shrekster

Its a good story just like the other ones, i really like the start of the story. Just some really small and insignificant gramatical errors, but apart from that it's just how i like it, keep up the good work an don't think about ze haters

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Lyle_Herbst

Updates, please. Im enjoying the story. It's good

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Lilianna_Gorko

love this fic so far tbh my only downside is waiting for updates but can't bitch about that unless iIwant the quality to drop lmao so I'll be patient 💜

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Lyle_Herbst

I find dis work of the author, my favorite. It's just an amazing story, and I can't wait to see wat happens next

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Eli_Totherow_2456

very good read n̈nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

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_Neoth_

the writing quality is good and the all around story is good, can't wait for more chapters.

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TZoRoy22

I really like how the story is going, I hope it continues. I like how the MC is building up the interaction with the Cullens. I think the couple would be Alice, from what she said in her thoughts when she saw the MC's house.

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Jayjayempi

This is pretty cool, I read a bit of your other work and this one in particular looks really interesting, I hope you keep up the good work!

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