/ Book&Literature / Last True Remnant of Old Valyria

Last True Remnant of Old Valyria オリジナル

Last True Remnant of Old Valyria

Book&Literature 70 章 1.5M ビュー

4.21 (25 レビュー結果)

読む
詳細 目次

概要

An unknown powerful Dragon Lord with knowledge of the modern world and future comes into the turbulent time of the Dance of Dragons. With lineage greater than Targaryen could ever hope to achieve. What change would it bring to the fate of others??


Because I am new to this it takes hours to write one chapter so just give me some motivation with power stones and reviews.
And last English isn't my first language, and I am learning as I write.
Chao! Enjoy



patreon.com/Daeranyx_Drakonar

  1. Daeranyx_Drakonar
    Daeranyx_Drakonar 貢献した 155
  2. Jorah26252
    Jorah26252 貢献した 119
  3. Gilgamesh19
    Gilgamesh19 貢献した 82

週次パワーステータス

Rank -- 推薦 ランキング
Stone -- 推薦 チケット

あなたも好きかも

25レビュー

4.21

  • テキストの品質
  • アップデートの安定性
  • ストーリー展開
  • キャラクターデザイン
  • 世界の背景

あなたの考えを他の人と共有してください

レビューを書く
ANANTAVIJAYA1961

If you do not have content to write then don't write why make us waste our time . you wrote one chapter about him and wasted 6 chapters for your stupid and chapter numbers.

6mth
0 の返信を表示する
Daeranyx_Drakonar

This is first work so be magnanimous forgive my shamelessness. If you like my work do leave reviews here

6mth
5 の返信を表示する
YourDad_

The World Background and character Interactions are top notch but the Story Development ruined this Masterpiece. I know it was a bad decision to Ally with Targaryens but it still continued believing Author's abilities and he miserably failed me. Whatever i guess. Read it if you want the author have putted enough time in this but the MC is not up to my tastes

img
4mth
1 の返信を表示する
Romel_Rivera_3883

It's going very well I love the background story of the character, the development could improve a lot if he first gets involved in it and the moment of the dance arrives or removes the dragons from the targaryen, but that depends on the author and I respect his story a lot so it's just my opinion I would really appreciate it if it is updated more often[img=recommend]

ネタバレを明かす
6mth
1 の返信を表示する
m3gah1tss

Three paragraphs and I can see the heavy lack of punctuation marks. Grammarly free can easily solve that problem. Ps: how you write reviews with less than 150 characters?

6mth
3 の返信を表示する
Nfkmfh
LV 15 Badge

It looks promasing I will edit this review after chp 30 ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..……………… ………..………………

img
6mth
5 の返信を表示する
Typgamer456

good start can't wait to see how it goes

6mth
0 の返信を表示する
Bhrigu_Bhola

Don't you drop! I am already interested reading the title.

6mth
0 の返信を表示する
AlexPendragon

................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

6mth
1 の返信を表示する
Kavindu_Ruwanara

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💞💞💞💞💞 so far so good though a bit slow. But I suppose it is necessary to make the story. And it was a nice and enjoyable reading for me. Keep it up. I wish you best of luck to continue your wonderful work. Thanks. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

4mth
1 の返信を表示する
wizard_kitten

Es muy interesante por eso me gustaría seguir leyendo, es todo lo que diré y porfavor sigue actualizando más capítulos🙏♥️♥️♥️🐭......................... ..........................................................................

6mth
0 の返信を表示する
Aris82
LV 15 Badge

as a game of thrones fanfiction this one premise about a dragonlord is new one for me. the MC character is good with a nice storyline and waiting for more.

5mth
0 の返信を表示する
DaoistG08QKa

Great start to the story👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

ネタバレを明かす
6mth
0 の返信を表示する
BEAST_OP

More of this fanfic. And 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁plzjshsgshshshbshsgsgshshdgdgdhdhdhdhdhdhdbshshshshshhshshdhdhdhdgdgdgdgdgdggdgdgdgdgdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdhdggdgdgdhegehheheheheheheheh

6mth
0 の返信を表示する
Cooper_B

gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

3mth
0 の返信を表示する
Seito_Morningstar

Hey man ! Your fic is very interesting for many reasons but the main reason is that magic is used and the rituals are very interesting. Keep updating and keep cooking brotha !

4mth
1 の返信を表示する
Oleg_Nikitin

Поначалу мне было интересно читать, но когда начались эти пространные рассуждения и витиеватые описания, желания резко убавилось. [img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]

4mth
0 の返信を表示する
DaoistqkxYgY

Ещё главы 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

img
6mth
0 の返信を表示する
Agora1
LV 13 Badge

Very nice start to the story. I hope you are involved more in the story and character interaction, as the last few chapters were just general info and power boot up. anyways I really hope you continue the story...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

6mth
0 の返信を表示する
GoblinMAN

jklbbbbbbbbbbb;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; it good ........................................

img
1mth
0 の返信を表示する
最新リリース:
Chapter 69: The Shield 14 days ago

卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume

  1. Images 6 months ago

卷 1

  1. 1
    Wishes and Small Talk 6 months ago
  2. 2
    Into The ruins (1) 6 months ago
  3. 3
    Into the ruins (2) 6 months ago
  4. 4
    "sōvagon, Anarion" 6 months ago
  5. 5
    Above the clouds 6 months ago
  6. 6
    Leaving the Valysar 6 months ago
  7. 7
    Peaceful Times 6 months ago
  8. 8
    "Dracarys. Anarion" 6 months ago
  9. 9
    Skagos and Runes 6 months ago
  10. 10
    First Ritual 6 months ago
  11. 11
    Ancestors and the Old Gods 6 months ago
  12. 12
    From the ashes, she arises. 6 months ago
  13. 13
    Changes 6 months ago
  14. 14
    Introduction 6 months ago
  15. 15
    Stay on Capital 6 months ago
  16. 16
    Midday Meal 6 months ago
  17. 17
    Conversation Time 6 months ago
  18. 18
    Light Spar with Daemon 6 months ago
  19. 19
    Mindscape 5 months ago
  20. 20
    Meeting with Syrax & Caraxes 5 months ago
  21. 21
    21. Daemon's Thoughts 5 months ago
  22. 22
    Flight with Syrax and Caraxes 5 months ago
  23. 23
    23. Talk about The First Men Runes 5 months ago
  24. 24
    Corlys and Daemon 5 months ago
  25. 25
    25. The three Dragons of Volantis 5 months ago
  26. 26
    26. The true wild Dragon 5 months ago
  27. 27
    Conflict in the mind 5 months ago
  28. 28
    Reaction of Targaryen's 5 months ago
  29. 29
    Trip to Dragonstone 5 months ago
  30. 30
    Viserys's attempt 5 months ago
  31. 31
    Return to The Capital 4 months ago
  32. 32
    Telling the Velaryon's 4 months ago
  33. 33
    Alliance or not? 4 months ago
  34. 34
    Wealth of Valyria 4 months ago
  35. 35
    The Effects of Consuming Dragon's Blood 4 months ago
  36. 36
    Meeting the Queen of Dragons 4 months ago
  37. 37
    First Ritual of Laena 4 months ago
  38. 38
    Ritual's Benefits 4 months ago
  39. 39
    Something in the Mindscape 4 months ago
  40. 40
    40. Gratitude 4 months ago
  41. 41
    Terms of Contract 4 months ago
  42. 42
    Penalties of the Contract 4 months ago
  43. 43
    43. Timeskip 4 months ago
  44. 44
    Three Ingredients to enhance Anarion [1] 3 months ago
  45. 45
    The Last Ingredient 3 months ago
  46. 46
    Replying to Corlys 3 months ago
  47. 47
    Performing the Ritual 3 months ago
  48. 48
    Another method 3 months ago
  49. 49
    Warding Skagos 3 months ago
  50. 50
    The Queen's Labour 3 months ago
  51. 51
    The Birth 2 months ago
  52. 52
    Targaryen's Asking for The Ritual 2 months ago
  53. 53
    Skagos 2 months ago
  54. 54
    Way of persuasion 2 months ago
  55. 55
    Return to the Capital 2 months ago
  56. 56
    To Dragonstone 2 months ago
  57. 57
    The Windwyrm Tower 1 months ago
  58. 58
    The start of the Hunt 1 months ago
  59. 59
    The Fight begins [the Cannibal Vs. Caraxes and Meleys] 1 months ago
  60. 60
    The End of Fight between Dragons 1 months ago
  61. 61
    Thoughts of Vezofina 1 months ago
  62. 62
    Next move : A Keep of our own 1 months ago
  63. 63
    'Stonehall' 1 months ago
  64. 64
    Offering a choice 1 months ago
  65. 65
    An Achievement   1 months ago
  66. 66
    For Skagos! 1 months ago
  67. 67
    “A clean victory” 29 days ago
  68. 68
    Wulfgar Crowls 16 days ago
  69. 69
    The Shield 14 days ago