/ Book&Literature / Young Celestial Wizard [Celestial Grimoire, Harry Potter]
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Harry Potter gains the Celestial Grimoire on the night of his parents' death. Character development, power exploration and philosophy-based breakthroughs of magic and self. Omniversal travel to other worlds.
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レビューを書くThis is definitely in the top three of Harry Potter fanfics. The writing quality is amazing, the story development is crazy good, and the world background is being built upon. Plus, the character development is PEAK.
I don't write reviews often, but admittedly this book has earned one. The author is still learning and isn't perfect but this is absolutely one of the better works on this platform. The characters seem realistic and their behavior is not only consistent but also reasonable, and the 'system' in place isn't a main focus of the story, as while it does move and assist the plot, that all happens in a more natural way than most novels on this platform. Give this one a read[img=recommend]
Truly delightful in not only the way the characters are written, but the knowledge and background detail for every part is fantastic. An engaging read that I can't stop thinking about when I'm doing other things throughout my day... Someone send me a Celestial Grimoire, please!
This is great. I have read many hp fanfics but this one got me by surprise, specially the effects powers leave on the protagonist and their influence on his lifestyle is new. I like the mc is not a anti hero or villain love him being righteous.
When you let some cook and he actually does cook is what i felt reading this.... i like the developement andthe journey of harry going from naive little shit to and actual man
Don’t get me wrong, the story has a great premise and I am enjoy reading it. But while I appreciate the character development, I feel like you’re going a bit overboard. Almost half the novel so far is about him discovering himself and forming his mentality, this is supposed to be done gradually as he grows up. But you’re trying to turn an 8 year old (as of writing this at chapter 69) into someone with the maturity of a 30 year old all in the timespan of a year or two He is also stupidly OP for someone who has yet to even being his Hogwarts 1st year that he could most probably defeat and Hogwarts student Sorry for the criticism but I just had to voice my opinion Cheers
ネタバレを明かすGood day to all. I have been reading this book almost from the very beginning and I have something to say. I will say right away that English is not my native language, I partially use a translator. Do not judge strictly. So, let's begin. This story is one of the best about Harry Potter's childhood that I have ever read. The author perfectly conveys the changes in the protagonist's behavior, his values, moral compass and other little things. The hero grows up, makes moral mistakes, thinks about them, and then changes. The systematic is very well built in, does not draw attention to itself, but perfectly complements, making the work more complete, more interesting. There are questions about the strength of the protagonist, or rather very great strength, but this does not frighten, but entices. I hope the author will not cut abilities, invent crutches and so on, in order to underestimate his abilities. If you started writing in this style - keep writing, you are doing great. That's probably all. I am waiting for the soonest continuation, and to you, readers, enjoy reading this epic.
One of the few times I give out a positive review one of the best FanFiction on this site thank you for writing this
This is amazing story character development is really great as Well as world building and story development i hope for more. There are like 4 or 5 stories as good as this one really great
This has the writing quality I expect from Evoxius. OUTSTANDING. The plot is interesting. The characters feel like they are alive, having realistic personalities and motivations, growing and developing as events occur. The world feels immersive. My only hope is that the story concludes properly. I was here for Evoxius's last HP fanfic, Vast Sea Visualization. Despite how good it was, Evoxius stopped writing it before we even got halfway through. It doesn't even show up on Web Novel anymore. I'm hoping that this one doesn't get dropped.
Excellent story. The main character growth is stunning. The background interesting, but it's the MC cheat that really makes this story shine as it keeps the interest strong on an otherwise slice of life atmosphere.
Easily one of THE BEST fanfics on the site. The sophistication of the mc is crazy, the character development, magnificent. This is this only fanfic that captures the mc's childhood in such detail where every event has a reason. Definitely give it a read
It’s a fantastic read and I can’t recommend it enough. It takes a different more interesting approach on a lot of tropes that keeps you enthralled even when it’s a whole chapter on theories of something that doesn’t exist but makes more sense than it should. The melding of powers is very satisfying and the author’s imagination is great. The only downside is that some characters feel 2 dimensional but it doesn’t feel forced necessarily just awkward in some chapters. Give it a shot and I’m almost certain you’ll enjoy it. I hope the author finishes this story it is quickly becoming a favorite and I can’t wait to see where it goes.
This is a masterpiece. At the first chapters I thought that it would be the typical trashy system novel. However after HP starts living in Hogwarts and especially after staying with Flamels the world building, the philosophy behind the powers ups, the lore in ancient Greece and the unique approach to art are absolutely wonderful. Well done author! Keep up the good work.
I don’t leave reviews, not for lack of opinion, but because most works of WebNovel remain unfinished and I abhor leaving an opinion until the last word is written. But I have made an exception in the case of this work. The plot of This is somewhat mundane at first glance, but how the author utilises the humble origins is one of the best if not best examples of writing I have observed on this app. It is not just worth a read, it is worth study in terms of understanding, development and scope. I resoundingly recommend you read.
Absolute cinema, the way powers interact with each other and character development is perfect, 10 out of 10....................................................
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作者 Evoxius
Character development of Harry is good, and the other characters are not just 1 dimensional either. Powers are cool as well. Can't wait for more chapters (based on the current state of things at chapter 16). Thanks