THE RETURN OF THE LUNA HEIRESS

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Christa_Biney_1874

It quite novel and interesting hope it will continue

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Renante_Rafael

I like action than romance but still read this cuz it's good

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Yu_Su_9918

it's a nice story i never read this kind of story

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Mirela_Ponta

The story is nice. I love the begining and also the characters. Hope Rhea can escape her stepsisters and stepmother and also the Alpha would change his behaviour.

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Daisy_Pal

nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice

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Zainab_Alghazali

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Blessing_Muleya

looks like a good book I will give it a try ❤️🔥

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_SirAsh

The inner monologue of the alpha could use some work

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Rishabh_Pathania_

Keep up the good work …………………………………………….

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artiraha343

hmm, especially interesting , waiting for more ig

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Mounika_Dontireddy

Very interesting and cool loved the characters

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JOHNY_JOHNY

very good gkhvcgjjjviolknvyct ohgigucucyci

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Bilal_Anjum_6661

i think it's a good novel to read because the story concept is unique compare to other novels

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DaoistSvR67t

Looks good so Far, I Will reais more. Come for the evento and liked

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bell_darnell

Nice read look forward for moreNice read look forward for more

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Kiki_Kokkonen

I’m only in the beginning, it looks promising so far

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belladoo

The main ideas of the plot are quite promising and the FMC seems interesting so far. The pace of plot progression is also good despite only 12 chapters currently available; I feel like quite a lot has happened already, but not in an overwhelming way. In terms of improvements: - Much more attention is needed when proofreading and editing. There are frequent spelling and grammar mistakes that take away from the quality of the story. Grammarly or chatGPT can help a lot! - If the step family will continue to be antagonists for the FMC, they’d benefit from a bit more fleshing out so that they’re not just cardboard characters. Things to consider: reasons for the rivalry between the twins, more on how step mum met FMC’s father, whether the normal servants are treated as badly as FMC, etc.

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Han_Liang_Lim_5962

only a couple of chapters in but i’m hooked by the cinderella origin story and hoping for a alpha aztec redemption arc 😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨