nice development in the beginning so far
The inner monologue of the alpha could use some work
lol, with 500yrs mc's going to end up getting first place or sth
"Of course, this is the responsibility of your Senior Brothers and Sisters in the Unity Realm Stage. As for you, my disciple, your sole task upon venturing into the Great Vast World is to seize as many primordial resources possible and gain insights into the various Primordial Dao's. However you view it, it's both a tribulation and an opportunity!"
Forging Immortality through the Dao Seed
Eastern · Ichthyosaurus Fit
CRIIIIIIIIIINGE
"I'll show you exactly what my worth is!"
The Rise Of A Porter
Fantasy · AkshatArpit
honestly at this point even the cinderella/step-parent trope would be original
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The Rise Of A Porter
Fantasy · AkshatArpit
No, he only showed great cultivation for his age at the tournament. What would make him 6th order in the eyes of others is his ability to already comprehend origin sources as seen with the comments from fang jing's mentor.
Comprehension Ability: Creating and teaching the Dao in various worlds
Eastern · It's not Sunday