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Primordial Expanse: I have the Strongest Talent!

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作者: TheUngod

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In a future where humanity has already conquered the galaxy, a whole new realm of mystery and horrors beyond human comprehension opens up to them, the Primordial Expanse.

For as long as he could remember, Alex worked in the mines of an asteroid so desolate it didn't even have a name. But to him, this was home.

He knew that his future held nothing for him and he would die a lonely and forgotten death just like everyone else stuck on this godforsaken rock.

That was, until one day he wakes up to the realisation that he would die soon, as the Primordial Expanse called for him.

This mysterious realm is a place of promise and opportunity for many, but for people from the slums of society like Alex, it was only a curse that almost always guaranteed death.

Follow Alex on his journey though the Primordial Expanse as he navigates his way through battles, trials and enemies to carve out a space for himself at the peak of the universe.

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[WSA 2024]

This novel is purely a work of fiction, any names, locations and characters are all made up and do not depict or represent the real world.

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TheUngod

Obligatory shameless author review! This is my second official book, and I am taking this one much more seriously than my last one as I made some bad mistakes with that one that unfortunately led to it being dropped. But I learned a lot from writing my previous book and I'm putting my all into this novel from this point onwards! Happy reading!

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Art_Show

my best book , really i love this book, i think you can give one chance , dont be hesitate, will be a rising star over time [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Zook_51
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the author took huge inspiration from "Shadow Slave" and then made it entirely their own... This story is awesome, worth reading and adding to your library!

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DeadpanDeme

Okay, so my review is gonna be more critical than that of the other reviews. I’m going to update it as I read further until I either catch up or drop it. (Warning, the spoilers get more detailed the further down you get.)I will note the grammar is good. This is where the positive things end. As of where I’ve read to, chapter 30 something, the author seems to either have been writing without an outline or storyboard. So moments contradict each other. The speeds and strengths of characters in particular are highly inconsistent. I did the math and main character at his weakest and injured easily avoided and killed a 10m/s enemy. After getting massively stronger three times, main character is only 30m/s at fastest speed. As well, a different thing was only a bit faster than a horse before but was later 30+ times faster than main character. The characters are aweful in my opinion. Not a single character can think outside of the box, the author is dumbing all the characters down to the point a group of what is supposed to be hardened adventurers + mc follow a guy for four days into the forest. It’s the IRL equivalent of following a creepy man into his van because he offered to take you home, only thing is that you’re a grown man and know you shouldn’t go with him. Main character has not touched a book once despite being in an unfamiliar world for weeks. He’s also more naive than the average 10 year old. That would be a fine plot point if it was written better, it’s mostly been written as, oh I noticed this but ignored it. Or, “I’ve been too hopeful in this world, I’m gonna do better.” Then he forgets to do better. He also casually kills with no remorse despite living all his life in the mines. Which is also crazy that a universally united human federation allows that form of slavery to exist. The novel feels almost as though it is being written through the eyes of someone who has only read a few novels and purely wants their ideas on paper. Whether it’s true or not, I don’t know, but that’s how it feels. It also lacks descriptive language. It’s a very, this happened then that happened type novel. TLDR: The grammar is fine, the problem is the story itself and the lack of structure. I hope I have clearly articulated what I mean. Thanks for reading my review.

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Writing is decent, dialogue is mostly fine. People are a bit too two dimensional, but not the worst I have seen. Author needs to fill in some plot holes, though. The MC is so *dumb*! All he needs to do to level up is grind. He doesn't even need missions, or could take missions to kill low level creatures. Even if he doesn't know that beast cores don't help him as much as soul orbs, he does know that soul orbs help him get stronger. So at least he should be going out to the forest to kill beasts. Oh, wait. He killed a rabbit while still unrated and got a soul orb. And yet, author has him "running to the forest to kill animals for food." for a weeks, having no skills, no injuries, and yet no soul orbs drop? Author needs to explain that. Giving the benefit of the doubt on the updating stability here.

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Beluinus

I was tremendously enjoying the story and looking forward to how far the MC can go. But I just couldn't anymore. The world building was decent, with showing that both worlds are different enough and have different societies. It's basically a cut and paste of the beginning of and rough semantics of Shadow Slave, something the autor himself admitted. But the MC is just stupid. Repeatedly. Constantly forgets abilities he has, and has so many Ex Machinas to save his life in fights he should have no business participating in. Then you're constantly slapped in the face, over and over, about how special MC is. Like how much stronger for his level he is, and how much potential he has compared to others.

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Potato_Big

bro NGL i haven't read the novel but the cover is sick man

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New_6151

Its good. Felt a little like shadow slave but thats not a bad thing. The pacing is great to.

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sergioh1t

[Alert Spoiler - Cap 121] Does the MC have a hero complex, or is he just stupid? This cave arc is really annoying me—I was really enjoying this story, but now I'm not sure if I should continue. I'll probably read a few more chapters, though... Why is the MC going to fight someone he knows almost nothing about, who has a high chance of killing him? To save people in a world he knows very little about? It's worth noting that he can already return to his own universe—he's completed his objective. He could even just go train somewhere else if he doesn't want to go back yet... But no, he prefers to risk his life constantly and in every possible way.

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DaoistKSbLen

Ok, so, several points! It's similar to shadow slave , that's a positive thing, unfortunately it didn't got me because the writing has some inconsistencies. 1) It lacks context and environmental description. The fight in the forest, what forest, what treas for example? How a boy that always lived in a asteroid ( mining) knows what a forest or treas are if he doesn't even know what horses are? 2) He has a fight with a wild carnivorous 1meter tall rabbit. The rabbit slices and wounds his leg. He defeats the rabbit. And then proceeds to run for 20km???? With a wounded leg??? 20km??? 3) He was in a camp with 1000 people, was the only survivor of a monster attack. Later he defeats the rabbit there. He skins the rabbit ( in like 10min?) and makes a bag with his skin. Lol ( without waiting to dry the blood? To do a bag like this you need to dry the skiing for days), and in the middle of thousands of death people he couldn't find a bag? No one had a bag? Incongruity like this gets me out of the reading completely. And it continues on and on.

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Fairn
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I love most aspects of this novel, except one thing.. the romance, and how much of an idiot the protagonist is. he kills a king class beast and is severely injured at the end, and knows his orbs can heal and help him recover, yet he doesn't use them and just the story brushes over that. Mira is an annoying aspect of the story as well, and their reactions to things differ each time. He saw people die, felt nothing and didn't care, but then later he saw the same thing and he got depressed and sad and thinking about life just so the novel can give him a special moment with Mira, which kept happening more than once. Nothing is consistent as their characters/personalities changes depending on the novel. The Author is an idiot that just writes as he goes, the only redeeming part of the novel is the world and his cheat, other than that, the characters make no sense sometimes and the romance or interaction with Mira makes no sense as well, like after knowing each other for a few months, he says she's like family and tells her his secrets, even though she is such an unlikable person as she spies on him when he doesn't tell her what he's hiding. The relationship aspect and Mira are a 0/10

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Piyush_Majee

Its not everyday I come across novels this bad, riddled with so many plot holes. The MC remains a complete dimwit yet somehow unravels so-called "genius" schemes that are nothing more than painfully obvious setups. Characters appear out of nowhere, with no explanation of how they got there, as if the story itself forgets about continuity. Their behaviors are inconsistent, often defying logic, making it impossible to take any of them seriously.

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GreyH
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A pretty good and interesting story , the fights are not dragged too much which is what I like. The characters are fleshed out and have different personalities , the bad guys or the villains are not dumb they have their own schemes and stuff. The mc is a teenager who was not exposed to the outer world so he is a little naive but certainly not dumb and he adapts very quickly so him being dumb won't be a problem . Overall a pretty interesting story and good easy to read writing make it a must read if you like these types of story. Pretty excited to see where this story will go. SPOILER AHEAD !!! Message for Author - Keep going Author your work is certainly a top tier , Also I like the way how Alex and Mira relationship is going . I would certainly like to see their relation grow more . And maybe how they fight together in duo .

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DaoistVv6PHh

story telling and world building is decent. but the characters development, discussions conversations, are horrible. and I mean literally horrible. plus the plot armor is too big. and character is dumb I mean who would accept a meeting with strangers

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Omar_S_7563

I think the author is decent and so is the writing but I give up with this mc. Over 280 chapters in and little to no mental development from him. Hero complex (and im someone who doesnt mond that and dislikes ruthless MCs) but does everything with 0 preparation, takes unnecessary risks and alwYs fights to the point of collapsing in a jungle or a battlefield. He should be dead atleast 4 times.

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wrongaccounttt

I would have loved this story more if the romance was delayed, for some reason I lost interest the moment the M.C started a relationship with Mira.

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Darius_Chromwell

Why does it feel like the main character is not actually the main character but rather the comedic relief… where can I go to read Mira’s side of the story if anyone is actually the main character then it’s her!

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TheLONGnose

More chapters author! More chapters author! More chapters author! More chapters author! More chapters author! More chapters author! More chapters author! More chapters author! More chapters author! More chapters author!

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Jay_7772

I like where this story is headed and the interactions between the many different characters is fun to see [img=recommend] [img=update]. Need more chapters

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DaoistDdKSaa

A good mixture of mystery and fantasy, combined with the fun and exciting aspects of Super Gene and Shadow Slave. I'm excited to see where the direction of this novel is headed in the future!

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Chapter 566: Advancements 17 days ago

卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume

  1. Author's note 10 months ago

卷 1

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    Alex 11 months ago
  2. 2
    The Curse 11 months ago
  3. 3
    Commoner? 11 months ago
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    Danger 11 months ago
  5. 5
    Aftermath 11 months ago
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    Loot 11 months ago
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    Purple orbs? 11 months ago
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    Human Might 11 months ago
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    Urgent report 11 months ago
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    Adventurers 11 months ago
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    Adventurer License 11 months ago
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    Sleeper 11 months ago
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    The Search 11 months ago
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    The Hunt 11 months ago
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    Mission Complete 11 months ago
  16. 16
    Compensation 11 months ago
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    The usage of beast cores 11 months ago
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    Beast cores and Soul orbs 11 months ago
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    Weapons 11 months ago
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    Naïve 11 months ago
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    Interested? 11 months ago
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    Introductions 11 months ago
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    Deja vu 11 months ago
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    The chase 10 months ago
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    One down 10 months ago
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    True face 10 months ago
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    All out battle 10 months ago
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    Law of the jungle 10 months ago
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    Flame 10 months ago
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    Escape 10 months ago
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    Final showdown 10 months ago
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    Yup, we're dead. 10 months ago
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    Chaos 10 months ago
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    Common enemy 10 months ago
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    Trying something new 10 months ago
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    Rowan 10 months ago
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    Coordination 10 months ago
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    Forest Bear 10 months ago
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    Crimson Gang 10 months ago
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    Rowan's background 10 months ago
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    Barrier deactivated 10 months ago
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    Tragedy 10 months ago
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    Return 10 months ago
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    Manager Han 10 months ago
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    Dystopia 10 months ago
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    Goodbye, rock 10 months ago
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    Elis 10 months ago
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    Strength Test 10 months ago
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    Speed Test 10 months ago
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    Is that it? 10 months ago
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    Aptitude 10 months ago
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    Exposed 10 months ago
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    Phoenix Fury 10 months ago
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    Capital Prime 10 months ago
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    No friends, no hobbies, no money 10 months ago
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    Mira 10 months ago
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    Golden Presence 10 months ago
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    Exam rules 10 months ago
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    Arrival 10 months ago
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    Swamp 10 months ago
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    Transformation 10 months ago
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    Drawback 10 months ago
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    Human? 10 months ago
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    Exhausted reserves 10 months ago
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    Shock and Awe 10 months ago
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    Four days 10 months ago
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    White Tiger 10 months ago
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    Divine beast 10 months ago
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    Nice 10 months ago
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    Results 10 months ago
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    Name calling 10 months ago
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    The truth 10 months ago
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    Scammed? 9 months ago
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    Mira's reward 9 months ago
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    Goodbye, for now. 9 months ago
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    Dropped in 9 months ago
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    Oasis 9 months ago
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    Encounter 9 months ago
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    Fight or Flight 9 months ago
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    Triumph 9 months ago
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    Shadow Wolf 9 months ago
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    Mutant 9 months ago
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    Not Alone 9 months ago
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    Other humans 9 months ago
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    Who are you? 9 months ago
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    Wandering warrior 9 months ago
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    Monty Town 9 months ago
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    Martha 9 months ago
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    The Mayor 9 months ago
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    Meeting 9 months ago
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    Intentions 9 months ago
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    The deal 9 months ago
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    Departing 9 months ago
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    The ruins 9 months ago
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    A terrifying thought 9 months ago
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    Desperate Gambit 9 months ago
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    Adrenaline rush 9 months ago
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    Red orb 9 months ago
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    Secret revealed 9 months ago
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    The plan 9 months ago
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    A formidable foe 9 months ago
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    Backed into a corner 9 months ago
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    Nightmare 9 months ago
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    After 9 months ago
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    Soul 9 months ago
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    For your own safety 9 months ago
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    Back so soon? 9 months ago
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    Cut the crap 9 months ago
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    The truth 9 months ago
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    Shocking revelations 9 months ago
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    Escaped 9 months ago
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    Evermoor city 9 months ago
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    Late arrival 9 months ago
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    Information Gathering 9 months ago
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    Narrow minded 9 months ago
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    Drawing near 9 months ago
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    Found you! 9 months ago
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    The wrath of the pack 9 months ago
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    What the f*ck?? 9 months ago
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    Heartache 9 months ago
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    Just a hunter 9 months ago
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    Caught 9 months ago
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    Warning 9 months ago
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    Lay low 9 months ago
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    Count Desmond 9 months ago
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    D- rank 9 months ago
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    Against the clock 9 months ago
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    Martha's gift 9 months ago
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    Arrival 9 months ago
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    Blood fuelled rage 9 months ago
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    The Count's fury 9 months ago
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    Failure 9 months ago
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    Variant beast 9 months ago
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    Surviving, but at what cost? 9 months ago
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    Back, again. 8 months ago
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    Ring! Ring! 8 months ago
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    Breakdown 8 months ago
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    Swapped? 8 months ago
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    Mars 8 months ago
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    Registration 8 months ago
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    Settling in 8 months ago
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    Class begins 8 months ago
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    Rank assessment 8 months ago
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    Talent assessment 8 months ago
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    Potential 8 months ago
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    Energy assessment 8 months ago
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    Mira's assessment 8 months ago
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    Combat assessment 8 months ago
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    Nikolas Stein 8 months ago
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    Light 8 months ago
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    Frustrating loss 8 months ago
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    After 8 months ago
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    Mira's performance 8 months ago
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    Unexpected confession 8 months ago
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    Elemental Control 8 months ago
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    Nerves 8 months ago
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    Virtual Reality 8 months ago
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    The trial begins 8 months ago
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    The Whisperer 8 months ago
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    Don't look 8 months ago
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    The Book 8 months ago
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    What on earth is he doing? 8 months ago
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    Unconventional plan 8 months ago
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    Sugar 8 months ago
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    Completion and testing 8 months ago
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    Plan in action 8 months ago
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    Test over 8 months ago
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    Mira's exam 8 months ago
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    Jonathan 8 months ago
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    First year rankings 8 months ago
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    Rowan again? 8 months ago
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    Sparring 8 months ago
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    Orientation 8 months ago
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    Library 8 months ago
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    Energy Condensing Techniques 8 months ago
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    Heart of the Phoenix 8 months ago
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    Called out of the blue 8 months ago
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    Capital Building 8 months ago
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    The Promised Rewards! 8 months ago
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    Revelations 8 months ago
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    True nature 8 months ago
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    Remnant souls 8 months ago
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    Searching for an answer 8 months ago
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    Dr. Arlen Zoric 8 months ago
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    Caught in the act 8 months ago
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    Danger lurks around every corner 8 months ago
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    Bold move 8 months ago
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    The first lecture 8 months ago
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    Religion 8 months ago
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    Taking it slow 8 months ago
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    Trust 8 months ago
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    The past 8 months ago
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    Officer Jones 7 months ago
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    Hope 7 months ago
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    The calm before the storm 7 months ago
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    Illusion of freedom 7 months ago
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    Breaking news! 7 months ago
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    The Final Frontier 7 months ago
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    Emergency meeting 7 months ago
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    Uncertain future 7 months ago
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    Dissatisfaction 7 months ago
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    A week 7 months ago
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    Breaking through 7 months ago
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    Shock 7 months ago
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    Where? 7 months ago
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    Phoenix 7 months ago
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    Assimilation 7 months ago
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    Questions without answers 7 months ago
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    Changes 7 months ago
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    Phoenix Flames 7 months ago
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    I want what he's eating... 7 months ago
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    Red Demon race 7 months ago
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    Second Soul studies lecture 7 months ago
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    Enlightenment 7 months ago
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    I was spying on you 7 months ago
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    I have something to tell you 7 months ago
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    Mission hunting 7 months ago
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    Ceres-9 7 months ago
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    Intimidation 7 months ago
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    Mutant C rank beast 7 months ago
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    Gut feeling 7 months ago
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    White wolf 7 months ago
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    Realisation 7 months ago
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    D rank 7 months ago
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    Making an entrance 7 months ago
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    Achilles heel 7 months ago
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    A new strategy 7 months ago
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    A daring effort 7 months ago
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    Becoming famous (1) 7 months ago
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    Becoming famous (2) 7 months ago
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    Stars? 7 months ago
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    Stupid 7 months ago
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    Just who picked me up? 7 months ago
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    Snap! 7 months ago
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    Pirates 7 months ago
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    Tough luck 7 months ago
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    Interrogation 7 months ago
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    Information 7 months ago
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    Yaron 7 months ago
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    Dwindling numbers 7 months ago
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    Underestimated 7 months ago
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    Warp 7 months ago
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    Good news? 7 months ago
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    I'm Human! 7 months ago
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    Report 7 months ago
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    Newfound fame 7 months ago
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    President Price 7 months ago
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    Prodigy 7 months ago
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    Virtue's Edge 7 months ago
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    Karlax 7 months ago
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    A familiar face 7 months ago
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    Training 7 months ago
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    Mind-Body Synchronisation 7 months ago
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    Progress 7 months ago
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    Core Principles 7 months ago
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    Swordsmanship 7 months ago
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    Why did I sign up for this... 7 months ago
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    Emergency 7 months ago
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    Four months 7 months ago
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    Federation Under Attack 7 months ago
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    Bad news 7 months ago
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    Plight of the Human race 7 months ago
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    Hope 6 months ago
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    Game changing information 6 months ago
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    Special announcement 6 months ago
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    Drafted 6 months ago
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    Departure 6 months ago
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    King 6 months ago
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    Colonel Margit 6 months ago
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    Orders? What are those? 6 months ago
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    Growth 6 months ago
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    Red Demon Prodigy 6 months ago
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    Selithia 6 months ago
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    60:40 6 months ago
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    Ensnared 6 months ago
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    Soul fire 6 months ago
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    Comeback 6 months ago
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    Rakul 6 months ago
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    What!? 6 months ago
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    Alliance Fleet 6 months ago
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    Returning to the battlefield 6 months ago
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    'Sticky' situation... 6 months ago
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    An even stickier situation 6 months ago
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    Scanning the entire planet 6 months ago
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    Abyssal Trench 6 months ago
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    Control Room 6 months ago
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    Escape 6 months ago
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    Investigation 6 months ago
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    Roadblock 6 months ago
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    What is basic control? 6 months ago
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    Success 6 months ago
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    Power scaling 6 months ago
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    Mira's arrival 6 months ago
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    Commander Kines 6 months ago
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    Four planets 6 months ago
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    Eldaris 6 months ago
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    Red Demon scheme 6 months ago
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    A beast? 6 months ago
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    Stupid or smart? 6 months ago
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    Into the dragon's den 6 months ago
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    Locked in 6 months ago
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    Hard fought 6 months ago
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    Ahead of schedule 6 months ago
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    It's just me! 6 months ago
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    Are you really that stupid? 6 months ago
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    Good riddance 6 months ago
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    10 seconds 6 months ago
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    Misunderstanding 6 months ago
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    So close 6 months ago
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    A familiar face 6 months ago
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    A battle of taunts 6 months ago
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    Dark silver energy 6 months ago
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    Varkoth vs Alex 6 months ago
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    Two dominating auras 6 months ago
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    Showdown 6 months ago
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    Clarity 6 months ago
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    C tier 6 months ago
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    Mixup 6 months ago
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    2v1 6 months ago
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    Grand Scheme 6 months ago
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    Mira (1) 5 months ago
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    Mira (2) 5 months ago
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    Where is she? 5 months ago
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    Closer to the answers 5 months ago
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    Neat trick 5 months ago
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    Back, again 5 months ago
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    Mystery Woman (1) 5 months ago
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    Mystery Woman (2) 5 months ago
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    Siren (1) 5 months ago
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    Siren (2) 5 months ago
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    Devastating damage 5 months ago
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    Clue 5 months ago
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    The edge 5 months ago
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    A daring idea 5 months ago
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    Nicholas (1) 5 months ago
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    Nicholas (2) 5 months ago
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    5v1 5 months ago
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    Bound 5 months ago
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    Shame 5 months ago
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    Frustrated and desperate 5 months ago
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    Pillar of Light 5 months ago
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    An unexpected entrance 5 months ago
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    No mercy 5 months ago
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    Lover's Embrace 5 months ago
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    Alex's requirements 5 months ago
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    The road 5 months ago
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    Robbery in progress 5 months ago
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    Crash 5 months ago
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    Bandit 5 months ago
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    Tenebrus 5 months ago
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    Augustine family 5 months ago
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    VIP pass 5 months ago
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    Insignia 5 months ago
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    Overboard 5 months ago
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    Tenebrus city 5 months ago
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    Not eligible! 5 months ago
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    Looking for information 5 months ago
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    On the hunt 5 months ago
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    Hunting (1) 5 months ago
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    Hunting (2) 5 months ago
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    Black leopard 5 months ago
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    'Newbies' 5 months ago
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    Insignia 5 months ago
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    Rothwind 5 months ago
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    Mikhail 5 months ago
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    Revelations 5 months ago
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    Surprises all around 5 months ago
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    Armour 5 months ago
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    Back on the Grind 5 months ago
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    Instincts Screaming 5 months ago
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    A terrifying feeling 5 months ago
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    King 5 months ago
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    Ignite! 5 months ago
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    All or nothing 5 months ago
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    The smoke fades 5 months ago
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    Emotions 5 months ago
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    Announcement 4 months ago
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    Unprecedented 4 months ago
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    The plot thickens 4 months ago
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    Robed figures 4 months ago
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    A slight problem 4 months ago
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    Soft landing 4 months ago
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    Ermmm 4 months ago
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    Finally, some clothes! 4 months ago
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    Not here! 4 months ago
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    Crowning achievement 4 months ago
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    Completed 4 months ago
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    Royalty 4 months ago
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    Surprise, surprise 4 months ago
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    Gift 4 months ago
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    Origin of Soul Orbs 4 months ago
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    Did I forget to mention this...? 4 months ago
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    Big changes 4 months ago
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    So close to freedom! 4 months ago
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    The final push 4 months ago
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    Space? 4 months ago
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    Feeling sentimental 4 months ago
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    Clean 4 months ago
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    Scared 4 months ago
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    Young girl 4 months ago
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    Bullet dodged... 4 months ago
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    Agreement 4 months ago
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    Is that a threat? 4 months ago
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    Empty threat 4 months ago
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    Unexpected circumstances 4 months ago
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    Escape plan 4 months ago
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    Fury 4 months ago
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    A little bit of trolling... 4 months ago
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    Nostalgia 4 months ago
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    Goodbyes 4 months ago
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    War 4 months ago
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    Back again 4 months ago
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    Mistaken 4 months ago
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    Armour of the Evernight Sovereign 4 months ago
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    Celebrations 4 months ago
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    What's that? 4 months ago
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    Pitiful 4 months ago
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    Don't think, just do 4 months ago
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    News spreads quickly 4 months ago
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    Impressive 4 months ago
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    Display of power 4 months ago
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    A few days 4 months ago
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    Demon headquarters 4 months ago
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    It all happened so suddenly... 4 months ago
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    Grief 4 months ago
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    The memory 4 months ago
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    Phoenix Rebirth 4 months ago
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    Miracle 4 months ago
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    Revenge 4 months ago
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    Gorath 4 months ago
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    Below the surface 4 months ago
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    Observation 4 months ago
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    Mining operation 4 months ago
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    Overseer 4 months ago
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    No desire for destruction 4 months ago
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    An offer 4 months ago
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    Response 4 months ago
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    Do I look dead to you? 4 months ago
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    Donald 4 months ago
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    Potential 4 months ago
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    Where was I 4 months ago
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    Out of patience 4 months ago
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    A voice 4 months ago
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    Stabilising 4 months ago
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    Retrieval 4 months ago
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    Thank you 4 months ago
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    Gift 4 months ago
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    Mira's gift 4 months ago
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    Empty 4 months ago
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    Donald 3 months ago
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    Scheme 3 months ago
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    Calling a bluff 3 months ago
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    Steps ahead 3 months ago
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    Change 3 months ago
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    Questions 3 months ago
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    Mutterings of a Mad Man 3 months ago
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    Turning back 3 months ago
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    Locked in 3 months ago
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    Temptations 3 months ago
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    Confrontation 3 months ago
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    Devestation 3 months ago
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    Is it over...? 3 months ago
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    Return 3 months ago
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    Reunion 3 months ago
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    Mortal Bindings 3 months ago
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    Both complete 3 months ago
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    Farnes' story 3 months ago
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    Traitor? 3 months ago
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    Criminals 3 months ago
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    Like a Plague 3 months ago
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    Disarray 3 months ago
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    Criminals 3 months ago
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    Garmis 3 months ago
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    Toying 3 months ago
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    Iron Vultures 3 months ago
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    Gearing up for war 3 months ago
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    Taunting 3 months ago
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    Vira 3 months ago
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    Corax 3 months ago
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    Change of plans 3 months ago
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    Phoenix 3 months ago
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    Unknown lifeform 3 months ago
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    Ripple Effect 3 months ago
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    What...? 3 months ago
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    Knock! Knock! 3 months ago
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    Who? 3 months ago
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    You can call me Phoenix 2 months ago
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    Victory? 2 months ago
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    Celebrations 2 months ago
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    News 2 months ago
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    I'm Not Satisfied 2 months ago
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    Clickbait 2 months ago
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    Considerations 2 months ago
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    Huge news 2 months ago
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    Special announcement 2 months ago
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    New beginnings 2 months ago
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    How long??? 2 months ago
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    The Jewel 2 months ago
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    Family ties 2 months ago
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    Family problems 2 months ago
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    Althea 2 months ago
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    You know nothing 2 months ago
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    Marvel of Engineering 2 months ago
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    Departure 2 months ago
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    Andromeda 2 months ago
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    Touchdown 2 months ago
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    Panic 2 months ago
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    Desperate 1 months ago
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    Leon 1 months ago
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    I need to see her 1 months ago
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    Under arrest 1 months ago
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    Interrogation 1 months ago
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    Red Alert 1 months ago
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    Time is precious 1 months ago
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    Colossal ship 1 months ago
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    Hardened resolve 1 months ago
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    Yaron 1 months ago
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    Chaos on the battlefield 1 months ago
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    A hopeless endevour 1 months ago
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    A battle of life and death (1) 1 months ago
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    A battle of life and death (2) 1 months ago
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    A battle of life and death (3) 1 months ago
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    A battle of life and death (4) 1 months ago
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    A battle of life and death (5) 1 months ago
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    A battle of life and death (6) 1 months ago
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    Pristine condition 1 months ago
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    Splash! 1 months ago
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    Evolution 1 months ago
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    Dread 1 months ago
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    What is going on down there? 1 months ago
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    Escape! Everyone! 1 months ago
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    A gamble 1 months ago
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    Brontes 1 months ago
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    Shocked to the core 1 months ago
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    Debut 1 months ago
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    Awkward silence 1 months ago
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    To tell, or not to tell? 1 months ago
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    Everybody has their own secrets 1 months ago
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    Strength 1 months ago
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    Guess who's back 1 months ago
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    Back again 1 months ago
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    What to do... 1 months ago
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    Disguise 1 months ago
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    Name and purpose 1 months ago
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    A tamer 1 months ago

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