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ZARQA

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作者: M0M0KA

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Dive back in time, to the depths of the desert, and watch the old stories unfold before your eyes. A story of treasure hunting, betrayal, and destiny.

When a gruesome future is all you see, how can you change it?

When you're foretold to fail, how should you move on?

Zarqa, the girl who saw beyond time, sought to find answers.

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Legend says that Zarqa had sharp eyes that could look far away in the distance. But what if that wasn’t the end of it, what if her eyes were seeing far beyond not only space, but time? What if Zarqa was blessed with a prophecy, one that could save her dying village from destruction?

Just as they thought they had no way to survive, Zarqa learns of a way to protect her village from demolition. Naturally, no one believed her, for no one but the Almighty could see beyond the present.

They forgot the Almighty offers knowledge to those whom he deems of worth. And Zarqa was one of them. Having to trudge an arduous path and go through a great adventure, Zarqa seeks to find the solution to all of their problems, a treasure said to have the power to change all.

Pitted against magical traps and the mysteries of the deserts, she finds unexpected company in Ali Baba, the poor kid with the sticky fingers, and his crow Morjana...
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This is my first original long story here and is also a WSA 2024 Entry.
I ask that you give it a try and hope you enjoy it :D

Also, note that English is not my first language... And it's not my second either.

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This book has many openings, check them out:

[General opening of the book:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yVxnu5R3vws]


[Baghdad Arc's opening: https://youtu.be/GwJIJ2Kn0FI]


[Two Heavens Arc's opening: https://youtu.be/NO1C0ngBVjg]


[Two Heavens Arc's ending: https://youtu.be/hO-XPQsCPFw]


[Cursed Ring Arc's Opening: https://youtu.be/PUF4H98y2B0]


[Ending: https://youtu.be/1wQ_aJVFhx0]

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Updated weekly, 2 chapters on weekends.

Please don't let the first paragraphs fool you. This isn't a story from the first person's POV.

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    UBI_Master

    "Morjana" I see what you did there. : D Keep updating, i have high hope for this story.

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    M0M0KA

    This is not a review as much as author making a few things clear. First of all, this book will continue on. This is my first original book out there ever, and I have no intention of abandoning it. So unless something out of my hand happened, this book will continue to the very end. Second, unfortunately, I'm not a full time author. As this book doesn't generate revenue, I can not focus solely on it. As a result, it has a weekly update instead of daily. I ask for your understanding. Last but not least, yep, this isn't your typical Webnovel. I just had a story I wanted to tell and wrote it without consideration for what's trending or not. If you're an adventurous soul who would like to try new things, give it a chance. Perhaps you would like it!

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    Ash_Monarch

    Ten chapters in, and I can safely say I'm impressed. This novel has exceeded all the expectations I had of it, from the start. While it's not your conventional WN (based on where it is set amongst other things), the writing quality is insanely good. Like, really, really good. In fact, I think it trumps the majority of novels on this platform (not necessarily in terms of using complicated or sophisticated words, but as a fellow writer, I can appreciate good quality when I say it). So far, story development has been satisfactory, with the pace being neither too slow, nor too fast. Character Design is also great, with the author utilising different themes to bring them to life. I particularly have a soft spot for Zarqa, and Alibaba. Update stability is consistent, tho due to some irl circumstances, the release rate can't be higher. Which is absolutely fine. As long as there's still chapters being uploaded, that's all that matters 😌 Lastly, since I've only just finished the introductory arc, I can't speak much about world background. But after getting a glimpse of the author's skill, I'm sure it'd also be great. P.s. Great job so far, Author! Don't be discouraged by the lack of readers, you have a gem in your hands 🥳🥳🥳

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    M0M0KA

    Apparently, reviewing one's work is a shameless tradition of Webnovel, and I shall follow through with it 😋 Jokes aside, I'm not fit to judge my own work, because for me, it's something I worked hard on and of course, I will find it interesting. So I will leave away any judgment. It's up to you to tell me what you think of it :D Don't, however, be fooled by the low number of reviews and collections, it's only because I couldn't update daily during the promotion period for new books, which lowered the exposure. Worry not, though, for I've got a good number of chapters stacked, so, the daily update is on!! Please enjoy it 😃

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    Themasterofsystems

    Great story and I love it very reliant on source material

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    Nessrin_Zain

    A great story for any starting reader. The lore and concept is interesting and well researched. Give it a try, you won't regret it.👌

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    manaso_4156

    I LOVE IT! the background of this story is interesting, the narrative is well-written. zarqa is both strong and adorable. thank you author for the story really enjoy it!!

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    Chaima_Gharbi

    Good job, I appreciate it ❤️ A lot of hard work had been poured into this novel! Keep it up!!!!!!! I want to read more!!!!!!!!👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

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    Yuno_Jiro

    Started this off thinking it was going to be a sweet story, but boy, was I wrong. Firstly, I love the slight contrast between Zarqa and Ali Baba, with Zarqa being raised by her dad while Ali Baba was being raised by his mother, both of them having lost one other parent. Secondly, this book has one of the best transitions I have ever read ok the platform. The dark elements that not only feature fantasy but also touch on the reality of humans makes this feel all the more real. I wanna rant about how well written this piece is and how authentic it feels. This is a unique take on webnovels and I've fallen in love with the book. 10000000/10🩷💯

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    Balkis_Slimene

    I liked a lot this novel In fact , the fantasy spirit discusses many topics and givethe readers an idea how far we can go with our imagination ..i liked alsow the twist part ...it plays a huge part in the excitement factor ...i believe that alwats the twist part is a big indication of the creativity of the author and its potentials in coming up always with new and unexpected ideas .i didn t finish reading yet but i highly believe that i won't be disappointed at all.. because as they say practice makes perfect ....so the more the better...we can add as a notice that many properties expresses how big is the role that plays the passion in the writing side of the author..it is transfered within each word and each idea...this couldn't been anything but a sighnificance of the limitless capabilities af a writer...nothing but the beetter luck.. I hope i didn t spoil any of the syory told . I gave this review because i m trying to give readers the enthusiasm to read for this author ...it shouldn t be missed at all

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    LadyyAngel

    The story weaves elements of fantasy, history, and adventure. The plot is well paced. I loved the arabic influence reminding me of the old tales! Highly recommended!

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    Thouraya_Jamai

    I just finished reading, and it was fantastic! The characters were well-developed and the storyline kept me hooked from start to finish It's a really good story, I love it I can't wait to know how this story will go forward.

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    zowji
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    This is a great story for those who enjoy a well-paced novel. The author excels in terms of writing quality, character development, world-building, and overall storytelling. It's remarkable how well-written this novel is, especially considering that English is not the author's first language! Please keep writing author and keep up the good work!

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    UelUel

    As a fan of Sindbad and Alibaba, I can't wait to read and know how this story will go forward... Keep writing and don't stop 😊

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    卷 1

    1. 1
      Through The Golden Rimmed Mirror: A Dying Town 10 months ago
    2. 2
      A Thief 10 months ago
    3. 3
      A Vision 10 months ago
    4. 4
      A Visitor 10 months ago
    5. 5
      An Ally 10 months ago
    6. 6
      The Moving Forest 9 months ago
    7. 7
      Fire 9 months ago
    8. 8
      And He Ran 9 months ago
    9. 9
      A Miracle 9 months ago
    10. 10
      A Journey 9 months ago
    11. 11
      An Antique Shop 9 months ago
    12. 12
      Shahrazad 9 months ago
    13. 13
      A Lead 9 months ago
    14. 14
      Deciding over a hot meal 9 months ago
    15. 15
      The Unexpected Answer 9 months ago
    16. 16
      A Valley of Treasures 9 months ago
    17. 17
      The Worst Mistake For A Thief 9 months ago
    18. 18
      Treasure Hunters 8 months ago
    19. 19
      Jamal 8 months ago
    20. 20
      A Trap 8 months ago
    21. 21
      The City of Gold 8 months ago
    22. 22
      Venturing Through the Maze of Gold 8 months ago
    23. 23
      The Gate of The Setting Sun 8 months ago
    24. 24
      The Hall of Screams 8 months ago
    25. 25
      The Secret Passage 8 months ago
    26. 26
      The Rising Sun 8 months ago
    27. 27
      Sand Scorpion 8 months ago
    28. 28
      Jamal's Answer 8 months ago
    29. 29
      To Baghdad 8 months ago
    30. 30
      Welcome Home Sindbad 8 months ago
    31. 31
      A Barter 8 months ago
    32. 32
      A Very Small World 8 months ago
    33. 33
      Dancing With Snakes 7 months ago
    34. 34
      A Forbidden Name 7 months ago
    35. 35
      A Poisonous Dart 7 months ago
    36. 36
      Harun's Treasure Trove 7 months ago
    37. 37
      The Returning Troops 7 months ago
    38. 38
      A Rescue Request 7 months ago
    39. 39
      Tracking 7 months ago
    40. 40
      The Lions Slayer 7 months ago
    41. 41
      A Missing Person 7 months ago
    42. 42
      The Black Sand Snake 7 months ago
    43. 43
      Rescue and Back Up 7 months ago
    44. 44
      We're The Same 7 months ago
    45. 45
      The Hashashins 7 months ago
    46. 46
      His Worst Night 7 months ago
    47. 47
      An Unescapable Nightmare 7 months ago
    48. 48
      A Failed Attack 7 months ago
    49. 49
      The Thorny Way Of Deserts 7 months ago
    50. 50
      Figure It Out On Your Own 7 months ago
    51. 51
      An Ambush 7 months ago
    52. 52
      A Snake Bite 7 months ago
    53. 53
      The Youngest Physician 7 months ago
    54. 54
      Continue Saving Lives 7 months ago
    55. 55
      Great Sorcerer 7 months ago
    56. 56
      A Sleepless Night 7 months ago
    57. 57
      An Unexpected Lead 7 months ago
    58. 58
      Harun Vs Sindbad 7 months ago
    59. 59
      She Is My Savior 7 months ago
    60. 60
      Tallal And Zaid 6 months ago
    61. 61
      A Brawl In The Library 6 months ago
    62. 62
      An Old Legend 6 months ago
    63. 63
      A Mysterious Crime 6 months ago
    64. 64
      Remember The Roots 6 months ago
    65. 65
      Defeat Is All But Inevitable 6 months ago
    66. 66
      Preparations To head out 6 months ago
    67. 67
      Convictions and Inner Struggles 6 months ago
    68. 68
      Bad News 6 months ago
    69. 69
      A Cruel Request 6 months ago
    70. 70
      What's so similar about us? 6 months ago
    71. 71
      Ambushed by A Snake 6 months ago
    72. 72
      Ashar's Ambush 6 months ago
    73. 73
      Ruling by Fear 6 months ago
    74. 74
      I'm Not A Physician 6 months ago
    75. 75
      By The Tigris 6 months ago
    76. 76
      Sindbad and Nizar 6 months ago
    77. 77
      In Search of The Graves 6 months ago
    78. 78
      The Winner Is Not The Stronger, But The More Cunning 6 months ago
    79. 79
      I Have One Enemy 6 months ago
    80. 80
      Jaber And Lamya 6 months ago
    81. 81
      Ali Baba and Hassan 6 months ago
    82. 82
      Standing Back Up 5 months ago
    83. 83
      Harun's Gamble 5 months ago
    84. 84
      A Physician And A Hashashin 5 months ago
    85. 85
      The Mausoleum 5 months ago
    86. 86
      Three Apples 5 months ago
    87. 87
      Down The River 5 months ago
    88. 88
      The Great Fish of The Tigris 5 months ago
    89. 89
      Deep 5 months ago
    90. 90
      Escape Plans 5 months ago
    91. 91
      A Dead End 5 months ago
    92. 92
      Traitors 5 months ago
    93. 93
      Into The Spot Light 4 months ago
    94. 94
      Back To The Palace 4 months ago
    95. 95
      Squabbles and Troubles 4 months ago
    96. 96
      Titles 4 months ago
    97. 97
      Making Choices 4 months ago
    98. 98
      Justice 4 months ago
    99. 99
      Departure 4 months ago
    100. 100
      Traveling Together 4 months ago
    101. 101
      The One Word 3 months ago
    102. 102
      A Burdened Mother 3 months ago
    103. 103
      This Town Is Not Over... 3 months ago
    104. 104
      Big World 3 months ago
    105. 105
      A Reflection 3 months ago
    106. 106
      Slave Dealers 3 months ago
    107. 107
      Captured 3 months ago
    108. 108
      Jamil 3 months ago
    109. 109
      Shackled 3 months ago
    110. 110
      Welcome to Hell 3 months ago
    111. 111
      Can't Sleep 2 months ago
    112. 112
      The Two Heavens 2 months ago
    113. 113
      Feast Preparation 2 months ago
    114. 114
      Saad's Way 2 months ago
    115. 115
      The Woman In The Shack 2 months ago
    116. 116
      Raheal 2 months ago
    117. 117
      One Who Can Win 2 months ago
    118. 118
      Sindbad's Round 2 months ago
    119. 119
      A Silver Ring 2 months ago
    120. 120
      My Child 2 months ago
    121. 121
      Ali Baba's Round 2 months ago
    122. 122
      It's Burning 1 months ago
    123. 123
      No Way Out 1 months ago
    124. 124
      Training Ring 1 months ago
    125. 125
      Get Rid of Him 1 months ago
    126. 126
      There Is Nothing You Can Do 1 months ago
    127. 127
      A Traitorous Slave 1 months ago
    128. 128
      What Were You Thinking 1 months ago
    129. 129
      You're A Slave 1 months ago
    130. 130
      Iram 1 months ago
    131. 131
      I'm Waiting 1 months ago
    132. 132
      I Have Nothing 1 months ago
    133. 133
      Pit Them Together 1 months ago
    134. 134
      Zarqa Is Dead 29 days ago
    135. 135
      Ali Baba VS Sindbad 28 days ago
    136. 136
      You're Enough 27 days ago
    137. 137
      Isn't This Heaven? 26 days ago
    138. 138
      Let It Burn 25 days ago
    139. 139
      Fire and Reunion 24 days ago
    140. 140
      She Is Mine 23 days ago
    141. 141
      Fly Away Child 22 days ago
    142. 142
      Some Things Are Just Meant To Happen 21 days ago
    143. 143
      Closer To Their Destination 20 days ago
    144. 144
      A Ship In The Desert 19 days ago
    145. 145
      What I Want Right Now... 18 days ago
    146. 146
      Marwa's Retribution 17 days ago
    147. 147
      Ya Rih 16 days ago
    148. 148
      A Certain Shop 15 days ago
    149. 149
      A Chase 14 days ago
    150. 150
      Aladdin 13 days ago
    151. 151
      You Can Come back 12 days ago
    152. 152
      Prince and Princess Of Ya Rih 11 days ago
    153. 153
      Jinn Of The Cursed Ring 10 days ago
    154. 154
      Festival's First Night: Spying 9 days ago
    155. 155
      If You Can't, I Can't 8 days ago
    156. 156
      Tarek 7 days ago
    157. 157
      I'll Give You A Home 6 days ago
    158. 158
      Festival's Second Night: Cursed 5 days ago
    159. 159
      Festival's Third Night: The Rise Of Ya Rih 4 days ago
    160. 160
      Unfinished Business 3 days ago
    161. 161
      Find Her 2 days ago

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