The story is intense with all the fight and gamer scenes. It is also well-written in my opinion. If there's one thing that bothers me or makes me confused though is that there are a bit too much of many characters in one chapter. There are a lot of things going on in a single chapter, especially at the latest chapter. I think it's probably better to focus on one to three even per chapter. Something like that.
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The dialogue and the narration are kept well-balanced which makes the book easy to read and enjoy its good story. Nice work, author.
Added this book to my collection 😁
Added this book to my collection 😁
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Sure... I posted my discord in my profile... But I think it's much easier to talk on Facebook or messenger though.
Added this book to my collection 😁
Hi... Are you interested in doing book review and collection swaps?
The story is definitely going in an interesting direction, so keep updating more chapters.
The synopsis is well-written, nice.
The story has good pacing so far... But I'm hoping for a big event at the start of the story that would set the main story in motion... Well, that's just my opinion. Keep writing at your own pace, Author.
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