percy jackson: the bloodborne hero?

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Duke_of_Insanity

it was a good concept but the author did things that didn't make sense at all. just seem rushed as well

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Gunts92

c'est la 5eme fanfiction de l'auteur avec percy jackson, et certains ont le même titre ou presque. a un moment il va falloir comprendre que ca ne marche pas. il ni a rien de pire que ceux qui s'acharne sur un sujet qu'il ne maitrise pas en s'attendant a un changement. quand ca marche pas ca ne marche pas, passe a autre chose

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Jackal_Zirson

I don't usually review webnovel books, as it tends to be a lost cause when it comes to quality, however I feel your story has some potential here. the main positives are: Unique story concept: Unique story (not sticking to cannon). that being said, there's also quite a few negatives, a Greek deity not recognizing a Norse rune, the choppy scenes and unexplained time skips/ changes to the timeline, the romance flags with Artemis, Maria falling in love felt surface level and needed more build up if you were going that route, and a lot of characters feel like barely different iterations of the same person. you have a good story here, especially by webnovel standards, but you have a long way to go.

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Teraten

thanks for another great story [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]

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Michael_Robison_0719

I really like this fanfiction. When you get the chance to make another chapter, please do