HOTD/ASOIAF: Unbowed Unbent Unbroken

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XxTruck_KunxX

What more can I say, it’s pretending Author, no jon snow fics, all oc’s, solid plot. It’s always a banger.

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Kelvin_Ade

since it's Pretending Author fanfic be sure that you are going to enjoy reading each chapters with out a doubt and if you haven't read his work go check them out am positive you would love it if you are Game Of Thrones fan

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Vishwas_Dhankhar

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Yash_Shah_7482

Well written but its very very very slow. 40 chaps in and the story has barely moved 2 weeks. dropped it.

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ChaMy

Another Asoiaf story from this author that I like so much. I'm kind of scared because of the tragedy tag… but let's go. (Google translator)

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Anthony_Walker_2298

The story is amazing so far I really hope he pulls a avatar The last Airbender and freezes himself and his dragon until the events of game of thrones that way we get to have fun in both time periods. 😎🙏

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Sagvey_Ay

at the same time, don't get me wrong, but all children taking science and chemistry classes at the first school can produce (glass,soap,drinks,perfume,paint) if you can't find plants for paint, shouldn't it be difficult to make ink and paper or a pencil ? it can be produced and grown in the greenhouse (coffee, tea, spices, silk, fruit, tobacco, poison,)

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rorschach

I am posting this review after reading 102 chapters, which is the latest chapter now.In all the above aspects, the story deserves a 5 star. The writing quality is so rigorous and stable that i can feel the pain the author has to go thru to weave this level of story.The story itself is sweet and mushy along with steady kingdom building. Not too much water bending prowess thrown around that messes with the story development. Filled with interaction between a loving husband and a sweet wife that are crown princess and a prince.Its a suggestion on my part, the author can ignore if he feels its not suitable. I think it would feel way more dramatic and enjoyable if there are snippets of povs from the current timeline (from 270 AC to later). I know its difficult since you have to take extreme care to match it with the fanfic history. But i think it would be pretty enjoyable, watching the butterfly effect in real time and how the famous characters act and revere the old queen and the hand of the king.

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Daoist8sLX7y

it's a lighthearted story interspersed with lighthearted genocide of the dothraki, but fear not - it only enhances your mood and the read. humorous writing with likeable characters (can be a few too many to keep track of if you're not binge-reading the story) Arguably gets plot slowed down at points with domestic fluff. On the other hand, those scenes are appreciated by many as well. And helps establish the personality of these characters. Always love to catch up on new updates on author's Daenerys/SI and SI/Rhaenyra stories. Great reads that I'd like to see more of.

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Jacklikestoread

I really only have one word for this... goated

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alika_maisuradze

The story has an interesting idea, but please explain to me why spoil it with stupid magic and Deus ex machina ??? The author, do you really not have a normal Fantasy or are you just writing trash stories?

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NyxOuroboros

Perfect . .

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EternalAnxiety

Pretty great Fanfic not to world breaking or crack-ish story its a little slow-paced but overall is excellent nothing worth complaining about. 7/10 would recommend if i actually let anybody know i read fanfic 😅

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DaoistZack

Give it a read. MC is a cool guy, his family is nice and the story is just peak. It is definitely worth your time. If Pretending_Author made a P***eon, I would pay.

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arno00

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Gd_Sys

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeereeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerreeeeeeee

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Nova255

compare to the last tow novels this one is bland and have no taste at all IDK why. is it because the MC in this novel is not targaryen...... ?

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Jorah26252

The writing is good, the mc is not boring and not some edgy villainy guy. The only problem I have with this is that the author made visery cheated on his wife with Alicent even tho he planned to make her and the mc a couple, I’m a fan of visery and I wanted he and his wife to have a happy ending. And I hoped that with the author making the mc reveal his power to visery and his wife, the whole cutting up aemann wouldn’t happen.