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I was a little worried about the minecraft bit but im loving this the way to slowly building his self up and how he is processing this book may be young at time of review i hope it goes on
MC seems more realistic than most in these types of fanfics. The Minecraft system can get a little boring. The world is set in GoT but slightly different and that can irk some GoT fans. Will keep tabs on this novel.
me gustó mucho como se está desarrollando la historia espero que puedas seguir actualizando la
You should just drop this story and make a minecraft fanfic................. ................. ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ...........
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Great story. Keep writing. Many great fanfics will never be finished. I really hope that this will not happen to your fanfic. Keep up the good work. I look forward to new chapters.
Es una Buena escritura la relacion entre Daenerys y viserys es bonita:) //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////. ///////////////////aaaaaasssssssaaaaaaaaaa
Love this fic. And kid Daenerys is so cute. The only thing I don't like is the non consistent updates.
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I think it would be good if you put some tags to let new readers know what to expect but the story is good so far and so is the writting.
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Es una novela muy completa. Logro sorprenderme como logro enlazar el concepto de Minecraft con la historia. Aunque tengo que admitir que nerfeo mucho los poderes y no les dio un uso adecuado. Es decir, imagina lo que haría otra persona con la capacidad de domesticar lobos, caballos y otros animales. Cómo mínimo los Dothraki y quizás Stark podrían aliarse con el fácilmente si difundiera rumores de ser el elegido de los dioses y mostrará ese poder.
too focused on minecraft, I'm lost, I give up at chapter 34, I made a maximum effort. the two game of throne fanfiction on minecraf are heavy with information, but the or ASOIAF/GOT: Minecraft in Essos. managed not to overload with unknown information, and to offer a story that merges with GOT, this story does not happen. there are quite a few good points but it remains mired in a morass of information and terms which distract from the story. (the minecraft world accessible to the mc does not help)
I feel like I've read a story very similar to this somewhere, does anyone know? only without the skill of minecraft, with magic I think it was
I am not a fan of leaving reviews, but I will make an exception, this story is wonderful, perhaps the system is a little strange, but it is very entertaining to see how he takes advantage of it and uses all that to his advantage for a better development of his story, it is a refreshing and quite good story
The descriptive writing is decent, displaying minimal mistakes. However, when the narrative ventures into metaphors and prophecies, the attempts often fall flat. The prose strives for a poetic touch, but it doesn't quite reach the intended impact. One noticeable aspect is the pacing, which tends to be fast. The narrative seems eager to rush through events, both past and future, leaving scant attention to the present moment. While this brisk pace allows for a lot of ground to be covered in each chapter, showcasing the far-reaching consequences of the main character's actions, it also means that character development and the personalities of the cast suffer. The story leans heavily on plot progression at the expense of deeper characterization. The main character himself is rather bland, lacking the engaging qualities that would keep readers invested in his journey. Although not particularly irritating, he fails to capture the reader's interest or empathy. This is a significant departure from the original works, which are known for their intricate politics, backstabbing, visceral violence and unique characters. Here, these elements are watered down, present only in small doses that never quite achieve the same intensity. For those who appreciated the original series for its dark and complex intrigue, this fanfic may feel disappointingly light. However, the lighter tone does lend the story a certain cozy, comforting quality that some readers might find appealing. The inclusion of the Minecraft world adds an interesting layer of comfort to the narrative. Despite the rapid pace, which often glosses over present events in favor of recounting the protagonist's past exploits and future plans, the impact of Minecraft elements on the Game of Thrones universe is handled thoughtfully. The way Minecraft items influence commerce and monopolies in Westeros is portrayed with a surprising degree of realism. However, this choice comes at the cost of narrative tension. The protagonist rarely encounters significant challenges or dangers, reducing the story's suspense and making the outcome feel somewhat predictable. For readers who crave character development, intricate world-building, and palpable struggles, this fanfic may fall short. However, for those who enjoy lighter, more comforting stories and are curious about the potential crossover between Minecraft and Westeros, this fanfic offers a unique and enjoyable read. The blend of familiar elements from both worlds creates a distinctive narrative that, despite its flaws, provides a pleasant escape.
Hey, this is great, I'm waiting for more and I can't wait for bigger battles and when the MC will fly on a dragon .and the plot is very good and well written, just applaud the author
it gets boring fast, you can't really invest in the story cause it is written so nonchalantly.
Okay, this is a good story, but what annoys me is that he's a puppet of the gods. He keeps asking that priestess about her visions. Doesn't he know that she's a psycho who burns young females for her god? Everything he does feels controlled by the so-called god.
its written well enough. but the minecraft thing really drags this down for me. for a serious world like game of thrones it just threw me off having Minecraft elements in it
I love the direction of this story. Hoping for a Sansa pairing also love the kingdom name and hope he takes over in his new houses name and leaves house Targaryen to Jon. The perfect balance of Minecraft time, the story flows well. Some might want more detail but I enjoy this pace as well. Overall great story and hope it continues.
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I’m really enjoying the story. It’s quite well written. I personally like the whole Minecraft aspect of it. I don’t know a lot about Minecraft probably the only gamer in the world that never really got into Minecraft. I’m enjoying your version and how you mixing that aspect into your MC’s world. The only negative thing I have to say is your MC seems to be too hopeful and helpful. I’ll be honest with you I kind of like MC’s they are kind prideful. I’m glad he’s starting to show a bit of ambition, but it sometimes feels like he’s being dragged to have ambition instead of that’s just part of his personality. The helping in the north was bizarre and I thought that was out of place.
I was a little worried about the minecraft bit but im loving this the way to slowly building his self up and how he is processing this book may be young at time of review i hope it goes on
MC seems more realistic than most in these types of fanfics. The Minecraft system can get a little boring. The world is set in GoT but slightly different and that can irk some GoT fans. Will keep tabs on this novel.
me gustó mucho como se está desarrollando la historia espero que puedas seguir actualizando la
You should just drop this story and make a minecraft fanfic................. ................. ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ........................ ......................... ........................ ........................ ...........
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Great story. Keep writing. Many great fanfics will never be finished. I really hope that this will not happen to your fanfic. Keep up the good work. I look forward to new chapters.
Es una Buena escritura la relacion entre Daenerys y viserys es bonita:) //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////. ///////////////////aaaaaasssssssaaaaaaaaaa
Love this fic. And kid Daenerys is so cute. The only thing I don't like is the non consistent updates.
C une fic got ou minecraft ? [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I think it would be good if you put some tags to let new readers know what to expect but the story is good so far and so is the writting.
Fast Upload more ......... ............... ........................... ....................................... ................................................................
Me encanta es diferente y refrescante la historia 💯💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖😆💖😆💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖😆😆😆💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖😆💖💖😆😆💖💖😆💖💖😆💖💖💖💖💖💖💖😆💖💖
ネタバレを明かす Chap36........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Es una novela muy completa. Logro sorprenderme como logro enlazar el concepto de Minecraft con la historia. Aunque tengo que admitir que nerfeo mucho los poderes y no les dio un uso adecuado. Es decir, imagina lo que haría otra persona con la capacidad de domesticar lobos, caballos y otros animales. Cómo mínimo los Dothraki y quizás Stark podrían aliarse con el fácilmente si difundiera rumores de ser el elegido de los dioses y mostrará ese poder.
too focused on minecraft, I'm lost, I give up at chapter 34, I made a maximum effort. the two game of throne fanfiction on minecraf are heavy with information, but the or ASOIAF/GOT: Minecraft in Essos. managed not to overload with unknown information, and to offer a story that merges with GOT, this story does not happen. there are quite a few good points but it remains mired in a morass of information and terms which distract from the story. (the minecraft world accessible to the mc does not help)
I feel like I've read a story very similar to this somewhere, does anyone know? only without the skill of minecraft, with magic I think it was
I am not a fan of leaving reviews, but I will make an exception, this story is wonderful, perhaps the system is a little strange, but it is very entertaining to see how he takes advantage of it and uses all that to his advantage for a better development of his story, it is a refreshing and quite good story
The descriptive writing is decent, displaying minimal mistakes. However, when the narrative ventures into metaphors and prophecies, the attempts often fall flat. The prose strives for a poetic touch, but it doesn't quite reach the intended impact. One noticeable aspect is the pacing, which tends to be fast. The narrative seems eager to rush through events, both past and future, leaving scant attention to the present moment. While this brisk pace allows for a lot of ground to be covered in each chapter, showcasing the far-reaching consequences of the main character's actions, it also means that character development and the personalities of the cast suffer. The story leans heavily on plot progression at the expense of deeper characterization. The main character himself is rather bland, lacking the engaging qualities that would keep readers invested in his journey. Although not particularly irritating, he fails to capture the reader's interest or empathy. This is a significant departure from the original works, which are known for their intricate politics, backstabbing, visceral violence and unique characters. Here, these elements are watered down, present only in small doses that never quite achieve the same intensity. For those who appreciated the original series for its dark and complex intrigue, this fanfic may feel disappointingly light. However, the lighter tone does lend the story a certain cozy, comforting quality that some readers might find appealing. The inclusion of the Minecraft world adds an interesting layer of comfort to the narrative. Despite the rapid pace, which often glosses over present events in favor of recounting the protagonist's past exploits and future plans, the impact of Minecraft elements on the Game of Thrones universe is handled thoughtfully. The way Minecraft items influence commerce and monopolies in Westeros is portrayed with a surprising degree of realism. However, this choice comes at the cost of narrative tension. The protagonist rarely encounters significant challenges or dangers, reducing the story's suspense and making the outcome feel somewhat predictable. For readers who crave character development, intricate world-building, and palpable struggles, this fanfic may fall short. However, for those who enjoy lighter, more comforting stories and are curious about the potential crossover between Minecraft and Westeros, this fanfic offers a unique and enjoyable read. The blend of familiar elements from both worlds creates a distinctive narrative that, despite its flaws, provides a pleasant escape.
Hey, this is great, I'm waiting for more and I can't wait for bigger battles and when the MC will fly on a dragon .and the plot is very good and well written, just applaud the author
it gets boring fast, you can't really invest in the story cause it is written so nonchalantly.
Okay, this is a good story, but what annoys me is that he's a puppet of the gods. He keeps asking that priestess about her visions. Doesn't he know that she's a psycho who burns young females for her god? Everything he does feels controlled by the so-called god.
its written well enough. but the minecraft thing really drags this down for me. for a serious world like game of thrones it just threw me off having Minecraft elements in it
I love the direction of this story. Hoping for a Sansa pairing also love the kingdom name and hope he takes over in his new houses name and leaves house Targaryen to Jon. The perfect balance of Minecraft time, the story flows well. Some might want more detail but I enjoy this pace as well. Overall great story and hope it continues.
ネタバレを明かす It's interesting, well, I think I've read this story somewhere before ..,.......,...........................................................
I’m really enjoying the story. It’s quite well written. I personally like the whole Minecraft aspect of it. I don’t know a lot about Minecraft probably the only gamer in the world that never really got into Minecraft. I’m enjoying your version and how you mixing that aspect into your MC’s world. The only negative thing I have to say is your MC seems to be too hopeful and helpful. I’ll be honest with you I kind of like MC’s they are kind prideful. I’m glad he’s starting to show a bit of ambition, but it sometimes feels like he’s being dragged to have ambition instead of that’s just part of his personality. The helping in the north was bizarre and I thought that was out of place.