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I love the direction of this story. Hoping for a Sansa pairing also love the kingdom name and hope he takes over in his new houses name and leaves house Targaryen to Jon. The perfect balance of Minecraft time, the story flows well. Some might want more detail but I enjoy this pace as well. Overall great story and hope it continues.
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It's interesting, well, I think I've read this story somewhere before ..,.......,...........................................................
Muy bueno, son pocos capítulos pero la forma en que transcurre la historia es interesante, me gusto como hizo uso de sus habilidades, la mayoría de los que incorporan elementos de minecraft terminan arruinando sus historias por no poner ciertos limites, los personajes parecen poder crear cualquier elemento del juego casi sin esfuerzo, no tienen ninguna preocupación por el mundo en el que se encuentran y terminan como terroristas arrojando monstruos de minecraft o explosivos como TNT a cualquiera que no le agrade.
I really like this story, I hope it doesn't turn into a harem story. It has to be 140 words or letters, so I'm being forced to write more. It has to be 140 words or letters, so I'm being forced to write more.
It's the first time I've seen a good FanFiction with Viserys, the Beggar King. Will we have a fight between Robert and Viserys for the throne? P.S: All you need are daily updates.
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it's really good Nice grammar and interesting plot , just update more good job
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I just hope you will continue this story please don't dropped this. the story is great 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Very good story More chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯
So far so good, it would just be great to have more updates. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .Well, well, excellent, keep up the great work .
im excited and looking forward for more that you're making this kind of fanfic. with minecraft powers and dragons but look your novels. like is this going to be only 30 chapters plus until you stop for months and make another one or will it be up to hundreds plus chapter ?
Very nice story More chapters update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
In my opinion, Minecraft and dragon house don't mix. But the author has talent. That's why even though I don't like it, I admit the quality of the novel.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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It is very interesting story I hope you will continue it. Thank you for the chapters!!! 👍👍👍👍💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥
Good read, I always thought it would be interesting to read a story where the protagonist had a system based on Minecraft, but I never found what world or context it would fit best into. This novel has a lot of potential in my opinion and I hope for many more chapters.
Continue the novel, please 🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥
Honestly I searched fanfic related viserys of got and got disappointed but finally found one and it turned out to be pretty good. So I hope you will not drop it, author. Also 4★ for updating stability because 1 chapter in a week. Please make it one chapter everyday or every two days.😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Story is great so far, I just hope you continue the story. It gets really old when new good stories come out and stop after like 5-10 chapters.
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its written well enough. but the minecraft thing really drags this down for me. for a serious world like game of thrones it just threw me off having Minecraft elements in it
I love the direction of this story. Hoping for a Sansa pairing also love the kingdom name and hope he takes over in his new houses name and leaves house Targaryen to Jon. The perfect balance of Minecraft time, the story flows well. Some might want more detail but I enjoy this pace as well. Overall great story and hope it continues.
ネタバレを明かす It's interesting, well, I think I've read this story somewhere before ..,.......,...........................................................
Muy bueno, son pocos capítulos pero la forma en que transcurre la historia es interesante, me gusto como hizo uso de sus habilidades, la mayoría de los que incorporan elementos de minecraft terminan arruinando sus historias por no poner ciertos limites, los personajes parecen poder crear cualquier elemento del juego casi sin esfuerzo, no tienen ninguna preocupación por el mundo en el que se encuentran y terminan como terroristas arrojando monstruos de minecraft o explosivos como TNT a cualquiera que no le agrade.
I really like this story, I hope it doesn't turn into a harem story. It has to be 140 words or letters, so I'm being forced to write more. It has to be 140 words or letters, so I'm being forced to write more.
It's the first time I've seen a good FanFiction with Viserys, the Beggar King. Will we have a fight between Robert and Viserys for the throne? P.S: All you need are daily updates.
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it's really good Nice grammar and interesting plot , just update more good job
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I just hope you will continue this story please don't dropped this. the story is great 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Very good story More chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯
So far so good, it would just be great to have more updates. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .Well, well, excellent, keep up the great work .
im excited and looking forward for more that you're making this kind of fanfic. with minecraft powers and dragons but look your novels. like is this going to be only 30 chapters plus until you stop for months and make another one or will it be up to hundreds plus chapter ?
Very nice story More chapters update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
In my opinion, Minecraft and dragon house don't mix. But the author has talent. That's why even though I don't like it, I admit the quality of the novel.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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It is very interesting story I hope you will continue it. Thank you for the chapters!!! 👍👍👍👍💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥
Good read, I always thought it would be interesting to read a story where the protagonist had a system based on Minecraft, but I never found what world or context it would fit best into. This novel has a lot of potential in my opinion and I hope for many more chapters.
Continue the novel, please 🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥🗿🔥
Honestly I searched fanfic related viserys of got and got disappointed but finally found one and it turned out to be pretty good. So I hope you will not drop it, author. Also 4★ for updating stability because 1 chapter in a week. Please make it one chapter everyday or every two days.😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Story is great so far, I just hope you continue the story. It gets really old when new good stories come out and stop after like 5-10 chapters.
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its written well enough. but the minecraft thing really drags this down for me. for a serious world like game of thrones it just threw me off having Minecraft elements in it