Douluo: Twin Martial Spirits

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Transhumanist

Writing quality is better than most but the story development and character design sucks balls. The MC has no personality other than someone to make the Sign in System work. He is obviously fanboying over the characters he liked from the original story. Continuity sucks, as in suddenly a character is talked about as if he's dead even though no such death occurred in the story.

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night_king01010

are u continuing this novel more chapters

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nether_2001

i liked the stroy, it has great potential. Please don't drop it and update it as soon as possible please..................................................

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Yayan_Turu_Miring

Cheer up Min, continue your work this is a good douluo fanfiction, Truth-seeking ball as a martial art is really an amazing thought. In Naruto, having a Truth Seeker Ball allows them to have power above 99.99% of Ninjas and in the Douluo continent, they have power equivalent to class 1 Gods such as Posaidon, the god of the sea or perhaps the King of Gods such as the God of Shura.

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