Marvel's Black Steel

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Lons

pls pls pls i begg of you don't make it harem!!!!!!!!

LV 11

French_Deadpool

I'm afraid that the author is racist, or exercises clichés, in fact the N-word appears too often, and in the last chapter he refers to the mc's mother as being Asian and therefore not being a easy mother. I continue reading for the moment, but I have an unpleasant feeling while doing so. ps: although this is the name of a member of your pharaoh family, it's really a rotten name, in fact the number of people who will find this name pleasant or cool seems extremely limited to me, you should have started place of your readers, first names like Atom, Iron, Odin... for a guy who doesn't come from a normal family it's too weird, already his real name is Kal El it's more than offbeat enough. ps2: in the chapters the mc does not at any time refer to his surprise at being in the mcu, or at being friends with jean and gwen, which is not normal in the mcu. he should ask himself the questions, it's a shame to have skipped that.

LV 14

LazyLord

Yo I’m glad to FINALLY find a story I can actually relate to🙌🏾not once have I found a fanfic with a black mc until now. I think your doing a good job too cus this is exactly how I imagine myself acting/thinking like if I got reincarnated with OP powers🤣💯this story is really good so I hope it doesn’t get dropped. & I also hope you make more stories with black mc’s 💯💪🏾🫡 Ps. If you know any other fanfic with black mc’s let me know ✊🏾

LV 4

DaoistszUkcH

This is a white guy writing how they think black people act

LV 14

DiabloRedfox

it was going pretty good till you made Sara the gf..

LV 2

Mastarius

the whole thing can be called a filler, there's basically no story going on only slice of life banter/talk even when a chance comes to make a nice action or intense moment/scene author throws more slice of life taking any potential out of the picture WQ 4 SofB 4 SD 1 CD 3 WB 2

LV 1

Zenos_Maxima2611

of all the girl choices in Marvel.... Why did you even pair your MC with your OC (Jean's older sister), who probably doesn't even matter in a fanfiction story. There are options like MJ, Felicia and even Jean herself. Ugh...

LV 4

StankBootyEnder

he made it a harem in the end, haaaaah tis a sad day

LV 14

Nightskin_Mystic

I really like the concept and as a black guy myself I love having more Black MC. And as for the harem thing I say let you pick but if a choice has to be made i say the Harem route. Also if possible can you add the tags for when you do make a choice?

LV 2

Twasasetup

MC has a stupidass name and I feel embarrassed on his behalf when he introduces himself. I only read upto chapter 47 because I thought Jean Grey would be the love interest. I liked how she was portrayed in this fic but the moment I found out she wasn't the love interest is when I leave because there isn't much to look forward to in this fic.

LV 13

Hanish_Ram

Not worth reading

LV 4

FujiwaraNoMokou

Listen bruv, you better not drop this Fic. Cuz let me tell you, there are countless Marvel/DC Fics that start great and then Boom! No updates for months. Hopefully this ain't one of them. Great Fic.

LV 3

Daoistwu9UAZ

don’t waste your time it’s awful [img=Speechless]

LV 4

DaoistOfeOTA

I ain’t actually read this just skimmed through but from what I saw it almost all filler and the only love interest I could find was a dam oc (if author changes it or story gets better I’ll make a new review)

LV 4

BigBud

Superman in Marvel fanfic written about as Webnovel generic as it gets. Nothing special about it, but written pretty well. Its hard to write a good kid-fic, which is what practically half of this is so far, but it doesn’t go too far off the deep end.

LV 4

KingEngineer

Loved everything about the story but sometimes after he visits the x men house with Jean it started going downhill after it way to many chapter to lift up 10 rocks. After that everything just went slow. But this is where I draw the line. He killed three gang members so they won’t learn his identity. He told his father and he said as long as you don’t become a monster. But then he lets kid father killer go. He didn’t just killed his father but tortured him. Then he let him go with a warning after letting a known manipulative person like Emma frost into his mind. I can forgive the Emma frost thing because he needed to know if this was really the guy. But letting your fathers killer go with absolutely no punishment is fucking crazy. Epically after showing him your face. Stupidest decision I have ever seen and seems like a complete break in character to make him “justice” oriented.

LV 1

Santy_Melay

The novel could be much better, but no, to begin with, the fact that it is a harem and has so few women is a waste, secondly, the number of hot women there are in Marvel (Felicia, Gwen, Natasha, Wanda, etc.) and you choose one that almost no one knows; and with respect to the other two, from what I see it's not going to be Frost or Storm, what a waste of genre. Also, the protagonist's personality is annoying, the excuse that because they treat him like a child caused his mental maturity to decrease is stupid. And what the fuck is going on with the characters, why are they all horny? Plus, it's annoying to have to read people other than the protagonist and his wife being horny. And lastly, the novel is very slow, boring and full of filler, the most interesting parts are when he saves people, but the author prefers to focus on the boring parts.

LV 1

veldora_Tempest

Foolish author I told u , u will lose readers if you don't stop your path and listen to reasons well u were too stubborn to improve so drop the novel or rewrite it