I’m on chapter 337. I love this story but it definitely has its annoying points that’s becoming more and more intolerable as I read. Her inability to do critical thinking, no sense of danger, both of these it seems she sometimes lacks just to for plot. Her obliviousness that seems on the level of a harem protagonist but not just about the women in her life but about everything. The reason I wrote this review is because on chapter 336, someone was obviously calling her beautiful, but she seems oblivious till the end where even a toddler would realize there talking about her. Another time is at her birthday, people was staring at her because of her beauty, but she wrote it off as some stupid reason I forgot. I love this story but these small things that keep showing up ruin the experience. She needs a character arc quick where she grows up and starts to realize that you can have fun in life without thinking that she is immortal and can’t die. She needs to experience helplessness and a reality check.
I was loving the story but the focus on some wives being above others is annoying. Violet being empress and having control of the other wives is grating to me for some reason lol. Loving and valuing someone doesn’t mean they should hold more power in the family. Epically during leasure times.
Love the first story and a Angel OC in mha sounds interesting.
Hopefully this is as good as the last one.
Thank you
Amazing chapter. Thank you!
How is that sexy dark skin woman a ugly goblin? Generally don’t understand
Where are you headed with this story? So far love it but just curious.
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original The Wonders Of Magic
Magic. The ability to make anything that you can possibly wish for become reality. Something that humans in this reality do not have the luxury of. So, take a peek into the veil and glimpse the story of a boy that delves into the mystery of magic and make all his dreams a reality. A story that shows his hardships, and victories on the road to be free of all constraints. *This is my first story. I plan to write a novel that shows a boy's journey into a man that has the world at his fingertips. *This is a Harry Potter fanfiction *I do not own Harry Potter or any other references that may occur in this story1 Chs 27 お気に入り
I think he dropped this. He updating his other five and started a new fic. Either that or he losing motivation for this and about to drop it. Unfortunate. Loved this😢
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