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good pls more like it more pls it the best fanfic I seen in a loong time i need more pls pls pls pls more chapter bast fanfic ever seen need more
suuuuuuuuuprrrrrrrraaaaa gigggggggaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa coooooooooool . Best fan-fic i never read and i have read a lot
I have a suggestion, if you don't mind author. What is after the events of lord of the rings, you suggest MC to bring elves, dwarves and other magical or fantasy beings to the continent(witcher world), as in the fourth at the end they're going to fade in the some or other way, as it will be age of humans. Especially elves eho didn't went to valinor, or elves of mirkwood,etc. You can even bring dwares as most would go deep in the mountains during fourth age never to be seen again.
Meager wishful thinking. MC can as well shit rainbow. No hardship in sight etc etc. Hollow, sweet, unappealing, complete blasphemy and desecration. Not worth your precious time, you can as well close your eyes and imagine better that this idiocy. Btw, it's harem shit. Even eerily similar in some aspects The Divine Hunter, is way better.
noice , it's good 👍😊👍😊👍 and easy to read I'm at 80ish chapter and so far it's good
very good but I simply hate the chest system, it's simply discouraging for the guy to open it and get a cool item or something else convenient, he even got discouraged to read it, the system already helps him with all those skills, the blacksmith skill is practically useless since he you can just open a chest and get everything
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una historia entretenida desde varios puntos de vista, un personaje carismático, buen desarrollo y divertido desarrollo de los mundos, recomendada
It has started to get ridiculous with how powerful the mc has become and how wealthy he is. The translation can be annoying at times, but it's not terrible. I thought this would become a triss or Keira FL romance but then he started to sleep with any beautiful women. There's no real romance in the fic, only sleeping around. My biggest issue is when he started to develop an almost evil personality making another women a slave and then sleeping with them under less than ideal conditions concerning consent. All this would be fine(not my thing but fine regarding character development and continuity), but he has never shown himself to be this type of person until this point.
Just out of curiosity. Since the project has been abandoned, are you planning to continue it? Because if you’re not, I don’t really see much point in translating the novel.
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Quality: 5/5 I have spotted no issues in regards to spelling, structure or like. Stability: 5/5 So far the release speeds has been fast and stable. Story: 5/5 Love it, it is interesting as it is mostly Witcher with Lotr in the background. Also the system is pretty chill, its mostly in the background rather than at the forefront of every chapter. Character: 5/5 An half elf OC character, whom is fun and interesting, and the already existing characters are developing in a way which has been clearly planned out as it takes into account their personality traits perfectly. World: Witcher most of the time, a brief stint in Middle Earth pre hobbit time, and the system draws bits and bobs from Harry Potter, and World of Warcraft for item rewards. Overall as of chapter 187, I can highly recommend this novel to whomever is debating reading it.
Had to drop this when he became a literal rapist just because the girl was a store and he technically owned her. But that way later on
This translation is a shining example of how fanfiction can transcend linguistic barriers, delivering a tale that captivates and enriches the beloved universe of Geralt of Rivia. This translation not only faithfully renders the original story but also enhances it with a linguistic grace that is both commendable and engaging. The translator’s prowess is evident from the outset. They have masterfully captured the essence of the original prose, ensuring that the narrative’s tone and style remain intact. The dark, brooding atmosphere of the Witcher universe is preserved, and the intricate plot is conveyed with clarity and precision. The translator’s dedication to maintaining the integrity of the original work is evident in every sentence. The storyline of "The Half-Elf" is a compelling blend of adventure, mystery, and emotional depth. It introduces a new character, a half-elf, whose complex identity and struggles provide a fresh perspective within the Witcher world. The translator adeptly handles this character’s dual heritage, highlighting the tensions and unique challenges they face. This nuanced portrayal adds a rich layer of diversity and depth to the narrative. Characterization is handled with exceptional care. Geralt’s interactions with the half-elf are portrayed with authenticity, capturing his gruff exterior and underlying empathy. The translator’s ability to convey subtle emotions and character dynamics ensures that readers remain invested in the characters' journeys. The half-elf's growth, from an outcast struggling with self-acceptance to a formidable ally, is a testament to the translator’s skill in character development. The world-building in "The Half-Elf" is immersive and detailed, seamlessly blending familiar locations with new, vividly described settings. The translator’s attention to detail brings these places to life, making the reader feel as if they are traversing the Continent alongside Geralt and the half-elf. This vivid imagery is one of the translation’s standout features, enhancing the reader’s experience. Dialogue, a crucial aspect of the Witcher series, is handled with finesse. The translator preserves the distinct voices of each character, from Geralt’s terse, sardonic remarks to the half-elf’s introspective musings. This authenticity in dialogue ensures that the characters remain true to their original portrayals, while also allowing for fresh and engaging interactions. In conclusion, this translation is a triumph. It honors the original fanfiction while bringing its own unique strengths to the table. The translator’s dedication to preserving the story’s essence, coupled with their linguistic skill, results in a narrative that is both faithful and refreshingly new. For fans of the Witcher universe, this translation is an essential read, offering a captivating journey that expands and deepens the world of Geralt of Rivia.
Es una historia genial con mucho potencial 👌🏻 tiene una buena gramática y un desarrollo de la historia fluido, sabe sacarle provecho a su sistema, me gusta el desarrollo del MC se siente natural, es una buena incorporación a que explore las fisuras espaciales que lo llevan a otros mundos, va por un buen camino construyendo este excelente fanfic 😉🤙🏻 realmente lo recomiendo
It's honestly a good story, but I just can't get my head around seeing a system in the gritty, dark, and medieval setting that is the Witcher. My apologies.
Me encanta la novela.👍👍👍👍👍👍🔥 aunque me gustaría q los capítulos fueran un poco más largos es que me quedo con las ganas 💯💯💯
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the story is kind of unbalanced and forced by lucky draws and the MC becomes too OP too early while the OG characters have changed in a bad way instead of the independent feeling they used to give in the game same reason the author dropped the story cause he made the mc too op to stay in witcher world and had to send him to other worlds. BTW the worlds he goes to so far are lord of the Rings - Azeroth - Jack the Giant Slayer 2013 and Diablo tho not sure if he went there in the end or just open the crack to let the demons to come in his world
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It is good novel to be honest this review is a warning to all of the Reader’s original author of this book will not write this book anymore. Which makes the book a unfinished project. It is a shame.
This is quite a good story in the Witcher world. I love the main character and how the story goes, the flow is also good. It's only that the progress is quite slow for me and the author write sometimes things that are frankly meaningless or not interesting. Also when I reached chapter 123 I started to feel like the author is trying to make sure the MC progress slowly and not get stronger too fast, since if he become too strong this story will lose its meaning. All in all I would still give this a 4.5 star review and would recommend it to all those who loves this gener.
The raw is dropped tho sooo what gonna happen will this still continue after chapter 350
Its great FF but sadly orginal is dropped at ch352. But its is still great so i recommend to read it if you are witcher fan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Need more. More, more, more, more, MORE. --------------------------------------------------------Mooooooooooooooreeeeeeeeee--------------------------------------------------------
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good pls more like it more pls it the best fanfic I seen in a loong time i need more pls pls pls pls more chapter bast fanfic ever seen need more
suuuuuuuuuprrrrrrrraaaaa gigggggggaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa coooooooooool . Best fan-fic i never read and i have read a lot
I have a suggestion, if you don't mind author. What is after the events of lord of the rings, you suggest MC to bring elves, dwarves and other magical or fantasy beings to the continent(witcher world), as in the fourth at the end they're going to fade in the some or other way, as it will be age of humans. Especially elves eho didn't went to valinor, or elves of mirkwood,etc. You can even bring dwares as most would go deep in the mountains during fourth age never to be seen again.
Meager wishful thinking. MC can as well shit rainbow. No hardship in sight etc etc. Hollow, sweet, unappealing, complete blasphemy and desecration. Not worth your precious time, you can as well close your eyes and imagine better that this idiocy. Btw, it's harem shit. Even eerily similar in some aspects The Divine Hunter, is way better.
noice , it's good 👍😊👍😊👍 and easy to read I'm at 80ish chapter and so far it's good
very good but I simply hate the chest system, it's simply discouraging for the guy to open it and get a cool item or something else convenient, he even got discouraged to read it, the system already helps him with all those skills, the blacksmith skill is practically useless since he you can just open a chest and get everything
Работа супер!!!!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
una historia entretenida desde varios puntos de vista, un personaje carismático, buen desarrollo y divertido desarrollo de los mundos, recomendada
It has started to get ridiculous with how powerful the mc has become and how wealthy he is. The translation can be annoying at times, but it's not terrible. I thought this would become a triss or Keira FL romance but then he started to sleep with any beautiful women. There's no real romance in the fic, only sleeping around. My biggest issue is when he started to develop an almost evil personality making another women a slave and then sleeping with them under less than ideal conditions concerning consent. All this would be fine(not my thing but fine regarding character development and continuity), but he has never shown himself to be this type of person until this point.
Just out of curiosity. Since the project has been abandoned, are you planning to continue it? Because if you’re not, I don’t really see much point in translating the novel.
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Quality: 5/5 I have spotted no issues in regards to spelling, structure or like. Stability: 5/5 So far the release speeds has been fast and stable. Story: 5/5 Love it, it is interesting as it is mostly Witcher with Lotr in the background. Also the system is pretty chill, its mostly in the background rather than at the forefront of every chapter. Character: 5/5 An half elf OC character, whom is fun and interesting, and the already existing characters are developing in a way which has been clearly planned out as it takes into account their personality traits perfectly. World: Witcher most of the time, a brief stint in Middle Earth pre hobbit time, and the system draws bits and bobs from Harry Potter, and World of Warcraft for item rewards. Overall as of chapter 187, I can highly recommend this novel to whomever is debating reading it.
Had to drop this when he became a literal rapist just because the girl was a store and he technically owned her. But that way later on
This translation is a shining example of how fanfiction can transcend linguistic barriers, delivering a tale that captivates and enriches the beloved universe of Geralt of Rivia. This translation not only faithfully renders the original story but also enhances it with a linguistic grace that is both commendable and engaging. The translator’s prowess is evident from the outset. They have masterfully captured the essence of the original prose, ensuring that the narrative’s tone and style remain intact. The dark, brooding atmosphere of the Witcher universe is preserved, and the intricate plot is conveyed with clarity and precision. The translator’s dedication to maintaining the integrity of the original work is evident in every sentence. The storyline of "The Half-Elf" is a compelling blend of adventure, mystery, and emotional depth. It introduces a new character, a half-elf, whose complex identity and struggles provide a fresh perspective within the Witcher world. The translator adeptly handles this character’s dual heritage, highlighting the tensions and unique challenges they face. This nuanced portrayal adds a rich layer of diversity and depth to the narrative. Characterization is handled with exceptional care. Geralt’s interactions with the half-elf are portrayed with authenticity, capturing his gruff exterior and underlying empathy. The translator’s ability to convey subtle emotions and character dynamics ensures that readers remain invested in the characters' journeys. The half-elf's growth, from an outcast struggling with self-acceptance to a formidable ally, is a testament to the translator’s skill in character development. The world-building in "The Half-Elf" is immersive and detailed, seamlessly blending familiar locations with new, vividly described settings. The translator’s attention to detail brings these places to life, making the reader feel as if they are traversing the Continent alongside Geralt and the half-elf. This vivid imagery is one of the translation’s standout features, enhancing the reader’s experience. Dialogue, a crucial aspect of the Witcher series, is handled with finesse. The translator preserves the distinct voices of each character, from Geralt’s terse, sardonic remarks to the half-elf’s introspective musings. This authenticity in dialogue ensures that the characters remain true to their original portrayals, while also allowing for fresh and engaging interactions. In conclusion, this translation is a triumph. It honors the original fanfiction while bringing its own unique strengths to the table. The translator’s dedication to preserving the story’s essence, coupled with their linguistic skill, results in a narrative that is both faithful and refreshingly new. For fans of the Witcher universe, this translation is an essential read, offering a captivating journey that expands and deepens the world of Geralt of Rivia.
Es una historia genial con mucho potencial 👌🏻 tiene una buena gramática y un desarrollo de la historia fluido, sabe sacarle provecho a su sistema, me gusta el desarrollo del MC se siente natural, es una buena incorporación a que explore las fisuras espaciales que lo llevan a otros mundos, va por un buen camino construyendo este excelente fanfic 😉🤙🏻 realmente lo recomiendo
It's honestly a good story, but I just can't get my head around seeing a system in the gritty, dark, and medieval setting that is the Witcher. My apologies.
Me encanta la novela.👍👍👍👍👍👍🔥 aunque me gustaría q los capítulos fueran un poco más largos es que me quedo con las ganas 💯💯💯
I like it.I like it.I like it.I like it.I like it.I like it.I like it.I like it.I like it.I like it.I like it.I like it.I like it.I like it.I like it.I like it.
the story is kind of unbalanced and forced by lucky draws and the MC becomes too OP too early while the OG characters have changed in a bad way instead of the independent feeling they used to give in the game same reason the author dropped the story cause he made the mc too op to stay in witcher world and had to send him to other worlds. BTW the worlds he goes to so far are lord of the Rings - Azeroth - Jack the Giant Slayer 2013 and Diablo tho not sure if he went there in the end or just open the crack to let the demons to come in his world
ネタバレを明かす It is good novel to be honest this review is a warning to all of the Reader’s original author of this book will not write this book anymore. Which makes the book a unfinished project. It is a shame.
This is quite a good story in the Witcher world. I love the main character and how the story goes, the flow is also good. It's only that the progress is quite slow for me and the author write sometimes things that are frankly meaningless or not interesting. Also when I reached chapter 123 I started to feel like the author is trying to make sure the MC progress slowly and not get stronger too fast, since if he become too strong this story will lose its meaning. All in all I would still give this a 4.5 star review and would recommend it to all those who loves this gener.
The raw is dropped tho sooo what gonna happen will this still continue after chapter 350
Its great FF but sadly orginal is dropped at ch352. But its is still great so i recommend to read it if you are witcher fan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
why do you need sport background of you are using system anyway?