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Chaosgod24

The best originals fanfic I've read in a while, I am rooting for you author and keep up the good work, thank you [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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1yr
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swordsaint

Best originals fanfic I have read. I am ruting for u author u get what it means to be an originals. Hope u do not drop the story.🤞 good luck with the story (ALWAYS AND FOREVER!!!!!)

1yr
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CouchPotatoDandy

Once I found out on the first chapter how the MC got five wishes and he used some of them on his brothers, and how stupid his wishes on himself were, I know this wasn't going to be an all that great of a story. Unfortunately I was right. The story was boring without anything interesting, the MC was living more for his family then himself, and the conversations between characters was awkward. So I dropped this at chapter 5 The grammar was ok though.

12d
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Daoistje85Nx

Are there more coming? I like it so much

1mth
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Josh_Wilko_5256

keep this going it's an enjoyable read and I'm liking we're the novel is going so far

1mth
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NASIR_OP

yup it is very good but i have to complain bro you ruined this novel when you got into side characters a little too much also after they said system is updating it was never seen again and lastly you didn't specified power system in full detail like after time skip how powerful are they you should have written stats in systems like 10 stats for original family from real series and after you decide to give them boost every 10 year x5 then you should have written like 50 stats on every one of them and you should have added a little demonstration of their strength well whatever its good 👍

2mth
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Shawn_0858

Thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter!!!! Space space thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter

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Jordzfml_7

man i honestly think this is a great book , but the 3rd person pov writing ruins this book for me . most chapters just go like victor: niklaus: elijah: i prefer to either see the world through the mc's eyes or a narrator , not this constant naming dialogue which makes it seem as if i'm in a game. i'm still early into the book so i'm hoping it improves by the half-way mark

3mth
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El_Richochico

Best originals fantic ever!![img=update] more chapter please

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5mth
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Cody_Mohr

this has been the most inspiring story of the original so far I hope this continues

8mth
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Bam729
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Really good story[img=update] keep up with the story please

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9mth
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SuCiDe_shit

it's one of the best originals fanfic that I read The romance is good between every couple

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9mth
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elian_aquino

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Cosmic_Wolf_4728

Besides the first couple of chapters with grammar this is an amazing story and I highly recommend !!

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10mth
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Leonardo_Henrique_0539

.........I'm really enjoying the story, I just wish there were more chapters haha. That said, could some kind soul inform me about some fanfics with male OCs in TVD or The Originals?.................

10mth
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DaoistVVKN4o

I like the fact that towards the future chapters, the writer started coming up with good backstories that were not in the TVD series. And also the fact that the writer is adding new characters and plot twists to the novel. But i feel like the writing and the backstory can be improved.

11mth
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DaoistVVKN4o

I like the fact that towards the future chapters, the writer started coming up with good backstories that were not in the TVD series. And also the fact that the writer is adding new characters and plot twists to the novel. But i feel like the writing and the backstory can be improved.

11mth
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DaoistDTW9tz

one of the best TVD/TO fanfic great story development and the most important thing (for me at least) stable update. highly recommend

11mth
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Daoist_Masrur

The only problem I have with this fanfic is that the updates are slow.I would recommend to absolutely read it.

11mth
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swordsaint

best originals fanfic I have read so far [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

11mth
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Lucid1dreams

pls we need more updates we are begging u

12mth
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Lucid1dreams

It's an interesting development of the original storyline.

1yr
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Raj_tiwari_1387

Loved the story 😍😍I just hope you don't leave the story unfinished😅😅 keep it up

1yr
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bravo_bansal

best originals ff i found better keep it up

1yr
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Night_shade_

u guys do realise by the time the originals plot actually starts there gonna be so op there gonna 1 tap everyone

1yr
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Trewan_Games

Good stuff and consistent. Keep up the good work.

1yr
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Dante00

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1yr
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Daoist5RvI4q

It’s good I just wish there was more chapters

1yr
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malhiharjot

It's actually very good.... keep it up....... .......,..............................................................................................................,..,''''''''''''......................

1yr
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LastGod

Forcing events a twisting the laws of magic so that you can have a "BAD GUY" they fight is lame. I would rather have them become OP then have a lame bad guy show down or him annoying them all the time.

1yr
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DaoistA5WRqX

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1yr
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Chaosgod24

The best originals fanfic I've read in a while, I am rooting for you author and keep up the good work, thank you [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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1yr
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swordsaint

Best originals fanfic I have read. I am ruting for u author u get what it means to be an originals. Hope u do not drop the story.🤞 good luck with the story (ALWAYS AND FOREVER!!!!!)

1yr
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CouchPotatoDandy

Once I found out on the first chapter how the MC got five wishes and he used some of them on his brothers, and how stupid his wishes on himself were, I know this wasn't going to be an all that great of a story. Unfortunately I was right. The story was boring without anything interesting, the MC was living more for his family then himself, and the conversations between characters was awkward. So I dropped this at chapter 5 The grammar was ok though.

12d
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Daoistje85Nx

Are there more coming? I like it so much

1mth
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Josh_Wilko_5256

keep this going it's an enjoyable read and I'm liking we're the novel is going so far

1mth
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NASIR_OP

yup it is very good but i have to complain bro you ruined this novel when you got into side characters a little too much also after they said system is updating it was never seen again and lastly you didn't specified power system in full detail like after time skip how powerful are they you should have written stats in systems like 10 stats for original family from real series and after you decide to give them boost every 10 year x5 then you should have written like 50 stats on every one of them and you should have added a little demonstration of their strength well whatever its good 👍

2mth
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Shawn_0858

Thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter!!!! Space space thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter

2mth
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Jordzfml_7

man i honestly think this is a great book , but the 3rd person pov writing ruins this book for me . most chapters just go like victor: niklaus: elijah: i prefer to either see the world through the mc's eyes or a narrator , not this constant naming dialogue which makes it seem as if i'm in a game. i'm still early into the book so i'm hoping it improves by the half-way mark

3mth
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El_Richochico

Best originals fantic ever!![img=update] more chapter please

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5mth
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Cody_Mohr

this has been the most inspiring story of the original so far I hope this continues

8mth
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Bam729
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Really good story[img=update] keep up with the story please

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9mth
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SuCiDe_shit

it's one of the best originals fanfic that I read The romance is good between every couple

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9mth
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elian_aquino

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10mth
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Cosmic_Wolf_4728

Besides the first couple of chapters with grammar this is an amazing story and I highly recommend !!

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10mth
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Leonardo_Henrique_0539

.........I'm really enjoying the story, I just wish there were more chapters haha. That said, could some kind soul inform me about some fanfics with male OCs in TVD or The Originals?.................

10mth
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DaoistVVKN4o

I like the fact that towards the future chapters, the writer started coming up with good backstories that were not in the TVD series. And also the fact that the writer is adding new characters and plot twists to the novel. But i feel like the writing and the backstory can be improved.

11mth
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DaoistVVKN4o

I like the fact that towards the future chapters, the writer started coming up with good backstories that were not in the TVD series. And also the fact that the writer is adding new characters and plot twists to the novel. But i feel like the writing and the backstory can be improved.

11mth
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DaoistDTW9tz

one of the best TVD/TO fanfic great story development and the most important thing (for me at least) stable update. highly recommend

11mth
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Daoist_Masrur

The only problem I have with this fanfic is that the updates are slow.I would recommend to absolutely read it.

11mth
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swordsaint

best originals fanfic I have read so far [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

11mth
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Lucid1dreams

pls we need more updates we are begging u

12mth
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Lucid1dreams

It's an interesting development of the original storyline.

1yr
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Raj_tiwari_1387

Loved the story 😍😍I just hope you don't leave the story unfinished😅😅 keep it up

1yr
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bravo_bansal

best originals ff i found better keep it up

1yr
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Night_shade_

u guys do realise by the time the originals plot actually starts there gonna be so op there gonna 1 tap everyone

1yr
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Trewan_Games

Good stuff and consistent. Keep up the good work.

1yr
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Dante00

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1yr
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Daoist5RvI4q

It’s good I just wish there was more chapters

1yr
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malhiharjot

It's actually very good.... keep it up....... .......,..............................................................................................................,..,''''''''''''......................

1yr
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LastGod

Forcing events a twisting the laws of magic so that you can have a "BAD GUY" they fight is lame. I would rather have them become OP then have a lame bad guy show down or him annoying them all the time.

1yr
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DaoistA5WRqX

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1yr
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