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レビューを書くBest originals fanfic I have read. I am ruting for u author u get what it means to be an originals. Hope u do not drop the story.🤞 good luck with the story (ALWAYS AND FOREVER!!!!!)
Once I found out on the first chapter how the MC got five wishes and he used some of them on his brothers, and how stupid his wishes on himself were, I know this wasn't going to be an all that great of a story. Unfortunately I was right. The story was boring without anything interesting, the MC was living more for his family then himself, and the conversations between characters was awkward. So I dropped this at chapter 5 The grammar was ok though.
yup it is very good but i have to complain bro you ruined this novel when you got into side characters a little too much also after they said system is updating it was never seen again and lastly you didn't specified power system in full detail like after time skip how powerful are they you should have written stats in systems like 10 stats for original family from real series and after you decide to give them boost every 10 year x5 then you should have written like 50 stats on every one of them and you should have added a little demonstration of their strength well whatever its good 👍
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man i honestly think this is a great book , but the 3rd person pov writing ruins this book for me . most chapters just go like victor: niklaus: elijah: i prefer to either see the world through the mc's eyes or a narrator , not this constant naming dialogue which makes it seem as if i'm in a game. i'm still early into the book so i'm hoping it improves by the half-way mark
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ネタバレを明かすBesides the first couple of chapters with grammar this is an amazing story and I highly recommend !!
.........I'm really enjoying the story, I just wish there were more chapters haha. That said, could some kind soul inform me about some fanfics with male OCs in TVD or The Originals?.................
I like the fact that towards the future chapters, the writer started coming up with good backstories that were not in the TVD series. And also the fact that the writer is adding new characters and plot twists to the novel. But i feel like the writing and the backstory can be improved.
I like the fact that towards the future chapters, the writer started coming up with good backstories that were not in the TVD series. And also the fact that the writer is adding new characters and plot twists to the novel. But i feel like the writing and the backstory can be improved.
one of the best TVD/TO fanfic great story development and the most important thing (for me at least) stable update. highly recommend
The only problem I have with this fanfic is that the updates are slow.I would recommend to absolutely read it.
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u guys do realise by the time the originals plot actually starts there gonna be so op there gonna 1 tap everyone
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It's actually very good.... keep it up....... .......,..............................................................................................................,..,''''''''''''......................
Forcing events a twisting the laws of magic so that you can have a "BAD GUY" they fight is lame. I would rather have them become OP then have a lame bad guy show down or him annoying them all the time.
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The best originals fanfic I've read in a while, I am rooting for you author and keep up the good work, thank you [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Best originals fanfic I have read. I am ruting for u author u get what it means to be an originals. Hope u do not drop the story.🤞 good luck with the story (ALWAYS AND FOREVER!!!!!)
Once I found out on the first chapter how the MC got five wishes and he used some of them on his brothers, and how stupid his wishes on himself were, I know this wasn't going to be an all that great of a story. Unfortunately I was right. The story was boring without anything interesting, the MC was living more for his family then himself, and the conversations between characters was awkward. So I dropped this at chapter 5 The grammar was ok though.
yup it is very good but i have to complain bro you ruined this novel when you got into side characters a little too much also after they said system is updating it was never seen again and lastly you didn't specified power system in full detail like after time skip how powerful are they you should have written stats in systems like 10 stats for original family from real series and after you decide to give them boost every 10 year x5 then you should have written like 50 stats on every one of them and you should have added a little demonstration of their strength well whatever its good 👍
Thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter!!!! Space space thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter thanks for the chapter
man i honestly think this is a great book , but the 3rd person pov writing ruins this book for me . most chapters just go like victor: niklaus: elijah: i prefer to either see the world through the mc's eyes or a narrator , not this constant naming dialogue which makes it seem as if i'm in a game. i'm still early into the book so i'm hoping it improves by the half-way mark
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ネタバレを明かすBesides the first couple of chapters with grammar this is an amazing story and I highly recommend !!
.........I'm really enjoying the story, I just wish there were more chapters haha. That said, could some kind soul inform me about some fanfics with male OCs in TVD or The Originals?.................
I like the fact that towards the future chapters, the writer started coming up with good backstories that were not in the TVD series. And also the fact that the writer is adding new characters and plot twists to the novel. But i feel like the writing and the backstory can be improved.
I like the fact that towards the future chapters, the writer started coming up with good backstories that were not in the TVD series. And also the fact that the writer is adding new characters and plot twists to the novel. But i feel like the writing and the backstory can be improved.
one of the best TVD/TO fanfic great story development and the most important thing (for me at least) stable update. highly recommend
The only problem I have with this fanfic is that the updates are slow.I would recommend to absolutely read it.
best originals fanfic I have read so far [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
u guys do realise by the time the originals plot actually starts there gonna be so op there gonna 1 tap everyone
.fuyg7fiddufufudufufugufufufufugufugurggggggggggutug7g8fufiffi8ff99ggg88g8gg88g8g8g8ggggggggggghfir8ee848r8cif7eue7ifig7gggr3d r8gifirururugufififi
It's actually very good.... keep it up....... .......,..............................................................................................................,..,''''''''''''......................
Forcing events a twisting the laws of magic so that you can have a "BAD GUY" they fight is lame. I would rather have them become OP then have a lame bad guy show down or him annoying them all the time.
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The best originals fanfic I've read in a while, I am rooting for you author and keep up the good work, thank you [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]