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Overall good reading material. But there's some very forced events. And some scenes just doesn't make sense. Like Esther's obsession over killing vampires, they didn't kill her or did any heinous things when she was alive. Freya being immortal witch also doesn't make sense.
My original review was erased by Webnovel’s janky phone UI, but here’s a tl;dr review. As of Ch 5: 2.8/5 There are frequent tense shifts and a flagrant lack of punctuation. I find this difficult to read, and many people who don’t have English as their first language will agree. The plot is somewhat novel but there are a few plotpoints that feel forced and cringe-inducing (his discussions with God and the events with MC’s father). This is a middle-of-the-pack webnovel, but I hope the author continues with it so they can improve their writing skills and grasp of English.
Great fic,I really enjoyed it I hope you don't drop it author, and I personally recommend anyone you have this fic to read, you will love it, it is completely different from the other fanfic out there.
author's shameless review.this fanfic is all about the OC and his siblings, not everything is going to follow the canon, I'm going to change something and save whoever I deem savable.I hope you enjoy your time.
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Overall good reading material. But there's some very forced events. And some scenes just doesn't make sense. Like Esther's obsession over killing vampires, they didn't kill her or did any heinous things when she was alive. Freya being immortal witch also doesn't make sense.
My original review was erased by Webnovel’s janky phone UI, but here’s a tl;dr review. As of Ch 5: 2.8/5 There are frequent tense shifts and a flagrant lack of punctuation. I find this difficult to read, and many people who don’t have English as their first language will agree. The plot is somewhat novel but there are a few plotpoints that feel forced and cringe-inducing (his discussions with God and the events with MC’s father). This is a middle-of-the-pack webnovel, but I hope the author continues with it so they can improve their writing skills and grasp of English.
Great fic,I really enjoyed it I hope you don't drop it author, and I personally recommend anyone you have this fic to read, you will love it, it is completely different from the other fanfic out there.
author's shameless review.this fanfic is all about the OC and his siblings, not everything is going to follow the canon, I'm going to change something and save whoever I deem savable.I hope you enjoy your time.
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