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Really good I like it it took me 3 days to get though it all I’ll be back in 100 chapters
One of the best fanfics I've read in awhile. A bit of a power fantasy and the MC has a tendency to act brashly. But considering his race is known for their strength not intelligence, its explainable. Well paced and innovative ideas. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Level1Goblin Excellent Fanfic You can do this DC fanfic immediately after Celebrity System In The DC Universe DC: Ultimatrix A young man wakes up in DC. Fortunately, he was given a gift: the Ultimatrix from Ben 10. He decides becoming a superhero is boring and formulaic; besides, being a villain sounds more fun. Harem Christina Bell Tanya Fox Roulette Catwoman Poison Ivy Harley Quinn Tracey Buxton Giganta Cheetah Silver Banshee Tala Circe Iolande Aga’po Ghia’ta Veronica Cale Emerald Empress Tsarita Talia Al Ghul Bleez Mongal Highmother Avia Lyssa Drak Soranik Natu
I've read 100 chapters so far and overall I found this fic to be between 3-3.5. First of all, the fic gets very boring in some places. It mostly happens in places where he performs heroic acts. where the normal life fic is good. Where the hero life fic goes bad. There are interesting events in his normal life and it made me read the fic up to 100 chapters. Except for a few things about the heroic life, most of it is very bad. There is a very bland hero's life narrative and there are almost no interesting events. My first complaint is that the MC pays too much attention to Justice League. Let me give an example. MC doesn't kill criminals, he imprisons them because he wants to be on good terms with the Justice League. If he's going to pay attention to Justice League, then he should spend more time with Justice League. He has very little interaction with the characters in Justice League. Another problem is that MC has a scary and cold appearance in his hero form, but his attitudes do not match this appearance. If his attitude is going to be like this, it would be better to adjust his appearance accordingly. I never liked it like this. and finally hila accepting the marriage proposal is where this fic ends for me. It wouldn't be a problem if barbara, kara or nina started a relationship with him. Because her relationships with the characters were developed and well written, it is very illogical to start with Hila, who only has a few scenes and very few interactions. Here the character proves to us that he is a slave of the system precisely because the system promises him a reward and he allows the system to intervene in his life. and he agrees to marry a girl he doesn't know very well. He could have refused and the system would have given him no punishment. In fact, she could have accepted the marriage proposal after improving their relationship, but she did not do this, she saw that it would be a reward and accepted it directly. He started Harem from the worst choice. I love reading harem fics, but here the harem started with the worst choice and this caused me to finish the fic. Anyway, there are a few points I don't like, but I don't feel like going on too long. In general, in my opinion, the fic is very bland and boring except for a few interesting things in terms of story. I didn't like it but you might like it. So if you're curious, you can try it. maybe you like it. Thank you to the writer for your efforts. In general, I didn't like it, but since I saw your effort here, I will give this fic 4 points.(Translated)
Writing Quality: ⭐⭐ - The writing is okay, but there are issues, particularly with the excessive singing, which becomes annoying. Story Development: ⭐⭐⭐ - The story is okay at best. The romance is mediocre, and the plot progression can feel slow. Character Design: ⭐⭐⭐ - The characters are neither particularly good nor bad. The main character is mainly defined by being a singer and a McDonald's walking billboard. Updating Stability: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ - The updates are frequent and consistent. World Background: ⭐⭐⭐ - The world-building is decent but nothing extraordinary.
the novel concept is cool and interesting but when it comes to chp50++ mc become more and more stupid even if he already have perfect memori recal and he sometimes don't know how strong he is and the power up plot is kinda suck 😞
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is it just the overpowered tag or is there weak to strong you just forgot to add, i really dont like mc's who are just op at the start without doing anything, so telling me would be very much appreciated.
100 chapters, I've read this for 100 chapter. Consistently saying to myself "I like the system and the idea so let's keep reading " but honestly I can't do so anymore. The last 3 chapters 97 to 100 felt like a sausage fest who's only reason to be there was to pull at the mcs ego and harem. The story doesn't delve deep into any character or plot line and there is no tension because of how overwhelmingly meaningless all conflict feels
This is awesome! Interesting premise with a fun "system". I wish there was more novels with music as a theme.
nice story I highly recommend it, but the random singing is not for me🗿🤷🏿♂️
hello your prison gave me the idea of creating a character who guards a prison, but I also had the idea of making him multiversal. Dexter Yagami, the jailer butcher, a man who after imprisoning supervillains cuts them up and tears them into pieces. but I don't know how to write, does the idea interest you?
This novel is so good, I love the singing parts the best and the interactions between characters 🔥🔥
So since he has Vegeta body, the protagonist is a bald dwarf?lalalaallaalalalalllaallaallalalaalalalalalalaallaalaaalaalalaalaalalaaalalaaalalallalalaalalalalalaalalallalalalalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalLalalalalalalLallalalalalaquem traduzir deu o cu
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idk, But this is a good ff, I love how this turn, And as a reader, I know I like this ff because i only need 2-3 hours to 1-51 so yeah..So A Perfect FF You Give, A Perfect Score You Get
it is good, but it is not for me, it seems more like a musical than a fanfic.
great story but i dont like that the mc is not training even though he is a saiyan and has Vegeta's talent.
I liked your story very much.... Great novel👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The character is fine , Just don't make him a HYPOCRITE Like Batman. If the MC faces villains like Joker, Use Common Sense like Send Him to a Secret Island where only the MC Knows or use his victims to haunt him for eternity. An example would be giving joker the Death sentence by Using/Bribing Politicians and if Batman disagrees, have the ghost of his victims haunt him forever. Batman is as guilty and Delusional as the Joker. They both belong in an asylum. P.S.: I like this cover pic better.
it's a good story but the dialogue feels forced(currently on chp13 iIjist had to come here cause i cringed out around the Batgirl thing)
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Really good I like it it took me 3 days to get though it all I’ll be back in 100 chapters
One of the best fanfics I've read in awhile. A bit of a power fantasy and the MC has a tendency to act brashly. But considering his race is known for their strength not intelligence, its explainable. Well paced and innovative ideas. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Level1Goblin Excellent Fanfic You can do this DC fanfic immediately after Celebrity System In The DC Universe DC: Ultimatrix A young man wakes up in DC. Fortunately, he was given a gift: the Ultimatrix from Ben 10. He decides becoming a superhero is boring and formulaic; besides, being a villain sounds more fun. Harem Christina Bell Tanya Fox Roulette Catwoman Poison Ivy Harley Quinn Tracey Buxton Giganta Cheetah Silver Banshee Tala Circe Iolande Aga’po Ghia’ta Veronica Cale Emerald Empress Tsarita Talia Al Ghul Bleez Mongal Highmother Avia Lyssa Drak Soranik Natu
I've read 100 chapters so far and overall I found this fic to be between 3-3.5. First of all, the fic gets very boring in some places. It mostly happens in places where he performs heroic acts. where the normal life fic is good. Where the hero life fic goes bad. There are interesting events in his normal life and it made me read the fic up to 100 chapters. Except for a few things about the heroic life, most of it is very bad. There is a very bland hero's life narrative and there are almost no interesting events. My first complaint is that the MC pays too much attention to Justice League. Let me give an example. MC doesn't kill criminals, he imprisons them because he wants to be on good terms with the Justice League. If he's going to pay attention to Justice League, then he should spend more time with Justice League. He has very little interaction with the characters in Justice League. Another problem is that MC has a scary and cold appearance in his hero form, but his attitudes do not match this appearance. If his attitude is going to be like this, it would be better to adjust his appearance accordingly. I never liked it like this. and finally hila accepting the marriage proposal is where this fic ends for me. It wouldn't be a problem if barbara, kara or nina started a relationship with him. Because her relationships with the characters were developed and well written, it is very illogical to start with Hila, who only has a few scenes and very few interactions. Here the character proves to us that he is a slave of the system precisely because the system promises him a reward and he allows the system to intervene in his life. and he agrees to marry a girl he doesn't know very well. He could have refused and the system would have given him no punishment. In fact, she could have accepted the marriage proposal after improving their relationship, but she did not do this, she saw that it would be a reward and accepted it directly. He started Harem from the worst choice. I love reading harem fics, but here the harem started with the worst choice and this caused me to finish the fic. Anyway, there are a few points I don't like, but I don't feel like going on too long. In general, in my opinion, the fic is very bland and boring except for a few interesting things in terms of story. I didn't like it but you might like it. So if you're curious, you can try it. maybe you like it. Thank you to the writer for your efforts. In general, I didn't like it, but since I saw your effort here, I will give this fic 4 points.(Translated)
Writing Quality: ⭐⭐ - The writing is okay, but there are issues, particularly with the excessive singing, which becomes annoying. Story Development: ⭐⭐⭐ - The story is okay at best. The romance is mediocre, and the plot progression can feel slow. Character Design: ⭐⭐⭐ - The characters are neither particularly good nor bad. The main character is mainly defined by being a singer and a McDonald's walking billboard. Updating Stability: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ - The updates are frequent and consistent. World Background: ⭐⭐⭐ - The world-building is decent but nothing extraordinary.
the novel concept is cool and interesting but when it comes to chp50++ mc become more and more stupid even if he already have perfect memori recal and he sometimes don't know how strong he is and the power up plot is kinda suck 😞
ネタバレを明かす is it just the overpowered tag or is there weak to strong you just forgot to add, i really dont like mc's who are just op at the start without doing anything, so telling me would be very much appreciated.
100 chapters, I've read this for 100 chapter. Consistently saying to myself "I like the system and the idea so let's keep reading " but honestly I can't do so anymore. The last 3 chapters 97 to 100 felt like a sausage fest who's only reason to be there was to pull at the mcs ego and harem. The story doesn't delve deep into any character or plot line and there is no tension because of how overwhelmingly meaningless all conflict feels
This is awesome! Interesting premise with a fun "system". I wish there was more novels with music as a theme.
nice story I highly recommend it, but the random singing is not for me🗿🤷🏿♂️
hello your prison gave me the idea of creating a character who guards a prison, but I also had the idea of making him multiversal. Dexter Yagami, the jailer butcher, a man who after imprisoning supervillains cuts them up and tears them into pieces. but I don't know how to write, does the idea interest you?
This novel is so good, I love the singing parts the best and the interactions between characters 🔥🔥
So since he has Vegeta body, the protagonist is a bald dwarf?lalalaallaalalalalllaallaallalalaalalalalalalaallaalaaalaalalaalaalalaaalalaaalalallalalaalalalalalaalalallalalalalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalLalalalalalalLallalalalalaquem traduzir deu o cu
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idk, But this is a good ff, I love how this turn, And as a reader, I know I like this ff because i only need 2-3 hours to 1-51 so yeah..So A Perfect FF You Give, A Perfect Score You Get
it is good, but it is not for me, it seems more like a musical than a fanfic.
great story but i dont like that the mc is not training even though he is a saiyan and has Vegeta's talent.
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The character is fine , Just don't make him a HYPOCRITE Like Batman. If the MC faces villains like Joker, Use Common Sense like Send Him to a Secret Island where only the MC Knows or use his victims to haunt him for eternity. An example would be giving joker the Death sentence by Using/Bribing Politicians and if Batman disagrees, have the ghost of his victims haunt him forever. Batman is as guilty and Delusional as the Joker. They both belong in an asylum. P.S.: I like this cover pic better.
it's a good story but the dialogue feels forced(currently on chp13 iIjist had to come here cause i cringed out around the Batgirl thing)
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MC got some hero complex as he saves a random boy in the very first chapter.