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A multiversal story starting from ben 10 world, with Kevin 11 as the MC.
P/S: Please read the tags and the Author note chapter before starting the story
P/2: I dont own the pic in the book cover or any character in this novel except for some OCs
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I really liked the fanfiction but I have some questions, the Saturdays will appear? since they had a crossover episode with ben 10 in the omniverse series and the next universe that the MC can go to could be the one of generator rex since this universe also had a crossover episode with ben in the ultimate alien series, but I don't know if it would be very useful since the power of this universe comes from machines and not from DNA itself
Really liking it so far. Finally found a good fanfiction where the mc is Kevin 11. Thought his powers were dope so hope author continues this story!
It's a great read for me and i hope author don't drop this book. I am waiting for the time when kevin will have all alien transformation and explore multiverse.
The story is good.But please add Gwen in the harem i mean I liked this ship in the original always even when they introduce other male interested in gwen i thought it as annoying.So as a Geniune Fan i want you to keep this reationship but at end its your novel your vision i have no complaints whatsoever
An incredible concept of Omnitrix revolutionary in several aspects, infinitely superior to most (Displays the time). So far I'm liking the story and I'm waiting for more chapters, I hope Kevin absorbs echo echo supreme he's my favorite alien[img=recommend][img=update]
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Overall it's decent. He is smart and the story is promising. Hoping to see unique evolutions and development, perhaps some exploration of other worlds, alliances, alternative conclusions, or missed opportunities to the original storyline arcs.
Overall pretty good, the mc was what was written on the synopsis and more, looking forward for more.
Really liking it so far. Finally found a good fanfiction where the mc is Kevin 11. Thought his powers were dope so hope author continues this story!
I love it so far, no constricting morals. Though I'd like it if he just does thing for his own benefit, including teaming up with Ben if the earth was to be destroyed. What's the point of power if you can't enjoy life, and please absorb that energy vampire from alien force, Gwen's anodite genes as well. Or you could become a galactic or even a multiverse empire but too troublesome if he just wants power and enjoy life.
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Muy bueno.Pero faltan muchas cosas. Esta historia muestra mucho potencial. espero que sigan con el buen trabajo.
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The protagonist is a villain with a consistent personality and strategical planning but lacks a good backstory and doesn't have clear beliefs, motivations, and longterm goal. The writing is average but the fights are good with minor grammar mistakes. The explainations about the protagonist's are abilities are logical, but about his transformations there isnt anything highly exciting so far, him getting some weak beasts dna is not that interesting. The writing and descriptions are fine but the world is somewhat bland. The plot is decent, it mainly focus on him try to evolve his abilities but apart from that there arent any notable events or development. The sidecharacters are well presented but there is anyone likeable or interesting on the protagonist's side.