Hogwarts: Start Fusion Phoenix Bloodline

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kenzel

I who have subjected myself in testing many different poisons(Chinese Novel) have already grasp a portion of the Dao of Poison Resistance. I think I can handle this one...wish me luck and I wish you luck my fellow Poison Testers.

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NightCrown

Story might be good, but it's unreadable. Grammar 🤮🤮🤮

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Roktah

the synopsis alone made me feel sick to my stomach. seems like a face slapping novel and i'd guess its a chinese translation.

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Guy_Slade

The FF story is decent, the MC has a system that lets him merge bloodlines into his own, which he uses to become stronger, the house he has been sorted in doesn't become the MC's total personality is great, and the fact he is a fairly interesting MC helps. As far as the system goes the way the points are awarded is not too fast or slow so we can see the MC grow at a decent pace without it being overwhelming but not so slow it is boring to read. As far as the translation goes the names of some spells, locations and people are translated wrong, but anyone who has read HP will know what they are actually ment to be, so it is still pretty easy to read. As far as the face slapping goes some of it exists but it flows well decently rather than the usual forced senarios we usually end up getting with face slapping. As of chapter 130 I am enjoying this novel and would recommend it.

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I_am_Silent

CHINA, enough said. LALALALALALA

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Pillsaint

grammar and sentence structire makes the story unreadable.

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Control_FREAK

I read I read the whole thing. After 10 chaps my mind just go silent mode...then as the chaps progress it just remained without emotions. Not to exaggerate but the ff is idk time consuming if u ask. Worth to read...No. Bing chilling is intense in this one. If you have already mind-bonked by MTL ffs then Congo ..I welcome to hell. If not then newbies stay away. The MC is typical bing-chilling protagonist. He would go jade beauty and stuff. People may go pretty boi and stuff on him. Sometimes I even qstion my sanity well whatever. Many grammatical errors. Low translation quality. If you are brave enough...you can read it few chaps..then leave it. And if you think it's interesting then...I have a doctors number I can share it you. Overall experience: Ok, One time read is applicable. Ps. A quick remainder. Not forcing anyone to read this but try it yourself some few chaps. Not like it, then leave it. Cause your own experience is what matters. Still be warned. Hope you guys have wonderful day👍

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Young_fruit_Smiley

Here is the hack that allows me translate this mtl into readable thing in chatGPT. Here are the updated 7 rules of conversion according to the Harry Potter theme (7ROCAHPT): 1. Translate the text from its original language to English and check for any grammatical mistakes. Ensure that the sentences make sense and are in tune with the Harry Potter world. 2. Increase the word count by additionally 300 words by incorporating Harry Potter-related words and themes. 3. Use theme-related words, such as using "trolls" instead of "giants," to ensure the text is in tune with the Harry Potter world. 4. Increase the number of paragraphs, if possible, to make the text more readable and engaging. 5. Change the sentence structure to be in tune with the Harry Potter world theme. 6. Add additional details wherever possible to make emotions and interactions more in tune with the Harry Potter world. 7. Do not omit or delete any kind of information before or after the conversion. .

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Mitchell_Keays

you suck.

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Phantom4212

I have read this story already and I will read it again start of 1st year chapter 8 2nd year chapter 134 3rd year chapter 157 4th year chapter 252 5th year chapter 301 6th year chapter 358 7th year chapter 425 Professor year 1 chapter 462 Professor year 2 chapter 613

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AaatEae

where can I find the RAWS? I feel like chatgpt will do a better job translating this

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Josden

One might think that this Chinese translation is bad but surprisingly not. Of course it's a lot of mistakes and the story has a lot of mistakes, but if you ignore it, you find that the story holds up, does not have racism and respects as much as possible the original work. The MC is Op but gradually. Although at some point it raised my eyebrow( it can happen to the author to contradict himself) it's pretty acceptable

LV 6

BloodRaven

The story is great and even if it is a Chinese web novel it still is a good fan fiction. The biggest problem of this novel is the translation of the names, it s*cks. You can read it although it is not easy, but the story itself is good.

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Spinky

The idea is good. However, the writing quality needs to be improved. I am getting an aneurysm from trying to read the broken English.

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LGK_maore

such one of a kind harrypotter fanfiction 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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kydros

The story is good, but the writing is awful. The translation is not correct, it must have come from Google Translate.

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Insane_Pumpkin

I knew it was gonna be bad but when i read the first chapter and seen the "Harry Potter what bad things have you done" i died... Good luck to anyone trying to read it.

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Tyler_Baker_3884

first stop I love your book we don't get a lot of times where the person doesn't have has magic and then they gain it I will say this I am hoping you make him a gay character we don't get a lot of LGBT fanfiction especially on here most the time the characters are straight and everything I think it'd be really cool for that also I love your writing style also I think it would be really cool for you to make him regard Dumbledore with caution but also that's up to you I will say this I love your book and I will continue reading it hopefully you do not discontinue it there's been a lot of good Fanfictions on here we're either it's a descendant of Grindelwald or it's a serious black type thing so I'm really hoping that you continue love your story think it's really beautiful

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Ashish_Jambhulkar

come on man why the hell would stop writing chapter .... the story is really good

This was a great Hogwarts fanfic and I really liked reading this as the story progressed it got better in my opinion I only hate how there's no more chapters.