Harry Potter: The Golden Viper

LV 13

SuohDaoist

honestly was great till the author started glazing up harry and forced the mc to start looking after harry and essentially adopting him. again, another author who fails to realize most readers are tired of fanfics that focus on harry or give harry so much screen time and importance, they like the wizarding world and lore more than Harry. why even bother to write if you're just gonna make it about harry again 🤦🏻‍♂️

LV 4

ReadFalcon

Not horribly written, good for a non-native writer. But lacks the nuances of English language and culture. Doesn't do justice to the source material, just uses them as a setting.

LV 2

FadeKnight

This is an excellent story. I love the main character. I love the different perspective as an investigator. Writing is great. Updates are fast. the way this is going you’re going to be at the top soon. I’ll see you there.

LV 4

Siuuu

This is probably one of the best harry potter novel i have read. The starting chapters are quite confusing and there are some grammar and spelling errors. it gets better with new chapters. Dumbledore is not shown as a saint or a complete evil guy, why he does somethings and other answers are also told in the story. MC has good relationship with snape and the plot twist at the last chapters was one of the smoothest and best i have ever read.The Mc's backstory is not fully explained but in the new chapters he's outside of hogwarts so maybe we will know about it. But the Mc's memory and his knowledge about harry potter world is in a mystery and gets confusing maybe the author is planning another twist or something like that.

LV 4

Nacho_Ramallo

I like the plot of the novel. I like the plot of the novel. I like the plot of the novel. I like the plot of the novel. I like the plot of the novel.

LV 3

MrSpazz

Honestly can’t stand looking at these horrible reviews one of the best fics I’ve read. The fact that he doesn’t have memory makes it 10x better

LV 13

Left_Nut_Of_Madara

Its a good story however there are some parts that make me feel like i wasted my time reading them so i believe the author needs to practice more as the best way to describe it is those parts feel super sloppy/rushed and not well merged into the story giving it that feeling of pointlessness.

LV 14

ShadowGovernment

One of the most put together and thought out books ive ever read. Well done author please continue to write.

LV 1

Crowned_Sage

I'll be honest I love the story. Love the main character. However it feels like the story is being dragged a lot. With a person like the MC he should have already figured out what the monster is.

LV 10

Daoist_Dan

I definitely recommend giving this story a try. Pretty messy review section I know. But this is one of those fanfics that has something special to it, so if you click with it I think you will have a good time reading. A hidden gem for many ff readers.

LV 3

KurisuJei

This is the most unique fanfic I've ever encountered in HP so far and I'm not that stingy to give a review, this deserves a good review for how potentially "best" this would be. Hoping this would have longer chapters. bless you Author-nim, wishing you good luck and good health to write more and to give us more surprises.

LV 2

I_hate_romance

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LV 3

Teddy_Ejendens

The story gets too boring when it shifts its pov's on and Hermione. You should focus more on the powerhouses because they're way more interesting. Perhaps a Grindelwald interaction or another adventure through different magical communities. This story is at its peak during the mc's adventures outside, especially one concerning the ancient wizards. Cliodna is also an interesting character. You should include her more like making arcs concerning her and her background(the druids). Making her the ship to the mc is also an interesting idea, but I think it's better if there is no romance.

LV 4

ash69420

I love the Writing Quality and the story very much.It's just the fact that when the POV changes to Harry, it feels too slow as we don't get to see the MC much , specially in the last arc and this feels frustrating.

LV 2

Arion_Sturmklinge

Great book, Creativ story, Good grammar, Nice story flow, Overall just a great story

LV 2

DaoistPjrmKa

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LV 3

Persis

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LV 3

_Kal_

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LV 3

HaremHater

Its a very good fic try it out………………………….