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Its good really, the only thing bothers me is that the simpin for Scarlett Johansson and other establish actresses in todays timeline, while back in 1996 they were basically children, overall good novel
AUTHOR THIS NOVEL IS FUN, IF IT WAS NOT FUN WHY THESE MORONS ARE HERE. LOVE THE CHEMISTRY BETWEEN HI AND ANGELINA JOLIE..SHE NEEDS TO BE CERTER WIFE FOR MC AND THIS NOVLE CAN GO FART 3000 CHAPTERS IF YOU DO NOT QUIT. CMON THIS IS FUN NO BS THANK YOU.
Read Till (265 ch/ 360+) Bad things about the novel (since the good points were already covered by others): Terrible choice of female leads. The author seems to have a netorase fetish... 🤮 The main character lacks masculinity. He isn't possessive enough, he willingly films kissing and nude scenes of his girlfriend despite having the power to erase them. Now for the "what if factor," the reason I even bothered to read this novel: it's essentially just piracy. The protagonist isn't someone trying to make meaningful changes. He's ambitious but ultimately cowardly. From my perspective, he’s just all talk and no action. There’s also too much narration and barely any dialogue. In some chapters, the author drones on and on without a break.Too much yapping.. Lack of descriptive writing: Personally, I’m a fan of sensory and atmospheric details, but this novel seriously lacks them. Lack of world-building: I know some readers might disagree, but I felt the world-building was insufficient and underwhelming. The protagonist is foolish when it comes to choosing a life partner. Right now, his girlfriend is someone who was previously married, and I dislike Mylf which is a major reason why this story doesn’t work for me. The main issue, however, is that the story has become boring. The central "what if" premise has been forgotten. The protagonist hasn't changed anything he's just become like the very people he was supposed to defy. Lastly, I preferred Reese Witherspoon more, and Jessica was also a good choice, but instead, the protagonist chose to being a dishwasher. Despite all these flaws, I can’t bring myself to give this one star, especially since I genuinely enjoyed it at the beginning. I’m giving it three stars, and that’s me being generous. Good luck to the author.
dude update faster man it kinda taste bad when i read it and when i want to farm the update chp but it slow come on brother keep it up [img=recommend]
👏👏👏👏🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🤩🤩🤩🤩great novel far better than any Hollywood fanfiction out there if u r in search of Hollywood fanfiction this is very good 👍👍😊😊
There was a lot to tell about this story, but I threw it in the trash after 160 chapters. The reason is that the author wants drama for development of MC and he can not write it (and I do not like dramas, in life enough shit, so also the author makes his own, I do not need)). Also MC can be swollen in shit and then fight the consequences (for example, he got drunk after breaking up with his mother not at home, but in a regular bar where he was caught by a girl hunting him. In the end he "broke up" with the first "girl" and signed a contract for a relationship for 1 year with this scum). I never liked drinking and smoking MC. This is the main reason. (I also noticed that the author repeats several times the same thing.) Why even focus on alcohol and smoking? Self-destruction and degradation is not cool. It’s just repulsive and frustrating. Jews are full of the leadership of Hollywood and what else, why mention it again and again? The author has some kind of a quirk? Why is the MC’s open and casual relationship with girls? What does the author want? Do they want to try more women? I don't like this tendention. Also I noticed that the author repeats several times the same thing, as if he thinks we are stupid (he just picks up the number of words, because. not thought what to write, lol). I especially "like" when the author disappears and reports the reason after the fact, i.e. he does not care about readers. He also gives the right to choose in his fanfic subscribers with Patreon. And also advertises his Patreon regularly.
Гавно, и автор видимо куколд так как любят когда его персонажей предают или используют. аоаоаоаоаоаооаоаоааоаоаооооааоаоаапнш63щгкшкжшежкжшежкженжнщжещщнющнющнющнющздддпюдпюдюдеы
No patreon do autor está quase nos 500 capítulos essa novel, mas aqui ele lança quando lembra. uma pena, vemos diversos autores que mesmo com sua história bem avançada no patreon, eles se dão ao trabalho de listas vários capítulos nessa plataforma, programada para lançar dia e hora marcada.
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Usually i write a detailed review But this is good .................. there are many miniscule mistakes but the story is engaging So /// i recommend it.
It's a great attempt by the author. It's hard to believe they started learning English grammar at 18. They should be proud of themself for coming so far. I envy and appreciate such dedicated and talented ppl. That being said, the plot of this story is quite good and I don't have any complaints regarding grammar. What's offputting to me is the Main character. He's such an unlikable and irritating person. He keeps repeating how scared he is of women after his ex wife cheated on him and tried to ruin his life, yet he doesn't stop simping. I don't like harem but it would make more sense if he had casual flings and one night stands instead of clinging on to Reese Witherspoon and reminding the readers how he's intimidated by a relationship with a woman. Make him gay instead or asexual but ffs stop repeating the same thing. I love how the mc swims against the tides to complete his films and make them successful, however the story always is a stalemate when he turns into a simp.
As a fellow Filipino, sincerely hoping for you to be back, these stories are wasted without updates 😢
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Estou amando essa história, esse universo continental está top demais, não vejo a hora por mais capítulos, continua com seu ótimo trabalho escritor 👍
hmm, sometimes the dialogues are really bad between characters, like it breaks the immersion for me. Hollywood insiders are people who have put on a show their whole lives, so them saying extremely unrealistic things just doesn't feel right for me
Chap243................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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"Bro, the fic is really good, you can see the amount of effort the author puts into their writing. The research to create a fic like this must be extensive. Are there mistakes? Yes, of course, but they are totally passable, nothing too serious. The grammar is good, the details are well done, and the MC has only gotten with the hottest women so far. However, he's not the typical degenerate MC. The author promised a Hollywood-level fic and delivered exactly that. To me, what the author is doing is a true masterpiece. I only have one thing to say: 'let the author cook, because I want more!'"
Imagine a 60 year old man working his whole life on film Sat/ film making but act like he has seen props and film star first time. Even after seeing harsh reality of Hollywood he saw actor and actress his role model after he return in the past Like a youth who just enters the society
Any author that admits that they never eat he’d something but still write about it deserve the 1/5 ratings. Literally says that they never watched Blair witch project but they decided to write about it lol nahhhhh I ain’t reading this garbage story any longer. Waste of time and if I knew you irl then I’d knock you out for wasting my time you POS
To be honest storys about Hollywood directors are stupid. If I haven’t seen the movie it’s fr just a lot of reading and it’s boring asf and I’m not gonna go to watch a movie for a FanFic so you should maybe just do a story about a failed musician reincarnating in the past when he was a child give him a system or photographic memory. and pick songs to fit his story and his feelings.
the drama is very poorly written. especially the the judges and his ex-wife, the dialogue is so unrealistic it broke all immersion. this happens again and again, none of the antagonists act like real people and the romance is terrible.
I like it. Especially something new, like its own cinematic universe, even if it consists of existing films. Of course, I wouldn't mind bout' the author's own action movie, it's quite difficult.
dropped at 7 chapters Author could easily explain why he knows word for word everything from a script The author could easily have made it an alternate reality that removes most of the issues he/she doesn't people commented about this myself included and Author DOESN'T RESPOND TO ADDRESS THEM
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Its good really, the only thing bothers me is that the simpin for Scarlett Johansson and other establish actresses in todays timeline, while back in 1996 they were basically children, overall good novel
AUTHOR THIS NOVEL IS FUN, IF IT WAS NOT FUN WHY THESE MORONS ARE HERE. LOVE THE CHEMISTRY BETWEEN HI AND ANGELINA JOLIE..SHE NEEDS TO BE CERTER WIFE FOR MC AND THIS NOVLE CAN GO FART 3000 CHAPTERS IF YOU DO NOT QUIT. CMON THIS IS FUN NO BS THANK YOU.
Read Till (265 ch/ 360+) Bad things about the novel (since the good points were already covered by others): Terrible choice of female leads. The author seems to have a netorase fetish... 🤮 The main character lacks masculinity. He isn't possessive enough, he willingly films kissing and nude scenes of his girlfriend despite having the power to erase them. Now for the "what if factor," the reason I even bothered to read this novel: it's essentially just piracy. The protagonist isn't someone trying to make meaningful changes. He's ambitious but ultimately cowardly. From my perspective, he’s just all talk and no action. There’s also too much narration and barely any dialogue. In some chapters, the author drones on and on without a break.Too much yapping.. Lack of descriptive writing: Personally, I’m a fan of sensory and atmospheric details, but this novel seriously lacks them. Lack of world-building: I know some readers might disagree, but I felt the world-building was insufficient and underwhelming. The protagonist is foolish when it comes to choosing a life partner. Right now, his girlfriend is someone who was previously married, and I dislike Mylf which is a major reason why this story doesn’t work for me. The main issue, however, is that the story has become boring. The central "what if" premise has been forgotten. The protagonist hasn't changed anything he's just become like the very people he was supposed to defy. Lastly, I preferred Reese Witherspoon more, and Jessica was also a good choice, but instead, the protagonist chose to being a dishwasher. Despite all these flaws, I can’t bring myself to give this one star, especially since I genuinely enjoyed it at the beginning. I’m giving it three stars, and that’s me being generous. Good luck to the author.
dude update faster man it kinda taste bad when i read it and when i want to farm the update chp but it slow come on brother keep it up [img=recommend]
👏👏👏👏🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🤩🤩🤩🤩great novel far better than any Hollywood fanfiction out there if u r in search of Hollywood fanfiction this is very good 👍👍😊😊
There was a lot to tell about this story, but I threw it in the trash after 160 chapters. The reason is that the author wants drama for development of MC and he can not write it (and I do not like dramas, in life enough shit, so also the author makes his own, I do not need)). Also MC can be swollen in shit and then fight the consequences (for example, he got drunk after breaking up with his mother not at home, but in a regular bar where he was caught by a girl hunting him. In the end he "broke up" with the first "girl" and signed a contract for a relationship for 1 year with this scum). I never liked drinking and smoking MC. This is the main reason. (I also noticed that the author repeats several times the same thing.) Why even focus on alcohol and smoking? Self-destruction and degradation is not cool. It’s just repulsive and frustrating. Jews are full of the leadership of Hollywood and what else, why mention it again and again? The author has some kind of a quirk? Why is the MC’s open and casual relationship with girls? What does the author want? Do they want to try more women? I don't like this tendention. Also I noticed that the author repeats several times the same thing, as if he thinks we are stupid (he just picks up the number of words, because. not thought what to write, lol). I especially "like" when the author disappears and reports the reason after the fact, i.e. he does not care about readers. He also gives the right to choose in his fanfic subscribers with Patreon. And also advertises his Patreon regularly.
Гавно, и автор видимо куколд так как любят когда его персонажей предают или используют. аоаоаоаоаоаооаоаоааоаоаооооааоаоаапнш63щгкшкжшежкжшежкженжнщжещщнющнющнющнющздддпюдпюдюдеы
No patreon do autor está quase nos 500 capítulos essa novel, mas aqui ele lança quando lembra. uma pena, vemos diversos autores que mesmo com sua história bem avançada no patreon, eles se dão ao trabalho de listas vários capítulos nessa plataforma, programada para lançar dia e hora marcada.
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Usually i write a detailed review But this is good .................. there are many miniscule mistakes but the story is engaging So /// i recommend it.
It's a great attempt by the author. It's hard to believe they started learning English grammar at 18. They should be proud of themself for coming so far. I envy and appreciate such dedicated and talented ppl. That being said, the plot of this story is quite good and I don't have any complaints regarding grammar. What's offputting to me is the Main character. He's such an unlikable and irritating person. He keeps repeating how scared he is of women after his ex wife cheated on him and tried to ruin his life, yet he doesn't stop simping. I don't like harem but it would make more sense if he had casual flings and one night stands instead of clinging on to Reese Witherspoon and reminding the readers how he's intimidated by a relationship with a woman. Make him gay instead or asexual but ffs stop repeating the same thing. I love how the mc swims against the tides to complete his films and make them successful, however the story always is a stalemate when he turns into a simp.
As a fellow Filipino, sincerely hoping for you to be back, these stories are wasted without updates 😢
.....................................................................................................................................................
Estou amando essa história, esse universo continental está top demais, não vejo a hora por mais capítulos, continua com seu ótimo trabalho escritor 👍
hmm, sometimes the dialogues are really bad between characters, like it breaks the immersion for me. Hollywood insiders are people who have put on a show their whole lives, so them saying extremely unrealistic things just doesn't feel right for me
Chap243................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
ネタバレを明かす "Bro, the fic is really good, you can see the amount of effort the author puts into their writing. The research to create a fic like this must be extensive. Are there mistakes? Yes, of course, but they are totally passable, nothing too serious. The grammar is good, the details are well done, and the MC has only gotten with the hottest women so far. However, he's not the typical degenerate MC. The author promised a Hollywood-level fic and delivered exactly that. To me, what the author is doing is a true masterpiece. I only have one thing to say: 'let the author cook, because I want more!'"
Imagine a 60 year old man working his whole life on film Sat/ film making but act like he has seen props and film star first time. Even after seeing harsh reality of Hollywood he saw actor and actress his role model after he return in the past Like a youth who just enters the society
Any author that admits that they never eat he’d something but still write about it deserve the 1/5 ratings. Literally says that they never watched Blair witch project but they decided to write about it lol nahhhhh I ain’t reading this garbage story any longer. Waste of time and if I knew you irl then I’d knock you out for wasting my time you POS
To be honest storys about Hollywood directors are stupid. If I haven’t seen the movie it’s fr just a lot of reading and it’s boring asf and I’m not gonna go to watch a movie for a FanFic so you should maybe just do a story about a failed musician reincarnating in the past when he was a child give him a system or photographic memory. and pick songs to fit his story and his feelings.
the drama is very poorly written. especially the the judges and his ex-wife, the dialogue is so unrealistic it broke all immersion. this happens again and again, none of the antagonists act like real people and the romance is terrible.
I like it. Especially something new, like its own cinematic universe, even if it consists of existing films. Of course, I wouldn't mind bout' the author's own action movie, it's quite difficult.
dropped at 7 chapters Author could easily explain why he knows word for word everything from a script The author could easily have made it an alternate reality that removes most of the issues he/she doesn't people commented about this myself included and Author DOESN'T RESPOND TO ADDRESS THEM
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